~Lakh Duniyan Kahe~ - Khushiyan 2~ Page 7

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Shiv
Kisi Ko Apna Banane Me Der Lagti Hai,
Kiya Hua Waada Nibhane Me Der Lagti Hai,
Pyaar To Pal Bhar Me Ho Jaata Hai,
Par Unhe Bhulane Me Saari Umar Bhi Kam Pad Jaati Hain



Anandi

Jaadu Sa Hai Teri Har Baat Me
Yaad Aata Hai Tu Din Or Raat Me
Kal Dekha Tha Jab Tumhara Sapna
Tab Bhi Tha Mera Haath Tumhare Haath Me





Prologue

Hum Agar Aapse Mil Nahi Paate
Aisa Nahi Hai Ki Aap Hamein Yaad Nahi Aate
Maana Jahan Ke Sab Rishte Nibhaye Nahi Jaate
Lekin Jo Dil Me Bas Jaate Hain Unhe Bhulaya Nahi Jaata
Anandi smiling,"Shiv mein nehi janti hum thodi der mein hum dono ek sath honde ya nehi bas mujhe intna pata hai ke mein aapse bahut pyar karti hoon" Shiv staring her, holding her even more closer "Nehi Anandi aisa mat kahu...please" Anandi"Shiv akhari baar, I-I-I L-OOO-V-EEE UUU"
Shiv shouting, "Nehi...nehi...nehi...Anandi" Few tears came out of his eyes. Anandi closed her eyes.

Why is that Shiv is sad today???????? He waited for so many days to hear this. But what happened today that he is so sad today???? Why has Anandi closed her eyes???????



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NOTICE
I wanted to tell you all this my first FF, I mean any sought of writing. Any complaints regarding it please send me a PM. And please no Prats vs Toral here. Just read, comment about the story, like and enjoy. Please no fights...My humble request.

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2. Updates will be done on Saturday or Sunday.

3. And once again no BASHING

4. If any bashing (character or member) will be reported.

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INDEX
Part 1 Sainyara ~3
Part 2'1 Khushiyan 1 ~5
Part 2'2 Khushiyan 2 ~7
Edited by Arya75 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow vry gud start plz update nd reveal d suspense bt if u wanna take time for reveal d suspense its ok bt dnt take time for update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yeh kyaa yaaar...theatrical trailers bhi isse lamba hotha haiii...itna chottu saaa info diya, as if it was an SMS...
A suspense scrpt, so plz update soooner and unfold the suspense sooonnn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U hv a nice build up for your plot...now waiting to see the construction and then ofcourse the final outcome 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anshfever

wow vry gud start plz update nd reveal d suspense bt if u wanna take time for reveal d suspense its ok bt dnt take time for update.


Thanks...😊😊😊

And I will update at every Saturdays and Sundays😳😳😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kurup

yeh kyaa yaaar...theatrical trailers bhi isse lamba hotha haiii...itna chottu saaa info diya, as if it was an SMS...

A suspense scrpt, so plz update soooner and unfold the suspense sooonnn...


Sabhr ka fal metha hota hai...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: roberoi

U hv a nice build up for your plot...now waiting to see the construction and then ofcourse the final outcome 😆


Just wait and watch...😉😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG 😲

kya tailor hain yeh

suru kar jaldi se 🤗

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