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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanu1818

Yuhooo bigninig of romence 🥳 he caught her hands 😲 noughty Dr.Sab 😳 Shanky you are killing us by your writing. Damn good ! its sooo romantic


Tried to be romantic.Thanks for liking it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jaiya

Hey shanky u become naughty too 😉 it was a lovely update dear ,continue like this 😳 I want doctorsa only caught her hand no other than him 😉 😆


Charu,you were late this time as you were busy.I am naughty.A little bit.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhruti_rocks434

My god Shanky its too cutely romentic...this is the speciality of your writing whenever m reading your ff there is always a shy smile on my face..god the "oh Shit" moment was 😳 I was really imagining JaGan there 😳 its so lovly wish BV writers show somthing like this.


Dhruti,aww,thats a huge compliment, thank you so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part ~ 11

Dactarsa took the kurta from Ganga...She turned and was about to run away from there once again but...Ganga got a shock...Someone caught her left hand and was not leaving her hand...Its not possible...Dactarsa can't hold my hand,Ganga exclaimed...

Jagya took the kurta from ganga,the moment he took the kurta from her he saw ganga was again willing to run away...Jagya thought to himself with frustration,oh god,not again!Not this time.When ganga turned jagya hold her left hand tightly so that she will not be able to run away.

Ganga turned to see whats holding her hand.She knew who can hold her hand because obviously badi haveli is not a haunted house that ghost will come and hold her hand.But it was hard to digest for her.But she shooed the thought thinking Dactarsa is not holding your hand to sing romantic songs,you idiot,he has caught your hand,there must be some reason.Ganga looked at jagya with a lot of difficulty,Dactarsaa was still holding her hand...Ganga noticed he is looking at her with a slight irritation...She looked at him and said,

Ganga:What happened,dactarsaa?

Jagya:Tum hamesha daurti kyun rehti hon!Jaab dekho taab bhaag jati hon,huwan kya hain aisa,ho jata hai kabhi kabhi,mujhe thodi na pata tha ke tum yaha hon,aur phir tumhe bhi to nehin pata tha ke mein tumhare samne ajaunga aise b i n a k a p r o k e.I mean bina kurte ke...(Why you always run away.Whenever I see you are running and running.What has happened!Sometime it happens.Did I know that you will be here and you also had no idea that I will come out in front of you without clothes I mean without wearing kurta)Jagya was blabbering all the words at once and when he used 'bina kaproke' he was embarrassed thinking he used the wrong words.

Jagya's blabbering was enough to turn the pink ganga to the red one.Ganga was thinking,what is he saying!Kuch bhi bolte hai!She felt shy.She thought if there would be a way to get vanished from the spot,it would be better.

Jagya thought to change the topic.He had an important topic to dicuss with ganga.But how can he.Whenever he tries to talk,this girl runs away.He didn't want to take a chance so he was still holding her hand tightly.And he broke the silence...

Jagya:Listen,

Ganga:What?

Jagya:I want to discuss something to you,plz don't tell anyone.

Ganga:Ok.

Jagya:What ok?

Ganga:You want to discuss something to me and I should not tell anyone that you want to discuss something with me.Isn't it!

Ganga was talking slowly because dactarsa is still holding her hand.She thought am I a thief or daaku that if he left the hand I will run away!But she couldn't say anything...After listening to Ganga's answer Jagya thought oh god what will I do with this girl.

Jagya:Gangaaa,listen,first let me finish otherwise I will explain something you will understand another thing.Ok?

Ganga:Ji,dactarsa.

Jagya:I am not telling you to conceal that I want to discuss something to you.I was just alerting you that what I am saying is a surprise so its between you and me.

Ganga:Oh,now I understood.Atleast now leave my hand.

Jagya:I am not a fool that I will leave your hand.And why should I leave you,I don't want to take any chance,I don't believe,you will run away again.

Ganga:Promise,dactarsa,I will not run away.Plz,leave me.

Jagya:Ok,I am leaving you but listen to me carefully,ok?

Jagya left ganga's hand and ganga was relieved.Jagya asked her to sit on the bed and he also sat with her on the bed...

Ganga:Ok,dactarsa,tell me.Whats the surprise?

Jagya:After five days its bapusa and ma's 30th marriage anniversary.I have returned home after so many years.So this time I want to celebrate the ceremony in a grand way.Actually I want to get them married again.What say?Achcha idea hai na,achcha surprise hoga na?(Isn't it a good idea?It will be a good surprise,isn't it?)

Ganga:Dactarsa,good!It will not only be good it will be great.

Jagya:I need help.We will also inform sugna jiji,shyam bhaiji and nandu is there also so we can divide our work.

Ganga:Ya,dividing the works are important.Marriage means hundreds of works.

Jagya:Panch din mein ho jayega na!We will be able to finish the work in time na?Because actually we have only two days because among five days one day will be sangeet,one day it will be haldi,tehn the marriage.

Ganga: Dactarsa,why are you thinking,we will do it for sure.Its your wish,it will never fail.Everything will be done at time.You just see.

Looking at ganga's confidence Jagya smiled and looking at smiling dactarsa ganga also smiled.

Jagya was very happy that ganga approved his idea because he trusts her and he knows no one can give him better suggestions that ganga.

Ganga saw immense happiness in Dactarsa's eyes.She always wanted to see him like this.Happy and chilled.Ganga was looking at Jagya with lots of love in her eyes.Ganga came out of her thought and said...

Ganga:Dactarsa,we have lots of work to do!Where should we start from...

Jagya:Wait,first I will inform,dadisa.Then...

Jagya was compelled to stop because they heard basant tausa calling ganga.

Ganga:I have to go dactarsa...

Jagya:Ok,you may go,but we will meet at night at the terrace when everyone will be sleeping.

Ganga didn't like the idea to meet jagya on the terrace at night.Jagya understood what ganga was thinking.He said..

Jagya:Don't worry,I will take permission from dadisa.When mannu will fall asleep you can give him to dadisa,she will take care of mannu.Then we can make the plan easily and we will get the time to think also.

Ganga was now convinced if majisa will give the permission then nothing to worry.She was happy and said...

Ganga:Ok,dactarsa,then we will meet on the terrace now I am going...

Jagya:Be on time, don't be late.

Ganga:Ok,dactarsa,I will be on time.Don't worry...

Ganga left jagya's room and Jagya once again started reading his book.They have lots of thing to do.Its literally a mountain of work...


Edited by shankythebest - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Iam first😛hey shanky day by day u became too naughty😆😆
wedding celebrations thats lovely😳
meeting in terrace,OMG☺️
shanky u know what i want please😉😉
rain seq please😳
today naughtiest update😉😆
Edited by jaiya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome shanky... Jagya doesn't trust to leave her hand.. Soo cute... Please continue.. Waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jaiya

Iam first😛hey shanky day by day u became too naughty😆😆

wedding celebrations thats lovely😳
meeting in terrace,OMG☺️
shanky u know what i want please😉😉
rain seq please😳
today naughtiest update😉😆


I wonder why jagya asked ganga to meet him on the terrace.What is jagya upto.Its badi haveli,lots of places are there but no he is asking her to meet him on terrace.Ye jagya bhi na!

Charu,I will try to put the rain requence.Lets see.I thought I was a good girl today,you are calling me naughty!LOL.Thank you charu.
Edited by shankythebest - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@shanky b'ful update!!👏 v.gud job!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra123

Awesome shanky... Jagya doesn't trust to leave her hand.. Soo cute... Please continue.. Waiting for next...


Rama,Jagya ka jo mood tha usse to lagta hai wo shayad hi ganga ka haat chorne mein interested tha.May be he was enjoying.LOl.Thanks dear for the appreciation.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tiny15

@shanky b'ful update!!👏v.gud job!!👏


Dolly,aww,you liked it.Thank you so much.

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