Aa jaa tujh ko pukaaray...ansh FF (last part updated )on 15/10 pg 18 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 8
the next day jagya came to check anandi."shiv..ajj sham tak tum isse ghar le ga sakte ho...pata hai kaha tha ki dhoo aur din yaha ruk na padega..but now she looks perfectly alright.(shiv..by today evening you can take her home...i know that i told that she has to stay here fofr two more days..but now she looks perfectly alright.)telling this jagya went out.


"hum jaldi humare ghar jayenge."shiv told to anandi."meri lado uss ghar mein kabhi nahi jayegi...tum aur tumhara parivar ne meri lado ki jeena mushkil kar di hai...ab woh baadi haveli jayegi..aur wahi rahengi..)"(my lado won't go to that house...you and your family have made my lado's life difficult...now she will go to baadi haveli and she will stay there.)sumitra told while coming in."lekin maa..."(but maa...)before shiv could complete"mhuje kuch nahi suna.."(i don't want to listen to anything.)sumitra told.


"maa..."anandi called her.she went near her."haan lado..""agar mein kud waha jana chati hoon tab app mhuje jane nahi denge?mein shiv se bahoot pyaar karti hoon aur unke bina nahi rahe sakti..."(if i willingly want to go..will you not allow me?i love shiv every much and can't live without him.)anandi told sumitra."lado..."before she could complete. "haan ..maa. .manta hoon ki isme meri galti hai..ek bhai honke naathe mhuje keh karna pada...mein bhi anandi ke bina nahi raha sakta maa.."(yes..maa..i accept that it is my mistake..being a brother i had to do this...and even i cannot live without anandi.)shiv told."mein shiv ke bina maar.."(without shiv i will die...)"nahi lado..agar tum yaha jana chati hoo toh mhuje koi dikat nahi...har maa..apni baachi ko kush dekna chati hai..agar tum iske saath kuch ho toh...mhuje koi dikat nahi..(no lado...if you want to go there i don't have any problem..every mother will want to see her child happy..if you are happy with him ..i don't have any problem.)shiv and anandi smiled.


"lekin..."sumitra told while turning towards shiv."agar phir kesa kuch hua aur meri lado koi dikat aayi toh..."(if again like this anything happened and my lado is in any problem..then)"no maa...i promise aisa kuch nahi hoga."(no maa.. i promise anything like this will happen.)shiv told.bharion who was standing out smiled.


the inspector came."sir humne...vikrant ko pakad liya hai...ab apko aake case file karna hoga aur arrest letter dena hoga."(sir..we have caught vikrant..now you must come and file a case and give a arrest letter)"hamm.."the inspector left."toh vikrant was not in jail..why din't you tell me shiv?"anandi asked."anandi i will tell you later..."he was about to leave.she held his hand.she could see the anger in his eyes."shiv..app mhujse vada ki jiye..ki app case file karke ajayenge..uss vikrant ko kuch nahi kahenge aur koi maar peet nahi karnege..."(shiv..promise me that you will just file the case and come back..you won't tell anything to vikrant nor hit him...)"lekin anandi..."(but anandi...)"nahi shiv..what ever had to happen it happened...now if you hit him..will everything become alright? no...shiv if you love me truly you won't do anything to vikrant and get yourself into trouble."anandi told."i promise anandi..."telling this shiv left.


jagya and ganga were about to leave."chora..."daddisa called.both of them turned back and saw sumitra and daddisa standig."chora..hume maaf kar do.."(chora...forgive us..)"nahi daddisa..."jagya told.sumitra went near ganga."tum bhi maaf kar do ganga...meine tumhe kitna bura bula kaha...mein uss samay bahut gusse mein thi...jagya ke liye hi sabse acchi pasand ho...mhuje maaf kar do ganga..."(you also forgive us ganga..i have told you so many bad things..but that time i was in anger ..you are the best choice for jagya..please forgive me ganga..)"nahi maasa..."sumitra and ganga hugged each other.and even the shekhar's asked forgiveness.


anandi was discharged.she came out of the room and was happy to see everyone."shiv..where is maa and saanchi.."woh dono udaipur gaye hai..."(they both have gone to udaipur.)she just smiled.anandi hugged everyone and the shekhar's left for udaipur.there anandi entered kesar bhaag and in jaitser jagya and ganga along with entered baadi haveli.


at udaipur."anandi..mhuje maaf kar dena.."(anandi..please forgive me.)ira asked."no ma..."they both hugged."maa...saachi dikayi nahi de rahi...?"(maa..saanchi is not be seen..?)"she told that she does not want to be here and wants to forget about all this..that's why she has gone back to hostel."ira told.anandi just smiled.in the night after dinner everyone left.only shiv and anandi were left.shiv lift anandi in his arms and took her to the bedroom.they both had a wonderful night.the next day was a new begging for anandi and shiv.


THE END.
thank you guys for the love and support...will be back with another piece of writing.

lots of love..
radhika...



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Posted: 11 years ago
hey...u ended it so soon..
not fair...

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this one was very nice...sumi was nice too..

and ira too changed...

sachi..stilll the same..😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanx radhika..for the wonderful FF...but why did you end it so soon..anyways enjoyed the whole FF and this part is too good and come back with another story fast...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: HemaG

hey...u ended it so soon..

not fair...

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this one was very nice...sumi was nice too..

and ira too changed...

sachi..stilll the same..😡


chill yaar..will come with another story fast...and thanx for your all support..
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Posted: 11 years ago
u ended it sooo soon radhika not fare
bt lat last happy ending
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kanika_S

thanx radhika..for the wonderful FF...but why did you end it so soon..anyways enjoyed the whole FF and this part is too good and come back with another story fast...


thanx kanika...glad you liked it..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SGOSH

u ended it sooo soon radhika not fare

bt lat last happy ending


will come back with another one...
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
It ended so early
Nice story keep it up will wait for ur new creation
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chit15

It ended so early

Nice story keep it up will wait for ur new creation


thank you..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: radhika_k2


will come back with another one...
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waiting for ur another ff bt lil ong one ha come back soon dear waiting for ur ff 😛

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