SY FF: The Ride of a Lifetime - Chapter 29, page 143

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VerboseG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

Originally posted by: Jaymaa

Amazing...wonderful update 😳

Thanks 😊

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Sneha.Love

@Sneha.Love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

Well, guess I am the last one today.😕 Just come home after all day thinking what happened in RL, had a bad case of addict without her regular dose, run home, come OL and... and OMG...she proposed...jeeejjj

And, as once, one cute tali guy said "I don't care", if she was forced, pushed or showed to do that, the main thing is, that days of her loneliness are over.

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"Break your vow for me, chori... please." Love Daadisa

" Prats looked around for Sid. Unerringly drawn by her instincts to the back of the hospital, she found him sitting under a huge banyan tree, deep in thought. Approaching him soundlessly, she was surprised when he mumbled, "Come, sit down, Prats. Perching carefully on the rock next to him 😳 Love it, our own "Under a banyan tree, sitting on the rock, proposal"❤️

"Marry me, Sid. I promise I'll be the best wife you could ever have."
Leaning forward to kiss her forehead, he whispered, "It would be my pleasure, darling. And I promise you, you will love me, and soon." ❤️

We all know that she loves him, and she will soon be aware of that, and with a help of her Sid Sahib she will conquer all fears, and insecurities and enjoy freely in the land of Love

Waiting eagerly on your new update, and soon on Thread No.3 👏👏👏

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yzyz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

CH27

👍🏼 Like it completely :

- some real action-Dadisa sick (not patronizing or 'pulling the ears' -this story is beyound dragging gossiping⭐️), then

- 'their' scene: a track similar to BV, not the same, therefore: Sid in the right places: in the house, but not with her in the hospital (whole bunch everywhere), waiting for her..(he's seriously in love) to support and talk with her (without pathetic)

- entrance of new character(s): J&family

Chapter as a whole👏

😉And Prats slow as a snail...C'mon Prats, fly

but I like she is doing in her own way❤️

that's not easy, but only acceptable.

I don't mind those 3 words you wrote about J, consider it only 'spicy' for the plot.

BTW, finally, (slightly) different opinions👏 and comments

I am sure that you would give proper justice, under circumstances, to all of your characters.👍🏼

Edited by lilydana - 12 years ago

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Sneha.Love

@Sneha.Love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

Originally posted by: Nataly

Branka Schatz, I wasn't on duty today...

but...I'll tell you what I done
I'll tell you what I do...

Gaggy and I have today a "test drive" in a caravan...

I took my favorite Roxette CD with...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/balika-vadhu/3709958/sy-ff-the-ride-of-a-lifetime-chapter-29-page-143?pn=84

on the highway, he said: "hey, get off the gas...this is not your rescue car..."

on the highway park place we decided to buy it...

The moon is alright
the freeway's heading south
My heart is going boom
there's a strange taste in my mouth
Baby babe - I'm moving real fast
so try to hold on
Try to hold on!

Gaggy drove back to the caravan dealership...at a turtle's pace...

but Branka Schatz,

at the next roller coaster ride of emotions I'll be ready for use...

Nataly, my sweetie 🤗

What can I say, just...Lepi Gagi ist ein sehr glueclicher Mann <Lepi Gagi is one very lucky Guy)
I can bet That caravan trip was very "up..oh..oh..and in This steamy old wagon, the radio is getting wild Radio graphics

Love Roxette, bet Gaggy was singing "Dok svira radio...sta bih ti radio...la,la,la,la " 😉

I am counting on you😊 next time when this two start their hunky-punkey, and my heart is going boom - bada - boom 😆😆 to come and revive me, so I will be able to read this FF till the end.😛

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VerboseG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

Originally posted by: loveansh
Well, guess I am the last one today.😕 Just come home after all day thinking what happened in RL, had a bad case of addict without her regular dose, run home, come OL and... and OMG...she proposed...jeeejjj

And, as once, one cute tali guy said "I don't care", if she was forced, pushed or showed to do that, the main thing is, that days of her loneliness are over.

"Break your vow for me, chori... please." Love Daadisa

" Prats looked around for Sid. Unerringly drawn by her instincts to the back of the hospital, she found him sitting under a huge banyan tree, deep in thought. Approaching him soundlessly, she was surprised when he mumbled, "Come, sit down, Prats. Perching carefully on the rock next to him 😳 Love it, our own "Under a banyan tree, sitting on the rock, proposal"❤️

"Marry me, Sid. I promise I'll be the best wife you could ever have."
Leaning forward to kiss her forehead, he whispered, "It would be my pleasure, darling. And I promise you, you will love me, and soon." ❤️

We all know that she loves him, and she will soon be aware of that, and with a help of her Sid Sahib she will conquer all fears, and insecurities and enjoy freely in the land of Love

Waiting eagerly on your new update, and soon on Thread No.3 👏👏👏

Hey Branka! Thanks!

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Nazneen

@SiriuslySujal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

Sorry for not commenting on the last couple of chapters!

Chapter 26 - lovely and sensual. I had to take back my words about preferring understated chapters... I have just as much of a weakness for chapters which do state everything! 😉 😆 Also, I loooved that you incorporated one of my favourite AnSh scenes from BV... the dinner scene where they eat from one plate. Ahh, memories...!

Chapter 27 - Awww, poor Dadisa got sick To me, this chapter felt so much more natural than the equivalent scenes in BV where Bhago was sick. And your scene where Prats requests Sid to marry her was also far better done than the one in BV. You did not need to explain the understanding between the two of them in the way that the BV makers did... it spoke for itself without the need for any mention of "binti" or "vachan" or any of that stuff. Beautiful. 😳 I even liked seeing the entry of Jagan and the friendship between Prats and Jagan despite everything that happened, as well as Jagan's wife (Kangan?)'s acceptance of that friendship. I think that since Jagan is not a pain in the behind in your story, he will be a catalyst for good in terms of recognising Prats' yet-to-be-realised feelings for Sid and uniting the two of them 😊

By the way, are we supposed to imagine Jagan's wife looking like Gauri or Ganga? I personally would rather imagine a sweet, docile version of Gauri than I would Ganga, but since you're the author, I figured I'd better ask you 😆

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VerboseG

@VerboseG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

Originally posted by: lilydana
CH27
👍🏼 Like it completely :
- some real action-Dadisa sick (not patronizing or 'pulling the ears' -this story is beyound dragging gossiping⭐️), then
- 'their' scene: a track similar to BV, not the same, therefore: Sid in the right places: in the house, but not with her in the hospital (whole bunch everywhere), waiting for her..(he's seriously in love) to support and talk with her (without pathetic)
- entrance of new character(s): J&family
Chapter as a whole👏

😉And Prats slow as a snail...C'mon Prats, fly

,
but I like she is doing in her own way❤️
that's not easy, but only acceptable.

I don't mind those 3 words you wrote about J, consider it only 'spicy' for the plot.
BTW, finally, (slightly) different opinions👏 and comments

I am sure that you would give proper justice, under circumstances, to all of your characters.👍🏼

Thanks Lilidana 😊

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VerboseG

@VerboseG

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1018

Originally posted by: SiriuslySujal
Sorry for not commenting on the last couple of chapters!

Chapter 26 - lovely and sensual. I had to take back my words about preferring understated chapters... I have just as much of a weakness for chapters which do state everything! 😉 😆 Also, I loooved that you incorporated one of my favourite AnSh scenes from BV... the dinner scene where they eat from one plate. Ahh, memories...!

Chapter 27 - Awww, poor Dadisa got sick To me, this chapter felt so much more natural than the equivalent scenes in BV where Bhago was sick. And your scene where Prats requests Sid to marry her was also far better done than the one in BV. You did not need to explain the understanding between the two of them in the way that the BV makers did... it spoke for itself without the need for any mention of "binti" or "vachan" or any of that stuff. Beautiful. 😳 I even liked seeing the entry of Jagan and the friendship between Prats and Jagan despite everything that happened, as well as Jagan's wife (Kangan?)'s acceptance of that friendship. I think that since Jagan is not a pain in the behind in your story, he will be a catalyst for good in terms of recognising Prats' yet-to-be-realised feelings for Sid and uniting the two of them 😊

By the way, are we supposed to imagine Jagan's wife looking like Gauri or Ganga? I personally would rather imagine a sweet, docile version of Gauri than I would Ganga, but since you're the author, I figured I'd better ask you 😆

Thanks Naazo 😳

And I will have to ask my mind tomorrow morning 😆

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lishu_

@lishu_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1019

And I promise you, you will love me, and soon.
😕 🤔
Toh Abhi tak kya tha?😲
Loved this update..Some triggering was definitely required for piyu to take the final step..
Me loved the Ending too 😉