Ansh SS- Do Dil...Ek Jaan (part 4 on page 4)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone!!!! I m writing first time on any forum. I m a big fan of ansh...hence this.

As its my first attempt , please do comment. All suggestions welcome.

For all those who are craving for ansh romance...here it goes...

Part-1: Doori... sahi jaye naaa..

It ws a satday night. Shiv was sitting in his bedroom wid anandi's pillow in his hand and a big pout on his lips. 😕 He was looking at anandi's photo in his phone. Anandi had gone to jaitser to spend some quality time wid her family. It had been 3 days she left for jaitser... but... for him, it felt like ages. No wonder he was missing her like hell.😕He tried hard not to miss her... but it wasn't dat easy.

It had been 6 months they got married...but still...it was difficult for him to divert his mind away from his wifey's thoughts'and concentrate on his work. Being away for 3 whole days was next to impossible for him. Though he didnt want to disturb her during her jaitser visit, he couldnt take it any more. Immediately, he dialled her number.

Here in jaitser , anandi was in her room...looking fresh after a shower. She was wid her family after a long time...but...she was obviously missing shiv.😕 She desperately wanted to be in his arms. She was missing his warmth...his touch...his love. Getting impatient, she took her phone and was about to dial his number wen it began to ring.

Having an amused smile on her lips😊, she recieved his call.

A: hello!!!

S: ⭐️

A: hello shiv!!!

S: (coming back from his dreamland)😊 kaisi hai aap???

A:😊kaisi ho sakti hun apke bina???

S:😃to...aap mujhe miss kr rhi hai???

A: apne khana khaya??

S:😉 ab topic change mat kariye...bataiye...miss kr rhi h naa???

A:😳(in a low voice) hmmm...

S:(wid a smirk on his face) to... mai aa jao wahan??

A:(knowing his unusual ways to tease her) bahut raat ho chuki h...so jaiye...

S:😉ab apke bina neend kahan aati h mujhe...pata hai..teen din se thik se nhi soya...

A:😳(blushing deeper) gud night shiv!!!

As she was about to cut the call,

S: Anandii...

A: jee??

S:😊 I luv u...my jaan...😉

A:😳(blushing tomato red) i luv u too...bye!!

Having said this, she cut the call...and blushed at his remark "jaan"...he could make her blush even wid his words. She remembered all their romantic moments.😳 Soon she drifted off to sleep...dreaming of her SHIV.

In udaipur, shiv was happy talking to anandi...but still...he was missing her😕Suddenly an idea came to his mind.😃 After much thinking, he went to sleep wid a smile on his face...waiting for the next day to begin.

To be continued...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice attempt😛 but itna chutku sa😔
want to know wat idea has shiv come up with?
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice try...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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marvalous start...👏...update soon sweetheart...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow how cute is that loved it very much plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really sweet and nice but plz gives us longer updates...we (or at least me) have become extremely greedy in case of AnSh scenes 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow story about naughty shiv and mischief anandi...very nice...waiting for the next update.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u all for your valuable suggestions and encouragement. This time its again a small one...but...next part will be longer and romantic...so plzz...dont forget to comment on this.

Here comes another part...

Part-2 : yeh dil doondhe tujhe...

Next morning in jaitser….anandi, after having breakfast, came running to her room to check her mob. To her disappointment, there were no calls…no messages.😕 Without wasting any more time, she dialed shiv's number. She waited for the sweet reply…but…all she heard was "your call has been rejected". She was surprised as it never happened before. Thinking he must have got some important work…she decided not to disturb him…and silently walked out of the room.

Now it was afternoon time in jaitser. The weather was cool and there were few chances of rain.⭐️ All elders of the house were sitting in the hall and chatting.

Ds: aj kitne dino baad…ghar me phirse chahal pahal hai….

Bhairon: haan masaa…anandi k aane se sab kitne khush hai…

Sumitra: aur jaise hi sugna shyam ko pata chala…ki anandi aayi h…to wo bhi aagaye…sara parivaar ek sath h…kitna aacha lag rha h…😊

Ds: haan…bas shiv chora bhi hota…to aur bhi aacha lagta…bas uski kami lag rhi h..

"Mai aa gya… dadijee", a voice came from the entrance door.

All stood up and were surprised and happy to see shiv coming towards them. He touched everyone's feet and greeted them.

Ds: shiv chora…tu yahan kaise???

S: 😊ab aap bulaye dadijee…aur main na aaun…aisa kabhi ho sakta h….

Everyone smiled and asked him to sit and join them.

Basant: aacha hua tum aagaye…hum sab tumhe hi yaad kar rhe the…

Gehna: haan…aur anandi to roz hi… yaad karti h tumhe….aaj to usne tumhari pasand ka halwa banaya h…sahi time par aaye ho….

Shiv gave a shy 😳smile all laughed.😆

After a small chit-chat, his eyes began to search for his princess. He was constantly looking at the stairs…to catch a glimpse of her.

Gehna: shiv??

Shiv (looking towards the stairs): jee???

Gehna: kise doondh rhe ho???

He came out of his reverie and began to think of some valid answer.

S:🤔 wo…wo main…baki sab dikhayi nhi de rhe…sab bahar gye h kya???

Gehna: 😊nhi to…nandu, mannu, ganga aur jagya to chat par h…..wo shyam sugna aaye h na baacho k sath…to sab upar gye hai…aaj mausam bhi aacha hai…isliye..

S: (giving a weak smile): aacha…to sab ek sath hai…

Seeing his condition., all began to laugh😆 ... he soon realized they were pulling his leg and looked down in embarrassment.

Ds: (trying to stop her laughter) chora!! Anandi bhi chat par hi h…tub hi chala ja..sab se mil le…

Shiv's eyes shone wid happiness hearing her name⭐️…but…he tried to be normal to avoid further embarrassment.

Sumitra: haan beta…jao..

Shiv: jee maa…

He quickly got up and walked towards the stairs leaving everyone behind giggling.

He walked up to the terrace in fast steps..and stopped in mid-day on reaching the entrance door.

What he saw was the most fascinating sight of his life!!!! 😃He was spellbounded seeing the scenario in front of him….

To be continued...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh that is so cute... plz update fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
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suspence wat did he see
waiting for next update
update soon

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