AnSh FF ~Shadows~ Cmpltd 9/5 NOTE -100 - Page 76

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Posted: 12 years ago
😆😆😆...even you caught the twins bug!😳😳

Nice and pleasant Epilogue...A perfect beginning to a perfect story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww... Ansh hv thier bundle of joy... Thier two lovely kids... Cho..chweet ... I love thier names also... Happy sweet family...enjying fun time... I love this ending part... Its like cherry on the cake... Beautiful dear... ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
First Thanks for giving us such beautiful story, but it ended.

Beautiful epilogue a perfect family picture. A family and future that anandi deserved.

Please do keep writing and entertain your readers.

This is for you 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago


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lovely story Pal... 👏 👏 👏

the epilogue was very good.. .nice ending to the story!!! 👍🏼

you are an awesome writer... 😊




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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you ! Thank you all, for all the appreciation. It is the enthusiastic response from each and everyone of you that kept me going through this.

Thanks to all readers and all those who liked. I hope you'll will continue appreciating my work and chiming in with any suggestions , feedback.

For all those interested a new FF tentatively titled Chaltey Chaltey can be found here

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3565679


Edited by pAL-pAL - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful epilogue Pal!!! it cudnt have a better ending... picture perfect!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Pal..
Just finished reading the ff..and i realised that i've already read some bits of it..
But after reading it entirely...i want to say that This is one of the best scripts on AnSh i've read ever...!
And your writing style is a class apart!
I wish you get to publish this script..
One thing i wanna say..
If you don't mind..
The way you have described the beautiful settings in your ff..it reminded me of Uma's os's..she used to describe them in such a...lyrical way...
And the naughty,teasing,tickling AnSh in the end reminded me of Vedo's os's...
Oh How i miss reading such beautiful scripts!
And @Epilogue...Aww..
Your and debbie's ff have revived AnSh in my imagination!
Do continue writing!:-)
Edited by Jaishreeka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww Pal...
I am spell bound to say anything on this chapter...U know that I was not there to read it as and when u updated, but now wen i read i am glad that I could read this whole script at a go and wat more could I have asked for...
I always have said this from the start that u r an amazing author...the style of ur writing is very unique...
"Shadows" will always hold a special place in my heart for its story, for the style of its writing, and for the beautiful settings tooo...
I think along with appreciations criticisms are also welcomed...I dint like the fact that u dint show how anandi accepted shiv's proposal or wat was her reaction to shiv's proposal...U could have added few lines to that..the way shiv proposed was just wowww...and was expecting that u would show how anandi reacted to it but u directly showed the honeymoon stages...
If u could revisit this and could add it somewhere i think it would b perfect...
One more thing I would like to suggest u is that u r such a fab author with such flawless style I think u can surely think about publishing this script...Its a mindblowing script...Think of it and work on it dear...
Thank u for giving such an entertainer to all the readers...U surely have given a treat to us through this fiction...
Keep continuing with this beuatiful art of urs...All the best for ur future projects...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kurup

Woww Pal...

I am spell bound to say anything on this chapter...U know that I was not there to read it as and when u updated, but now wen i read i am glad that I could read this whole script at a go and wat more could I have asked for...
I always have said this from the start that u r an amazing author...the style of ur writing is very unique...
"Shadows" will always hold a special place in my heart for its story, for the style of its writing, and for the beautiful settings tooo...
I think along with appreciations criticisms are also welcomed...I dint like the fact that u dint show how anandi accepted shiv's proposal or wat was her reaction to shiv's proposal...U could have added few lines to that..the way shiv proposed was just wowww...and was expecting that u would show how anandi reacted to it but u directly showed the honeymoon stages...
If u could revisit this and could add it somewhere i think it would b perfect...
One more thing I would like to suggest u is that u r such a fab author with such flawless style I think u can surely think about publishing this script...Its a mindblowing script...Think of it and work on it dear...
Thank u for giving such an entertainer to all the readers...U surely have given a treat to us through this fiction...
Keep continuing with this beuatiful art of urs...All the best for ur future projects...


I also second Kurup's opinion...we Anshians were eagerly waiting to know Anandi's reaction to Shiv's proposal & the aftereffect 😊

But I also feel that sometimes the best is to be left for reader's imagination.

For example I have watched many movies where they don't show The Jesus, The Budha or any heavenly creature...we just hear the voice. Its something to feel or something beyond the author's creation.

Anyways great job Pal, in whatever form you present it, you just make us strive for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
I agree with u Debbie and Pal u wrote it such beautifullly that we readers want to have it more, may b u have finished this script, but still it is very fresh in our minds each and every chapter is still running in our minds and wat we missed was this...coz ANSH are hotness and love personified together and kaun itna bewakoof haii jo ansh ke iss phase ko padnaa nahi chahegaa...
so if u can try add an additional chapter in between after shiv's confession and before their honeymoon chapters about anandi and her turmoil when shiv proposed her...how she escaped from shiv's gaze that day after proposing, how she accepted, how the family came to know of their acceptance and alll...
A small wish hee samjhlo yaaraa..

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