SS : The 'Gauri' returns updated part 2 on page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys this is my 2nd OS in BV forum.. I dnt generally write but this sleepless night and boring tracks hd left no option for me and I m here to torture u with my SS.
Please ignore spelling n grammatical mistakes.. as I dnt have patience to recheck it.
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6months later..(from today)

Shekhar's haveli is all decorated.. Everyone is busy in some or the other work.. Shiv is on call.. instructing someone to deliver his order as soon as possible. Sanchi is with Anandi.. they are nw besties. Sanchi is making her ready for the function... Phooli comes to udaipur and asks anandi the reason of celebration. Anandi says.. she herself is unaware. Daddu told her to get ready and she is following his order. Ira comes and tell Anandi to come down as guests has arrived. Ira introduces anandi to a lady named Maya..

Ira : "Anandi, she is Maya. My childhood friend from Mumbai. She is a social worker and her hubby is a doctor."
Maya : "Oh Anandi... I have heard a lot about u, So how's your studies going.. Ira was saying that you want to b a social worker and doing post graduation in that field only.. thats really nice. Ira must be a proud m-i-l."
Anandi : "Thank u aunty. This is all coz of my family's support."
Ira : "U noe Maya, m really very proud of anandi.. not only she is managing house with studies but also a part of NGO,working as a teacher in an orphanage and is GS of her college."

Maya is really impressed by her.
Daddu's voice interrupts them. daddu is on stage..

Daddu : "Thank u guys for coming on such a short notice. Am really happy that you all came her to celebrate with us."
Shiv's dad : "But dad what's the reason of this party. Please share us."
Daddu : "Hmm.. No more surprises.. straight to the point.. We have got permission to start our own girls school and where they can study and become independent. And i want to give this credit to Anandi and Shiv"
All claps. Daddu calls them on stage.
Shiv : "I am very happy today, I have done nothing in this, this is all anandi's efforts and her dream. Anandi, m really lucky to have u as my wife. "
Anandi is all overwhelmed. Tears come down rolling from her eyes..
shiv : "Anandi I want to name this school after u."
Anandi : "Shiv, can we name this as 'Mukti(Freedom)'... Freedom to smile and be happy."

Before Shiv can say nething Daddu replies "offcourse".
Everyone starts dancing.. Anandi feels dizzy and faint. Everyone is tensed. A doctor comes forward to check her and announces that she is 2months pregnant. Everyone is damn happy..

P.S : If you like this than please hit like button(It wont take more than a second) or comment so that I can continue.. N if u dnt like this than u can ignore.

Edited by mishti31 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice start!!! though it cud have been more longer and bit slow in pace...it seemed u rushed thru it...please dont take it in a negative way!
but the story and plot is really nice and u shud definitely continue!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short but so sweet

looking forward for gauri's re-entry
Plz update as soon as possible
well be waiting for it
Edited by geekee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start. Mishti😊
But the pace is too fast ,
Slow down the pace, give more details and we always want a longerrr update.😉
But loved your beginning. Do continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx guys..

I noe it was short but I was just trying to prepare ground for the story.. and progress of Anandi in 6months. I will try next part to be more detailed,slow n long.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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itna chutku update :( but it was very nice..update soon and pls try to give a longer update😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please someone bring gauri back in the show.I stopped watchin the it when she left.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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bt wer is gauri in dis... atlst write a bit wic matches d topic... orelse a gud start... would lke to read mre...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start .But dont screw up gauri s character please.
I had started on this ,my first update was highly dramatic but then completely left it and one more member was writing ash storyteller ,i guess we left becoz we wanted it to be sync with show but it seems the story in show is going which direction dont know we lost interest i guess.Nways u dont leave like us .Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey hv really enjyed readng ur update
m glad dat shwed anandi's career success + her personal lyf so wel😳
do cntinue soon 😊

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