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Sudha

@Sudharies

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Wonderful update, just loved it. You have an amazing style.😊

Waiting for the next one

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debbie

@Debbiee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Shiv & Anandi are like lock and key combination. Anandi has the right amount of patience and softness to absorb Shiv's fierceness, self-hatred. I must say they are leading towards a very mature relationship. I can see that Shiv is still in a state of detachment, not ready to accept the lovely god-sent gift before him.

Do men & women feel pain the same way? Well your description says yeah, pain is pretty much the same. But their (Shiv & Anandi's) reaction has been different. Shiv has lost his self-esteem which he definitely needs back by Anandi's consolation. This one has been the best part from you so far. Bravo 👏

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roberoi

@roberoi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Pal what do I say? This update is areflection of such intricate relationships between man and woman that I am still in the process of grasping it 😛

Need some time and promise will absorb it before your next update😆

Woman you are awesome and I salute use of your favorit lines at such apt situations...now you create such situations or they just crop up is the question 😉

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palpal15

@palpal15

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: roberoi
Pal what do I say? This update is areflection of such intricate relationships between man and woman that I am still in the process of grasping it 😛

Need some time and promise will absorb it before your next update😆

Woman you are awesome and I salute use of your favorit lines at such apt situations...now you create such situations or they just crop up is the question 😉

Nah Sangyji... Getting the drift... I had written this draft weeks ago.

What can I say its just one of those coincidences.

😊.

Waiting for ur updated comment. 🤗

Edited by pAL-pAL - 12 years ago

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palpal15

@palpal15

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Kurup
Wowww...this update for me holds a special place in my heart...The way u portrayed it is reallly beautifullly amazing...

How true is the line that it is our choice which actuallly shows what we are,,,,amazing work dear...

Do continue this beautiful work soooner

Thank u dear. 😊

Glad u liked it.

This particular line always stood out for me in the HPseries. One of those things that stay with u, no matter what.😊

Edited by pAL-pAL - 12 years ago

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palpal15

@palpal15

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Manshi
Oh... Pal... this is superb...👏👏👏... U made me..😭😭😭.. it was so emotional nd touchy...
Well done👍🏼.. I like the part very much... 🤗... Pls update next part soon... I want more nd more from u...😊

Manshi dear, awww...🤗.

Thanks for writing in. Will update soon.😊

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palpal15

@palpal15

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: ananthesh
Wonderful update, just loved it. You have an amazing style.😊
Waiting for the next one

Thanks dear.

Glad u liked it. 😊

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palpal15

@palpal15

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: debumonty
Shiv & Anandi are like lock and key combination. Anandi has the right amount of patience and softness to absorb Shiv's fierceness, self-hatred. I must say they are leading towards a very mature relationship. I can see that Shiv is still in a state of detachment, not ready to accept the lovely god-sent gift before him.

Do men & women feel pain the same way? Well your description says yeah, pain is pretty much the same. But their (Shiv & Anandi's) reaction has been different. Shiv has lost his self-esteem which he definitely needs back by Anandi's consolation. This one has been the best part from you so far. Bravo 👏

Bang on analysis.

Plus I think Shiv here has an edge to him. Sji in BV is like perfection personified. 😳

wanted to explore this bit of edgy Shivness thru my work.

Thanks for the kind words. 😳

PS: u can call me Pal.

Edited by pAL-pAL - 12 years ago

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Payali09

@Payali09

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Hi Pal! Thanks for the lovely update. Loved the JKR quote, one of my all-time faves 👏 Never thought Dumbledore and AnSh would be on the same page together, haha!

I like that your tough nut Shiv is finally starting to crack but there's a long way to go, me thinks. Am sure though that love will win out in the end but its not going to be an easy battle/war!