* Welcome to the new heaven*-Ansh OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys this is my first ever OS

I dont have habit of writing...so please dont throw chappals on me

Any suggestions for my writing is welcomed

kindly bare with my OS


Shiv and Anandi has just arrived udaipur at their home .
Whole family welcomed them as they have already reached a day before to take care of the arrangement's of shiv and anandi's new bedroom.Anandi and shiv both have been very tired by travelling after having water they head towards their new bedroom as they have lots of work to do of unpacking .

They opened the door just to find out the beautiful decorated room.(imagine it as per my description)

The room did not look less than their first night but the difference was it was been decorated for their welcome.On the wall there was written with big letters with the decoration of flowers "WELCOME"and exactly down there was a huge picture of their wedding .
The room was well furnished,on the side table of their bed there was a greeting card which states " Welcome to your new found heaven" frm whole family,
on both the side of bed there was side table where their individual photos were placed, the side where shiv sleeps anandi's photo was placed and where anandi sleeps shiv's photo was placed .
There was a king size bed in middle of bedroom, one sofa, 2 large cupboards,and a large balcony ,the door of balcony was closed .
Shiv and anandi was happily surprised by looking all the arrangements.They both continuously looked at each other and smiled.
Shiv went and closed the door .Anandi opened her suitcase took her clothes out and was going to place it in her wardrobe but she found her clothes already hung up with a letter there and read " new start of life with new bedroom so why not with new clothes as well" from chotima and maa ,anandi smiled.
She kept all her clothes again in the suitcase just removed her pink nighty and placed it in her wardrobe.

Same is with shiv he too found new clothes hung up of him.They both again looked at each other both were smiling from their heart by receiving such warm welcome.
They closed the door of cupboards moved towards each other .
Shiv placed hands on anandi's cheek,Anandi holds his hands and says "sabne humare swagat k liye kitni achi taiyaari ki h naa",shiv nods his heads in yes n says "aapko achi lagi",anandi moves close hugs him and says "bahut achi...sab humse kitna pyar krte h ",shiv "ha par…". Anandi looks up in his eyes and says " par …par kya???,he holds her shoulder and says "sabne itni decorations kardi ….itna acha kamre ko sajaya….ab me kamre ko apne tareeke se kaise saja sakta hu"
,Anandi understood what he meant by decoration she blushes and turns back.He encircled her from behind and kissed her near her ear and says "Anandi i love u very much…itna ki me aapko bata b nai sakta "…she blushes.
She was about to say those 3 words but was disturbed by a knock at the door .Shiv let her free anandi opened the door .Chotima was there ,she asked anandi how did they found the new room,Anandi she smiled .
Shiv also came there near the door.
Anandi hugged CM and said "chotima humme bahut pasand aayi saari sajavate…aap sabne humare liye itna sab kuch kiya wo b itne kam time mein uske liye thank u"….chotima said "apne bacho k liye hum itna nhi kr skte …ab samaj me aaya hum sab kal aane ki zidd kyu kar rahe the ..warna aaj tum dono ko surprise kaise de paate".
Anandi and shiv looks at each other and smiles,chotima notice it and also smile and says" acha toh me yeh kehne aayi thi tum dono jaldi fresh ho jao aur neeche khaane k liye aa jao"….they both nodded .CM goes and they closed door.

Anandi says shiv to get fresh till then she will do remaining unpacking. Anandi in meanwhile opens the balcony door and notice the huge balcony ,the wind was blowing ,from their balcony the pool in their haveli was clearly visible,she loved the view from their balcony,later she noticed 2 recliner chair were placed she was about to sit on it .
Meanwhile, Shiv comes out of bathroom and noticed her in balcony he called her out"anandi….me niche jaata hu aap fresh ho jaiye aur fir neeche aajayega "…she nods and goes to the bathroom.
She was mesmerised by her new bathroom.It was huge with a huge bath tub and shower unit,all sorts of soap and shampoos were kept for them,she says in her mind "sabne humare liye kitni mehnat ki h..me kitne naseeb wali hu jisse itna pyar krnewala aur samajdar pati aur itna pyara parivar mila h" she gets fresh and wears new saari from her new wardrobe. (imagine this saree in anandi's style )
She wears it and come down and sat beside shiv for lunch.Shiv says in Anandi's ears "apne saas k diye hui saree mein aap bahut achi lag rahi hai"...she does not say any thing just smiles shyly

They both thanked the family for such warm welcome.Ira"Anandi beta tumhe sab saree toh ache lage na nahi pasand aaye ho toh keh dena humme bura nahi lagega"."arre nahii nahi maa mujhe sab sadiyan achi lagi achi nahi bahut achi"say Anandi ...both Ira and meenu were happy hearing this and smiles at each other."aur mujhe bhi saare kapde pasand aaye" says shiv."wo toh aayenge hee na ..maine jo kharide hai ...wo bhi aapki boring taste ko dhyan rakh k"says mahi and laughs.Shiv gave him his khadoos look.

The family has cooked all the favourite dishes of anandi and shiv .
Both were very happy to see this affection.They all hav their lunch happily…After lunch chotima says "tum dono bahut thak gaye hoge na jao aaram kar lo…fir raat k khane k liye hum bulaate h"…ansh looked at each other…anandi"nahi choti ma hum aap sab k sath rehna chahte h baat krna chahte h….sabne kitne din se aaraam se baat nhi ki h"…evryone ws happy by anandi …though they both were tired but want to spend some time with family as they have done so much for their welcome.
They have a quality time with family,spoke about general matters.
In evening anandi insisted CM and ira to cook for them at dinner.

She cooked all favourite dishes of each member.They finished their dinner and headed towards bedroom.All the family was really happy to know that their surprise worked…

Ansh enter the bedroom.Anandi was going to make the bed arrangements but shiv held her wrist made her turn towards him,he holded her shoulders then her her cheeks,for some time they just had an eyelock..Shiv says "bahut thak gyi ho".Anandi nodded in a no.He smiled and took her into his arms placed her on the their bed..
They continuously looked at each other .Shiv went near and kissed her forehead….and slowly move towards her lips .
Anandi held his shirt tightly as she felt his lips on her, he softly brushed them on hers. They did not had a passionate kiss but just brushed them for few minutes ( it was their first kiss) .
As shiv moved apart .He saw a tear drop on Anandi's face .He was about to wipe it but anandi hugged him tightly as she will never leave him, while hugging she said…"I love u shiv…I love u vry much..main aapke bina nahi reh skti"…shiv got very emotional hearing it he tightened the hug .They did not leave each other's embrace ,they were so tired that while being in each embrace only they fell asleep peacefully ….all night they slept in each other embrace.

please leave your comments and suggestions

so that it could help my for future

*THE END *

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palpal15 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Akshu dear. 🤗... Very well done... Maja aa gaya... U described everthing very well. Cud c it before me...👏
U shud write more.
And thk u 4 upgrading Aji's wardrobe and getting some new clothes 4 Sji... Me and im sure, Anshu wanna thk u...happy tears...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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akshu... kaha thi aap.aap to chupi rustam niqli😛😛...lovely and the ending...simple wow...just like our ansh🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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DIL GARDEN GARDEN HO GAYA😊😊😊
BEAUTIFUL😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Its really nice Aakanksha. Aisa lag hi nhi rha k aapne pehli bar likha hai. Pls write more n more.
Btw r u maharashtrian? Woh actually at mein maine aapka marathi comment padha tha.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayee meri beti ne kitana accha likha hain 🤗

happy tears 😭 😭

I am so proud of you my dear...👏

Loved your 1st OS

keep writing 👍🏼


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Akshu - thank you for the nice OS 😊-- seriously CVs must take a leaf out of this OS and do something abt Aji's and Sji's wardrobe
Nandita_Siddian thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful ...👏
keep writing👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Aakanksha! This was amazing.😊
Ansh were very nicely welcomed by the Shekars.
Just one suggestion, actually it's a request, write a part two also. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Haye.. Akshu.. Its so beautiful,sweet nd lovely... u put colors in to dreams... I love each nd every pic of kb ka sapna... Its jast beautiful... Lovely OS... Its sweet,simpel nd Superb dear... 🤗

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