Ansh SS- Do Dil...Ek Jaan (part 4 on page 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...its nice...so HE came for his princess..

continue soon pls...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice and cute part next update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice.. plz update fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it so nice update dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-3: dil ne dil se kuch kaha'.

Everyone at terrace..shyam sugna their kids, nandu, ganga, little mannu were having fun. Jagya had also come to nandu's insistence. All were running here n there and'.his wife'his anandi'she was in the middle'blindfolded'trying to catch them. They were playing pakdam pakdi.

Shiv was looking at anandi...mesmerized. Standing there like a zombie...he was admiring her. His wife had her own ways to bowl him over. She was so simple...yet beautiful...

Everyone at the terrace became aware of shiv's arrival and...found him looking at anandi without even blinking his eyes. Jagya felt uneasy whereas everyone else giggled...

This made shiv come out of his dreamland. He ran his finger through his hairs out of embarrassment.

Anandi: kya hua?? Sab has kyu rhe ho???

Keeping one finger one his lips...he signaled everyone to keep silent. All understood his meaning and decided to play along.

A: arre...koi kuch bol kyu nhi rha??

Sugna: kuch nhi anandi...tum pakdo na...

And again the game started. Each time anandi missed the chance...he just smiled at her innocence. He came towards them without moving making any noise. He was busy admiring her...when suddenly...her one hand landed on his coat. She immediately got hold of it and began to shout in happiness.

"pakad liya'pakad liya...dekha maine..." She stopped in between. Her breathing automatically stopped and her skipped few beats. She felt weakness in her knees. And in an instant she knew why it happened'but'was too sursprised to believe.

Shiv's condition was also the same. His throat went dry. He felt a strong desire to hold her tightly and kiss her senseless. The closeness was making it difficult for him. He was captured by her beauty'but'tried to maintain his composure.

Anandi loosen her hold on his coat and began to roam her one hand upwards to confirm...dat it was SHIV. She moved her hand upwards to his shoulder, his collarbone...his neck...and his cheek. She felt an undercurrent passed through her body. Shiv's happiness knew no bounds and he just closed his eyes to savour the magical moment.

"Sh..ii..iv"'. she managed to say...her heart racing wid jet speed. Listening his name...his hands on their own...reached her waist. He looked at her adoringly with lot of love reflecting in his eyes.

"Anandi"... he whispered.

Everyone present there was looking at the love strucked couple and smiling except jagya who was looking everywhere else. The kids were too shocked to react.

Anandi wid one hand...untied the blindfold...and opened her eyes slowly to see her prince charming...standing so close to her. The world stopped for them...and their mind stopped working. Both got lost in each other...and shared an intense eye lock.

Suddenly they heard a loud thud...and came to reality. They immediately sprang apart to see...mannu clapping at them'watching the perfect romantic scene. Anandi...fully embarrassed'looked down'biting her lower lip.Shiv was also shy...but..he had a smirk on his face'enjoying anandi's expressions.

Nandu came running to meet his jijusaa. Shiv gave chocolates to the kids and greeted others. Jagya couldn't take any more of their romance...so he made an excuse and went down.

Anandi...being shy...was not meeting shiv's eyes. But shiv was smiling at her. He was looking forward to be alone wid her...holding her hands...and...

To be continued...

Edited by suhana1990 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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And what yaar it was sooo nice and lovely plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it all!!! why dont they show this in the serial for once 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-4: teri zhuki nazar...

After some more teasing by shyam n sugna😉...all went down for lunch on dadisaa's call.
It was lunch time. At the dining table...whole family was together having food. Anandi was sitting near shiv...serving him food. Jagya was in no mood to eat...but...dadisa insisted him to join others at the table.
Anandi was blushing non-stop😳...thinking of the incident happened just before on the terrace. She could nt meet her eyes wid shiv...n tried hard to concentrate on food. She had lots of questions in her mind!!!! First of all...why shiv was here???...n why didnt he inform it earlier.
Shiv was aware of her condition and its reason...he was smiling looking at her.😊

Anandi was having her food...suddenly...she froze. She stopped in between wid a spoon in her hand. She felt something roaming on her leg...and without giving a second thought...she knew what it was!!!

Shiv was moving his toe...on her smooth leg...up and down..making her shiver. Her face turned red...n she tried to compose herself...but...in vain!!!. She looked at shiv from the corner of her eye...n there he was busy talking wid kids. He had a hidden smile playing on his lips.
After a while...he looked at her..n winked.😉 She fumbled n her mind went blank. She gave an pleading look to shiv...but...he gave a teasing smile...n looked away.

"Main halwa lekar aati hun...!!!"..she managed to say...her voice quivering.

She literally ran to the kitchen. He just smirked...gave a mischievious smile. Even after so many months of marriage...He could create such an effect on her!!!!

In kitchen...anandi was out of breath.
"ye kya ho gya h mujhe??? pehle chat par...aur ab yahan...sab kya soch rhe honge??? aur shiv!!! wo to has rhe honge...mujh par...lekin galti to unki hi h...aise koi karta h??"😕 She blushed thinking wat happened just now.😳

She came out of kitchen with a bowl of halwa in her hands. Seeing his favourite dish...shiv's eyes grew wide in excitement. He gobbled down the halwa like a small kid...n everyone else laughed.😆

"halwa bahut accha bana h..." he looked at her wid an appreciative smile.
She just blushed n looked down😳.

After lunch...everyone asked shiv to go n rest..as he had travelled from udaipur to jaitser. Shiv went to his room...n waited for anandi. After sometime...the door opened...n she came inside.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice.
Waiting for next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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to short update😭
update soon😊

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