SS: Anthapura - Part 18 Upd - Apr 19th - Page 43

Originally posted by: Onir

Okay as said earlier I have tried putting words to why does Prithvi click for me here more than the lead Shiv...:

• His elusiveness is something that attracts me to find out what is there that is hidden & causes him to be so secluded, in a trance like state yet very much human in form of need of love & pain of lost love. He is all concealing yet all charming... which captivates me yet intrigues me...
• As put in some earlier parts... H described him not one who would make you go weak in your knees... but then one who does hold onto your attention, someone who is not one of many but one who holds & comes from a different stock altogether.
• Authoritarian, attitude that speaks loads about his self image & self esteem... ( May be not same as what meets the eyes... but enough to make a distinct first impression ,which further on goes to defy all that you percieve at first.) This hide & seek is what makes him take much greater precedence in comparison to Shiv... as each part leads to revealation of a new facet to him. Each way a small nugget or clue towards solving the puzzle he presents to me...
• H has made him very recluse, reserved, arrogant yet one who cares & goes to great lengths to make adjustments... Also one who is childlike & all lost waiting to be tended to when on a day he feels he is very lonely & lacks everything cause of past pains. His arrogance somewhere puts you off, very demanding in approach... but at the same time does give the other person genuine space & respect for settling with his moods, temperaments.
• Very contrasting to people ... one from who feels to safeguard self to not be weak & crumble down & then to ones who he knows will be there even to hold on to him & aid him when all tethered & on verge of lossing it all. For instance... he gets livid & enraged on granting of favours uncalled for within his demand of capacity or work frame... but at the different time all smiles & innoncence personified when craving & putting forward his likings for Idlis, dosas. His knowledge of the world yet being grounded ( Difference between tea & chai... & callling Aanandi Mandu...)
• Lastly his passion & love for all that he does. A master weaver & artist who envisions creative & magical formations from the very nothingness. This also reflecting in his love. His emotions & feelings towards Mitra are so deeply embedded that his being cannot be described or understood unless having a knowledge & understanding of Mitra. His love being so extreme that its loss makes him crave for such a trance to be cut off from all others.

I guess I have got an overdose of Prithvi here... God please help me...( H see what have you done to me...😉) I better find some other distraction even if it is Shiv ( Please develop this character more for the sake of me & my sanity...😆) I need to take a break from Prithvi for some time now...😊

Seriously Krishna even I'm wondering from where did all this matter come from. 😉


After posting the whole comment I was like... I have gone overboard as well insane... To type so much on one character ... * phew *... 😆 😆
Now even I want shiv to feature soon... So there will be some competition and difference for me too remain sane ... 😉 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: Onir

Okay as said earlier I have tried putting words to why does Prithvi click for me here more than the lead Shiv...:

• His elusiveness is something that attracts me to find out what is there that is hidden & causes him to be so secluded, in a trance like state yet very much human in form of need of love & pain of lost love. He is all concealing yet all charming... which captivates me yet intrigues me...
• As put in some earlier parts... H described him not one who would make you go weak in your knees... but then one who does hold onto your attention, someone who is not one of many but one who holds & comes from a different stock altogether.
• Authoritarian, attitude that speaks loads about his self image & self esteem... ( May be not same as what meets the eyes... but enough to make a distinct first impression ,which further on goes to defy all that you percieve at first.) This hide & seek is what makes him take much greater precedence in comparison to Shiv... as each part leads to revealation of a new facet to him. Each way a small nugget or clue towards solving the puzzle he presents to me...
• H has made him very recluse, reserved, arrogant yet one who cares & goes to great lengths to make adjustments... Also one who is childlike & all lost waiting to be tended to when on a day he feels he is very lonely & lacks everything cause of past pains. His arrogance somewhere puts you off, very demanding in approach... but at the same time does give the other person genuine space & respect for settling with his moods, temperaments.
• Very contrasting to people ... one from who feels to safeguard self to not be weak & crumble down & then to ones who he knows will be there even to hold on to him & aid him when all tethered & on verge of lossing it all. For instance... he gets livid & enraged on granting of favours uncalled for within his demand of capacity or work frame... but at the different time all smiles & innoncence personified when craving & putting forward his likings for Idlis, dosas. His knowledge of the world yet being grounded ( Difference between tea & chai... & callling Aanandi Mandu...)
• Lastly his passion & love for all that he does. A master weaver & artist who envisions creative & magical formations from the very nothingness. This also reflecting in his love. His emotions & feelings towards Mitra are so deeply embedded that his being cannot be described or understood unless having a knowledge & understanding of Mitra. His love being so extreme that its loss makes him crave for such a trance to be cut off from all others.

I guess I have got an overdose of Prithvi here... God please help me...( H see what have you done to me...😉) I better find some other distraction even if it is Shiv ( Please develop this character more for the sake of me & my sanity...😆) I need to take a break from Prithvi for some time now...😊

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I was about to say, "Onir, you didn't have to justify why you like Prithvi. I have to do that in the next update anyways, because that is Anandi's question too" yesterday. But, after reading your thoughts I think its entirely necessary. ;)

Avi ... 🤗

You don't need to wonder how I entered your mind as we are at same wavelength for this one. After all angels in crime . 😉

I guess it's telepathic waves & connection between us... 😆

H. I'm glad my comment could do so... 😆

Will wait for that... 😊

Hi H, remember me???

Just when I thought that I should wait for NYt update a little longer this came in way, your writing is asusual beautiful, mindblowing, awesome, fantabulous, mushy, choclatty and more than a fairy tale.

I really found it funny that you mentioned Maan here and that he was eating Prithvi's head. Anyways, both male protagonists are prominent here, I have not watched any of Prithvi's movies nor Shiv's soaps, but they both have an attractive character, Anandi looks childish only sometimes. And about Aditi , you seem to like her don't you? She is indeed very good looking and homely kind of a person, when I first saw her in Delhi-6 I was thinking where was she all these years and all of a sudden she comes as hero's aunt(LOL).

Narration of story is very good.

Please continue and kindly PM me, add me to the buddy list if I am not there.

Shall i send you few more songs??? 😕 its been long time!!!!

My family is visiting and I have too many people at home to let me focus. Give me some time and I should be back in the next few days.