SS : The 'Gauri' returns updated part 2 on page 2 - Page 2

Originally posted by: maahi11

bt wer is gauri in dis... atlst write a bit wic matches d topic... orelse a gud start... would lke to read mre...

Originally posted by: meena678

nice start .But dont screw up gauri s character please.
I had started on this ,my first update was highly dramatic but then completely left it and one more member was writing ash storyteller ,i guess we left becoz we wanted it to be sync with show but it seems the story in show is going which direction dont know we lost interest i guess.Nways u dont leave like us .Waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: Payali09

Really good start but please slow down the pace and add more details. I enjoyed your writing style overall. Looking forward to how you introduce Gauri into the story. And I'm confused reading on of your replies...is the 6 months from today what you are going to write about or are you going to write about the 6 months that lead to this point?

Thanks again for posting. Keep up the effort 👍🏼

Guys I wrote the dialogs in hindi.. as I fell it will give better effect. Sorry for this change . and m cutting Singh's story as I dnt want it to be emotional family drama and rush to mumbai. And m specially mentioning Anandi goes to mumbai despite of being pregnant coz I want to tell tv soaps that pregnancy dsnt make a women helpless and she can easily wok in that time. hope u enjoy it.

Part 2

Next morning, everyone is on dinning table, including Maya. She wanted to leave yesterday night but Ira stopped her.

Ira : Anandi, mai tumhe bata nahi sakti, tumne mujhe kitni badi khushi di hai. Mai dadi banne wali hu.

Daddu : Aur mai pardada, Anandi tumne ye bat apni dadisa ko batai ya nahi, wo gahena ki wajah se kal party mai nahi aa pai warna kitna khush ho jati yeh news sunkar.

Anandi : Nahi daddu,Kal bahut late ho gaya tha so call nahi kar pai. Mai bas abhi batane hi wali thi.

Daddu : Shiv jara call karna, mai bat karta hu kalyani ji se.

Shiv calls badi haveli. Daddu takes the phone and leave the room to inform them.

At the same time, Sanchi says, "Bhabi ab apki internship ka kya hoga, apne toh kaha tha ke ap apne ngo ki bajay khi aur internship karegi."

Ira : "Ab yahi udaipur mai koi dusra NGO join kr legi ."

Anandi nods. Meanwhile Maya interrupts and says, "Ira tum bura na maano toh Anandi 2months ke liye mera NGO join kar sakti hai. Waha mera ghar bhi hai aur mai isey apni beti ki tarah rakhugi."

Anandi : "Nahi aunty, aap q pareshan ho rahi hai, mai yahi par internship kar lugi."

Ira : "Haa Maya, wse bhi abhi anandi ko bahut jyda dekhbhal ki jarurat hai, tum pareshan ho jaogi."

Maya : "Pareshan kese Ira, Anandi bhi toh meri beti jesi hai, aur usey waha meri beti Swati ke sath achha bhi lagega. Akhir swati bhi toh apni MS complete kr ri hai, Aur wese bhi mai chahti hu ke Anandi hamare yaha NGO mai aa ke gals ko hosla de...apni success ki kahani bataye unhe. Un gals ko jo emotionally weak hai unhe support kare. Aur fir 2month ki hi toh baat hai. Mai pura dhyan rakhugi uska. And Apni beti k hospital mai uska checkup b karwa lugi. "

Shiv : "Maa, Anandi, mere khyal se aunty sahi keh rahi hai. Mumbai mai Anandi ko acha exposure milega. Usey pata chalega k big city Mumbai jesi place ke NGO kese work karte hai. Maana hamari city udaipur bhi chhoti nahi hai par Mumbai jitni badi bhi toh nahi. "

Ira : "Thk hai Shiv, mujhe koi problem nahi hai. But ye faisla Anandi ko lena hai. Wo samajhdar hai, usey pata hai kya sahi hai aur kya galat."

Anandi : "Maa, mai jaana chahti hu, dekhna chahti hu ke badi cities mai kya facilities hai NGO mai, taki mai usey apne shahar mai la saku. Par ma sirf apki manjuri milne pe hi jaugi."

Ira : "Thik hai Anandi, tum jao . par hame subah sham call karna, and agar koi bhi bat ho toh Maya se share karna, mujhe uspe pura trust hai k wo tumhara khyal bahut achche se rakhegi."

Anandi : "Thank u maa,mai sach ma bahut kismat wali hu jo mujhe ap jesi maa and ye parivar mila." And they hug.

Maya : "Toh Anandi, kab chalna hai hume. Kal morning ki flyt book karwa lu."

Anandi : "Jesa apko thik lge aunty."

Scene change : AnSh in bedroom

Anandi doing her packing and Shiv making puppy face. Anandi sees him and smiles.

Anandi(teasingly) :" Kya hua Shiv, Apko mera suitcase pasand nahi aa ra, ap kahe toh wo pink wala lejau."

Shiv dsnt reply.. just looks at her with sad face.

Anandi : "Shiv, agar aap aisa face banayge toh mai nahi ja paugi. Ap kaho toh Maya aunty ko mana kar du."

Shiv : "Nahi Anandi, ye trip apke future ke liye achcha hai. Mai toh bas yah sochi raha hu ke itne din apke bina kese rahuga. Ab adat ho gai hai apki mujhe."

Anandi : Mere bina kese Shiv, mai toh hamesha apke sath hu. Apke dil mai.

Shiv : Par mai apko roz dekhuga kese..

Anandi : Ankhen band kar

Shiv : But mai toh aankhe khulne par bhi apko dekhna chahta hu..

Anandi shows him the laptop and says ispe' hum roz video chat karenge.

Next day : Mumbai Airport.

Maya and Anandi reaches Mumbai. There Swati and her Dad welcomes them. Maya introduces them.

Maya: Yeh swati hai, meri beti. Mene bataya tha naa MS kar rahi hai. And ye hai mere husband Arvind Sinha. Businessman hai.. aur yeh hai Anandi, shiv k wife.

Swati : Oh hello Anandi, hope I cn cl u by ur name.

Anandi : Definitely.

Arvind : "Ab ghar chale ya saari baate yahi kar loge"

Maya : "Haaji bilkul chaliye."

In Car,

Maya : "Swati, tumne Anandi ka appointment le lia. Kab ka hai"

Swati : "Ha mamma, aj sham 5bje ka hai."

They reach home.

Maya : Beta, anandi ko jara uska kamra dikha do.

Swati : Haa mamma, mene guest room prepare kar dia hai. But kya Anandi mere room mai nahi rah sakti. I mean Sneha di k USA chale jane k bad I feel lonely. Wo mere sath rahegi toh mujhe acha lagega.

Maya : but beta anandi ki privacy'

Anandi interrupts her in the mid...And says, "Aunty, mujhe bahut acha lagega. Swati bhi toh mere liye Sanchi ki tarah hai.."

Maya : "Thik hai beta, as u wish. aur kisi bhi tarah hesitate mat karna, isey apna ghar samjhna. Ab jao fresh ho jao, fir sham ko doctor pas chalna hai"

Anandi : "ji aunty."

Swati shows her the house n their room. Anandi loves it and thanks hr for all this.

Swati : "Com'n Anandi, abi toh mene kaha k tum mere liye sneha di jesi ho.. aur fir ye thanks. Pta hai Sneha di sirf di ni blki meri best frn hai' Kher tum abi fresh ho jao fir lunch k lye chalte hai.."

Anandi agrees.She calls Shiv and informs him everything happened at the place. She is glad to meet such a family n says the same to Shiv. They talk for couple of minutes. Thn she leaves for lunch.

Nw, itz evening and they are on the way to hospital.

Maya : "Swati Beta, mujhe hospital k burn ward mai thoda kaam hai as aj ek dowry case register hua hai. If u dnt mind tum anandi ka check up krwa logi. Mai apna kaam khatm kar waha pahuchti hu.

Swati : "dnt worry mamma I will handle. Anandi, tumhare chck up ke baad mai tumhe apne staff s milaugi, specially hmri senior Dr. Singh se.. wo bhi rajasthan se hai. na haa mere best frn Atul se bhi.."

Maya : "Best frn ya boyfriend"

Swati : "Best friend.. sirf Friend"

Maya laughs nd they reach hospital. Maya leaves them on enterance and goes to burn ward.

Swati and Anandi heads to gynaec cabin and founds it empty. Swati tells Anandi to wait there as she will go ad check where doc is.

Swati goes towards Cardioligist's cabin, thinks,"I guess Dr. Verma yahi hogi.. Dr. Singh ke cabin mai. Dinbhr sath rhti hai dono.After all Dr. Singh hai hi itni sweet, har kisi se achi fshp hai unki. Senior hai magar fir bhi down to earth. Duty ko le ke itna sincere k interns unhe khadoos bulate ha bt off duty itni different ke lagta hi nahi k ye wahi dr. Singh hai jo hmri senior ha."

She reaches in front of the cabin and sees nameplate "Dr. Gauri Singh.. "' sighs and says " hope..Dr. Verma yahi ho".. knocks the door.

A voice says : "Come in". Swati goes inside. Dr. Gauri Singh and Dr. Verma sitting there.

Swati : "Sorry dr.Singh for disturbing u guys' but Dr. Verma se mujhe kuch baat krne hai"

Dr. Verma : "Yes swati"

Swati : "Dr, mene apko bataya tha naa meri relative ke baare mai.. jo pregnant' h..wo aa gai hai and waiting for u"

Dr. Verma : "Ohh yaa ma toh bhul gai, m so sorry.. Chalo"

While standing up she asks, "Wse kya naam btaya ha tumne apni relative ka"

Swati : "Anandi".

On hearing this name, Gauri gets biggest shock of her life..thinks.. "Anandi.. kahi ye wahi Anandi toh nahi hai" thn she calms hrself and says.."Duniya mai ye ek hi anandi thodi hai.. y koi aur hogi' haa pakka koi aur hogi.. wo jetsar se yaha q ayegi.. she tries her best to convince tht she is sm othr Anandi but still feels restless. Unknowingly,she gets up and starts going towards Dr. Verma's cabin.

Originally posted by: maahi11

gud one... n gud going bt i dnt thnk shiv wuld leave her alone wen she is pregnant... just a thught...

Originally posted by: ananthesh

Wow, this was a great update😊

Finally Gauri returns in your story , that's great.

Iam eager to know how you're going to the take your story further.

But this was a super fast second update. Hope you give many more such fast and frequent updates.

Update sooner.😊