Laxman Rekha- new AnSh os

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This is my first os so plz bear with me...sorry for the rubbish...it is based on spoilers

LAXMAN REKHA


It was night in Jaitsar and whole village was sleeping free of worries except for one person in CH. Anandi was awake and recalling Jagya's words .She did knew that it was his past that that had blocked Jagya from getting bonded with someone through marriage but never in her dreams also she thought that the reason would his love for her . She was not even sure whether what Jagya claimed as love was really love because after falling in love with Shiv one thing was absolutely clear to her that what Jagya had told her about mistaking friendship for love is indeed true to some extent because what she felt for Jagya was no where as strong as she feels for Shiv. She admires him and respects him which always lacked in her for Jagya.

Anandi could only think of one solution to this problem- her leaving Jaitsar. After Jagya's confession she was now more eager to leave Jaitsar than she ever was. She stills feels sad about it but she could clearly see that her presence was the only problem that made Jagya still live in his past.

For her out of sight out of mind was the only solution right now. She quietly got up from bed without disturbing Shiv and switched on the laptop. She typed her resignation letter and rechecked it. After printing it out she kept it safely in a envelope and went back to sleep with her mind more at peace now.

Next day early morning:-

Shiv was getting ready when Anandi came and hepled him with his coat. Shiv could see that Anandi was lost somewhere so he asked her kya hua Anandi aap kuch khoi khoi si lag rahi ho

Anandi nahi toh...wo bas main...main...main aaj apke office aaogi apko luch dene

sirf dena ya khilane shiv asked playfully teasing her

Kya collector ke paas time hai mere liye? Anandi repleied back with naughtiness refelcting her eyes

Nahi hua toh adjust kar lege like last time shiv said indicating their last private moments

Anandi blushed recollecting the trip

Chotima called anandi jerking the love birds from their lovely thoughts

During lunch:-

Anandi knocked the door of iravati's room and said

Maa main office jao...mujhe inka lunch le jaana hai aur apna resignation letter bhi dena hai

Ha beta kyu nahi par shiv ke liye lunch lee jaane ke liye ye resignation ka bahana bahut boring nahi hai

Nahi ma main bahana nahi maar rahi vo shiv ko professional and personal kaamo ko mix karna acha nahi lagta isilye maine unhe ghar par nahi diya

Chotima saves anandi by saying anandi beta tum jao...laage haath office ke logo se akhiri baar mil bhi logi

Jee chotima

After Anandi leaves Chotima whispers to iravati dekha didi...anandi hamare shiv ko kitna acche se jaanne lagi hai...ab toh apka dar shant ho gaya hoga na

Bilkul meenu ab mujhe anandi aur shiv ki shaadi ko lekar koi pchtava nahi ho raha khaas kar ke uss phone recording ko sunne ke baad

Both Chotima and Iravati giggled remembering the incident

In office:-

Dadisa was sitting in Shiv's cabin

Dadisa main aapki takleef samjh sakta ho par aapko pata hai na ki main transver ko manna nahi kar sakta...ye mere duties ke khilaaf hoga

Ha Shib beta main jaanu ho...par ke karo iss dokri ka maan na maane hai...jab bhi iss transfer ke baare mein sochti ho mharo man talas jaave hai

Shiv looked down with guilt and unease after knowing how much pained this tranfer has caused Singhs and Anandi

Chora tujhse ek baat karni hai

Ji kai na dadisa

Dekh tu toh jaitsar mein na rokh sakke hai par anandi toh rokk sakke hai na

Shiv looked as dadisa confused

Main jaanu ho ki tharo abhi abhi byaah hauyo hai par anandi ke paas bhi kitni zimdari hai.sarpanch ka kaam karno ho...bade bhoodo ka eskol chalano hai aur ab toh ganga ko bhi vaada kiyo hai ki uski pardai mein madad karegi. Itna sab ekdum se kaise chord kar jaavegi chori.toh agar annadi ko jaitsar uske kaam khatan honne tak chorde toh...har hafte aa jaaio chori se milne

Shiv was shocked but knew that this transfer was focing anandi leave her dreams which made him more quilty now. He was about to speak when he saw a figure standing at the door which shocked expression on her face

Anandi?

Dadisa looked towards the door and felt uneasy to see Anandi

Anandi silently entered the room and both Shiv and Dadisa got up from their seats.

Aap yaha...kuch kaam tha

Main lunch laai ho...baataya tha na aapko subha Anandi said in low and surprised tone

Oh right...yaad aaya Shiv replied in a low tone

Aur ye resignation bhi

Resignation?

Haa...ab sirf kuch hi din baache hai Udaipur jaane mein toh maine socha ki jald se jald redsignation dedo

She looked at Dadisa while saying the words 'sirf kuch hi din baache hai Udaipur jaane mein' which made Dadisa look here and there

The room remained in silence for some moment and then Anandi spoke acha main chalti ho...derho rahi hai

Dadisa immediately replied chal chori toh mahare saath haveli chal sab bahut khush hoge tujhe dekh kar

Nahi Dadisa aaj nahi aa sakti wo mujhe ma ki madad karni hai packing mein...abhi tak shuru bhi nahi kiya hai...jab vakt milega tab aaogi

Shiv said its ok Anandi mein ma ko baata doonga...tum dadisa ke saath chali jao

He knew very well that packing was just an excuse but he didn't want any coldness b/w Singhs and Anandi for now

Anandi plainly refused again and siad that she should go now

Dadisa said Shib beta main bhi chalti ho...and she left with Anandi

Anandi was just going to enter the car when Dadisa stopped her

Anandi main jaano ho ki maine jo shib ko bola uss baat se thareko bura laga pr main sirf thari aur mhare parivaar ki khushi ke baare mein soch rahi

Aur uss parivaar mein Shiv aur mere sasuraal vaale toh aate hi nahi...aapne ek baar bhi nahi socha dadisa ki agar aap mujhe yaad karegi toh Shiv ke parivaar wale bhi toh unhe yaad karte hoge

Main aapki takleef samjh sakti ho par dadisa mujhe toh ab shiv ke saath rehna hai toh unse alag rehkar mujhe kaha khushi milegi aur apne hi toh sikhaya that na ki beti ka ghar shaadi ke baat uska saasural hi hota toh phir aaj kyu? Pehle he vo bevajaah itne sharminda mahsoos kar rahi hai iss transferko lekar aur apne unse iss baare mein baat karke unhe aur takleef dedi...Dadisa mujhe maaf kar di jiye par main Shiv ke bina yaha nahi reh sakti aur ye main sirf ek patni ke farz se nahi balki apne dil se bol rahi ho

Anandi had drawn a laxman rekha between her and singhs by declaring her love for her in-laws and husband and made it clear that she never wants them to cross

Dadisa looked ashamed and realized that now their is no use to turn the events as anandi has found her true happiness in her saasra.

Anandi left making Dadisa realize her mistake and also silently thanking Devima for giving Anandi's patience and love her dues in form of shiv and her saasra.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: libsrocks

This is my first os so plz bear with me...sorry for the rubbish...it is based on spoilers

LAXMAN REKHA


It was night in Jaitsar and whole village was sleeping free of worries except for one person in CH. Anandi was awake and recalling Jagya's words .She did knew that it was his past that that had blocked Jagya from getting bonded with someone through marriage but never in her dreams also she thought that the reason would his love for her . She was not even sure whether what Jagya claimed as love was really love because after falling in love with Shiv one thing was absolutely clear to her that what Jagya had told her about mistaking friendship for love is indeed true to some extent because what she felt for Jagya was no where as strong as she feels for Shiv. She admires him and respects him which always lacked in her for Jagya.

Anandi could only think of one solution to this problem- her leaving Jaitsar. After Jagya's confession she was now more eager to leave Jaitsar than she ever was. She stills feels sad about it but she could clearly see that her presence was the only problem that made Jagya still live in his past.

For her out of sight out of mind was the only solution right now. She quietly got up from bed without disturbing Shiv and switched on the laptop. She typed her resignation letter and rechecked it. After printing it out she kept it safely in a envelope and went back to sleep with her mind more at peace now.

Next day early morning:-

Shiv was getting ready when Anandi came and hepled him with his coat. Shiv could see that Anandi was lost somewhere so he asked her kya hua Anandi aap kuch khoi khoi si lag rahi ho

Anandi nahi toh...wo bas main...main...main aaj apke office aaogi apko luch dene

sirf dena ya khilane shiv asked playfully teasing her

Kya collector ke paas time hai mere liye? Anandi repleied back with naughtiness refelcting her eyes

Nahi hua toh adjust kar lege like last time shiv said indicating their last private moments

Anandi blushed recollecting the trip

Chotima called anandi jerking the love birds from their lovely thoughts

During lunch:-

Anandi knocked the door of iravati's room and said

Maa main office jao...mujhe inka lunch le jaana hai aur apna resignation letter bhi dena hai

Ha beta kyu nahi par shiv ke liye lunch lee jaane ke liye ye resignation ka bahana bahut boring nahi hai

Nahi ma main bahana nahi maar rahi vo shiv ko professional and personal kaamo ko mix karna acha nahi lagta isilye maine unhe ghar par nahi diya

Chotima saves anandi by saying anandi beta tum jao...laage haath office ke logo se akhiri baar mil bhi logi

Jee chotima

After Anandi leaves Chotima whispers to iravati dekha didi...anandi hamare shiv ko kitna acche se jaanne lagi hai...ab toh apka dar shant ho gaya hoga na

Bilkul meenu ab mujhe anandi aur shiv ki shaadi ko lekar koi pchtava nahi ho raha khaas kar ke uss phone recording ko sunne ke baad

Both Chotima and Iravati giggled remembering the incident

In office:-

Dadisa was sitting in Shiv's cabin

Dadisa main aapki takleef samjh sakta ho par aapko pata hai na ki main transver ko manna nahi kar sakta...ye mere duties ke khilaaf hoga

Ha Shib beta main jaanu ho...par ke karo iss dokri ka maan na maane hai...jab bhi iss transfer ke baare mein sochti ho mharo man talas jaave hai

Shiv looked down with guilt and unease after knowing how much pained this tranfer has caused Singhs and Anandi

Chora tujhse ek baat karni hai

Ji kai na dadisa

Dekh tu toh jaitsar mein na rokh sakke hai par anandi toh rokk sakke hai na

Shiv looked as dadisa confused

Main jaanu ho ki tharo abhi abhi byaah hauyo hai par anandi ke paas bhi kitni zimdari hai.sarpanch ka kaam karno ho...bade bhoodo ka eskol chalano hai aur ab toh ganga ko bhi vaada kiyo hai ki uski pardai mein madad karegi. Itna sab ekdum se kaise chord kar jaavegi chori.toh agar annadi ko jaitsar uske kaam khatan honne tak chorde toh...har hafte aa jaaio chori se milne

Shiv was shocked but knew that this transfer was focing anandi leave her dreams which made him more quilty now. He was about to speak when he saw a figure standing at the door which shocked expression on her face

Anandi?

Dadisa looked towards the door and felt uneasy to see Anandi

Anandi silently entered the room and both Shiv and Dadisa got up from their seats.

Aap yaha...kuch kaam tha

Main lunch laai ho...baataya tha na aapko subha Anandi said in low and surprised tone

Oh right...yaad aaya Shiv replied in a low tone

Aur ye resignation bhi

Resignation?

Haa...ab sirf kuch hi din baache hai Udaipur jaane mein toh maine socha ki jald se jald redsignation dedo

She looked at Dadisa while saying the words 'sirf kuch hi din baache hai Udaipur jaane mein' which made Dadisa look here and there

The room remained in silence for some moment and then Anandi spoke acha main chalti ho...derho rahi hai

Dadisa immediately replied chal chori toh mahare saath haveli chal sab bahut khush hoge tujhe dekh kar

Nahi Dadisa aaj nahi aa sakti wo mujhe ma ki madad karni hai packing mein...abhi tak shuru bhi nahi kiya hai...jab vakt milega tab aaogi

Shiv said its ok Anandi mein ma ko baata doonga...tum dadisa ke saath chali jao

He knew very well that packing was just an excuse but he didn't want any coldness b/w Singhs and Anandi for now

Anandi plainly refused again and siad that she should go now

Dadisa said Shib beta main bhi chalti ho...and she left with Anandi

Anandi was just going to enter the car when Dadisa stopped her

Anandi main jaano ho ki maine jo shib ko bola uss baat se thareko bura laga pr main sirf thari aur mhare parivaar ki khushi ke baare mein soch rahi

Aur uss parivaar mein Shiv aur mere sasuraal vaale toh aate hi nahi...aapne ek baar bhi nahi socha dadisa ki agar aap mujhe yaad karegi toh Shiv ke parivaar wale bhi toh unhe yaad karte hoge

Main aapki takleef samjh sakti ho par dadisa mujhe toh ab shiv ke saath rehna hai toh unse alag rehkar mujhe kaha khushi milegi aur apne hi toh sikhaya that na ki beti ka ghar shaadi ke baat uska saasural hi hota toh phir aaj kyu? Pehle he vo bevajaah itne sharminda mahsoos kar rahi hai iss transferko lekar aur apne unse iss baare mein baat karke unhe aur takleef dedi...Dadisa mujhe maaf kar di jiye par main Shiv ke bina yaha nahi reh sakti aur ye main sirf ek patni ke farz se nahi balki apne dil se bol rahi ho

Anandi had drawn a laxman rekha between her and singhs by declaring her love for her in-laws and husband and made it clear that she never wants them to cross

Dadisa looked ashamed and realized that now their is no use to turn the events as anandi has found her true happiness in her saasra.

Anandi left making Dadisa realize her mistake and also silently thanking Devima for giving Anandi's patience and love her dues in form of shiv and her saasra.

good one. hope it happens the way u imagined in the serial.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Outstanding, hope we see this in the episode. I really want Anandi to stand up against DS for Shiv once in a lifetime.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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exactly...me too want anandi just make ds realise that she is talking advantage of shiv now...i don't know in which way mr yadav show this...but i wanna see that..this time anandi standlike himalaya b/w shiv and her sasra and DS and her pota
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
amazing as usual...loved the anandi rekhaaa...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
👏 congratulations on your first OS!

Love the fact that A walked in on DS trying to get her way and blew the plan out of the water! Wish this happens on the show too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
love it.. i hope show mai bhi asia kuch ho...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its wonderful.Dont call this rubbish.Very well written and what all of us want in the serial...Anandi laying down very clear cut rules and saying that her life is now with Shiv.In fact if the write up which says that she will stay back in badi haveli is true...that is the only thing which will be rubbish
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you so much for your encouraging comments...actually before this i had once tried to write an os but someone had written on the same story line and it was so good that i erased mine and never got the courage to write more...now i will try for more and better os...big thanks to os/ff writers of this forum...after reading their os/ff i got the inspiration to try my handing in writing...they work helped in choosing words to describe any situation in a better way 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice OS..hats off to ur imagination👏
loved it..plz write more

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