Ghante ki baji ghanti(My take on AnSh v/s Jug)-OS

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Heya everyone.🤗Guys me back with what I love a lot - writing! But again this is one of my instant pulavs I am fond of cooking these days.Bcoz quite literally I feel like pissed at my own writing these days.So dont expect this one to be wondorous in terms of language and expression bcoz they are sucking these days.Just wrote it for enjoyment purpose bcoz I srsly enjyed a lot while writing it.😆 Hope u all feel betta reading it.
P.S. - Sorry to all the Jug fans if u feel offended reading this OS.
Backdrop:
The back drop of the OS is that Jagiya lands in the haveli as Nandu has caught swine flu.But in the meantime while everyone is presuming that Jagiya is a changed man,Anandi and Shiv figure out about his manipulations with the rail budget.Anandi blasts Jagiya big time for trying to harm Shiv and shows him his actual place.But knowing how much dadisa and nandu need him atm AnSh decide to keep his evil act a secret in front of the Singhs.
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A smile crossed Anandi's lips as soon as she heard the sound of Shiv's jeep outside the haveli. Placing the dishes on the table Anandi rushed towards the door making Gehena and Sumitra giggle among themselves. Anandi beamed with joy as she walked Shiv towards the hall where the whole of the Singh family was seated. As their proximity reached a reasonable level necessary for a discourse, Shiv exchanged smiles with everyone and touched dadisa's feet.
"Shiv itna intezaar to anandi ne kabhi apne pareeksha parinam ka bhi na kiya hoga jitna aaj woh tumhara kar rahi thi" gehna teased Anandi as she walked in, making Anandi and Shiv look shyly at each other.😳
"Tayijee ye mere liye kisi pareeksha parinaam se kam na tha,,,bas farak sirf itna hai ki iss baar mehnat meri nahin collector sahab ki thi" Anandi pointed passing the letter to bhairon;leaving a blush on Shiv's face. Bhairon's eyes filled with pride as soon as he read the letter. The letter proposed the building of a girl's high school in jetsar within the next six months. Bhairon praised Anandi and Shiv for their hard work saying it was only possible with them working as a team; leaving Anandi and shiv steal shy glances at one another.
On the other hand, Jagiya, who was seeing all this from upstairs, fumed in anger. He couldn't understand why his family loved the khadoos collector so much. Even despite of all his efforts to show himself as a transformed man, Jagiya couldn't manage to enjoy the same level of love and attention his enemy enjoyed. And the very thought used to leave him enraged.
As soon as everyone in hall got busy in their respective conversations, Shiv gestured Anandi to serve him the halwa she had promised him. Anandi who had planned to bug him gestured there was no halwa, leaving a puppy expression on her suniyejee's face.😆 He pouted sadly and stood up disheartened.
"Arey chora kahan jave hai?" dadisa asked shiv.
"woh dadijee main ghar ja raha hoon"
"ghar?ekdum se ke hua the?"
"nahin dadijee woh kafi kaam hai...subah ek meeting bhi hai. Main ab chalta hoon"
"Par apna halwa to kha le...pata hai subah se lagi hai chori tere liye halwa banane"
"Kya halwa?"😲Shiv was surprised "Par anandijee ne to kaha ki halwa nahin bana"
"aiso kab kaha maine to na suna"
"dadijee abhi abhi kaha jab main unhein ishara kar raha tha"😲😆
Suddenly Shiv realized what he'd say...everyone in the hall including Anandi broke into a giggle making his face glow beet red with embarrassment.😳
"Ye to bahut galat baat hai anandi...aise koi apne hone wale beendh ko chedta hai kya,,,tu to abhi se Shiv ki beendhni jaise bartav karne lagi" sumitra elbowed Anandi in her ribs. Now it was anandi's turn to feel embarrassed while Shiv grinned hearing the words beendh and benndhni. ☺️
Now everyone sat and relished the halwa together while Jagiya peaked helplessly from upstairs. His family didn't even bother to ask him to join for halwa. It seemed to him as if Shiv had kicked him out of his own family picture.
Finishing the halwa, Shiv stood up to take everyone's leave when his shoulder accidently brushed against that of Anandi making him shudder in discomfort. Anandi moved back worriedly.
"kya hua collector sahib aap aise chillaye kyun?"Anandi had suddenly become too worried.
"nahin kuch nahin anandijee"
"kuch nahin?aap chillaye...kuch nahin kaise?"
"woh choti si chot lag gayi thi bas...aise hi aap chinta mat keejiye main theek hoon"
"aap theek nahin hain...sirf chune se aapko itna dard hua aur aap kah rahe hain kuch nahin. Dikhaiye mujhe"
Now everyone in the Singh house was really worried for Shiv.
DS: Gehena tu jake haldi wala doodh bana.
B: Main abhi lal singh ko phone karta hoon.
Sumi: Aur main sek ke liye paani garam karti hoon...
Jagiya's ears blew fumes as he saw his stupid family going mad about that collector and his little injury as if he was dying. Shiv was overwhelmed at the concern his in-laws were showering at him but he calmed everyone down and ensured how he was absolutely fine and dint need any doctors.
"Par ye sab hua kaise choro"
"woh dadijee main abhi meeting ke liye nikala hi tha ki road pe ek cycle wala wrong side se aa raha tha...bas use bachate bachate meri jeep ped se takra gayi aur thodi sic hot aa gayi.Par ab main bilkul theek hoon...kisi ko bulane ki koi zaroorat nahin. Aur waise bhi lal singh hospital mein bahut busy hai aajkal...main nahin chahta itni mamooli si chot ke liye use koi pareshani ho"Shiv told dadisa.
"theek hai agar lal singh ko nahin bulana to kam se kam dawa to lagwa leejiye"
"anandijee aap bekaar hi chinta kar rahi hain'main theek hoon"
"collector sahib ye to aap bhi jante hain ki main aapko aise nahin jaane dungi"
"chora itni zidd mat kar...aur waise bhi Anandi ek baar than leve to apne saamne kisi ka na chalne deti hai...isliye uski baat maan lene mein hi thari bhali hove" dadisa joked making shiv smile to himself. Despite all his protests Anandi stayed firm at her resolve. Knowing he had no other options left Shiv walked up with Anandi towards her room.
As soon as jagiya saw them coming upstairs he ran to hide himself in dadisa's room. Much to his horror he saw Anandi and Shiv coming towards dadisa's room only as the lights of anandi's room had suddenly become non-functional. Jagiya bit his lower lip as he realized that Anandi and Shiv had already entered in the room. Now he had no chance to escape. He hurriedly hid himself behind the curtains but gasped in pain as a pointed nail that sprang from the window pressed against his butt.🤣 He covered his mouth to block the shriek; He to his horror was now stuck in quite an interesting position.🤣 At his back was the pin that holed his behind and in front was Anandi and shiv holing his heart.😆 😆
Anandi and Shiv who were totally oblivious to Jagiya's presence in the room behaved as normally as any other engaged couple would behave. Anandi scolded Shiv for not taking care of himself while he looked at her fondly, enjoying her concern. Anandi was furious and told him to unbutton his shirt so that she can have a better idea of how serious his wound was. Jagiya could not believe all this was happening in front of his eyes. He felt like passing out then and there only.
"main madat kar deti hoon" Anandi spoke as she saw Shiv struggling with his shirt. Jagiya looked away in disgust but gulped another silent yell as the pin at his behind pierced deeper, with him trying to shift his position.😆
Removing Shiv's shirt Anandi softly caressed the spot on his shoulder that had reddened and swollen due to the injury. Shiv let out a shrill wince as Anandi pressed the tender spot making her sigh.
"Itni zyaada lagi hai aur aap kah rahe the ki kuch bhi nahin hai,,,aap itne laparwah kaise ho sakte hain Shiv "Anandi spoke in a painful voice that made Shiv feel bad.
"I am sorry Anandi" Shiv confessed cutely holding his ears "Anandi agar main tumhein bata deta to tum kabhi mujhe meeting mein na jane deti aur mujhe pata tha ki ye meeting tumhare liye kitni important hai. Phir tum hi batao main tumhein kaise batata"
"shiv pls...mere liye woh meeting important thi par aapki sehat se badhkar nahin. Aap jante hain ye baat. Pls aage se aisa kabhi mat keejiyega" Anandi's words touched Shiv deeply and he promised not to repeat the same ever. Jagiya was totally taken aback seeing Anandi's worry and concern for Shiv. Till now he had thought of their bond as a one-sided affair but not anymore. The fact that Anandi too cared for shiv as much as he did put jagiya's heart on fire. Everything seemed unbearable to him. He suddenly felt so jealous that it felt as if his body had been attacked by a million tiny pests that crawled on him pitilessly. He wished to run away from the room right away.
"Shiv aap yahin rukiye main apne kamre se dawa lekar aati hoon"Anandi told shiv as she moved out to fetch medicine for him. Shiv too walked out to attend a call giving Jagiya a chance to escape. As soon Jagiya saw AnSh out of the room he tried to run away with as much strength he had in his legs but unfortunately couldn't do so bcoz of the butt that had numbed till now. He limped on the same leg and tried to walk away before anyone caught him red-handedly.
After a few minutes both Shiv and Anandi returned back to the room. Anandi was about to close the door when she suddenly saw Jagiya trying to peak from a distance.
He was already going insane with rage and felt like blasting any moment.😡
"tum yahan kya kar rahe ho jayiya" Anandi chided him angrily.
"ye to mujhe tumse poochna chahiye Anandi.Tum iss kamre mein uss collector ke saath kya kya kar rahi thi! Lagta hai uske saath rah ke tumhari saari sharam aur lihaz khatam ho gayi hai...tabhi to aise besharmon ki tarah uske saath ek kamre mein pata nahin kya kar rahi ho"
Anandi felt disgusted at Jagiya's comment. He had crossed all limits and she had no more patience. But knowing she had to remain silent for dadisa and rest of her family Anandi tried to cool herself down.
"Mr jagdeesh singh shayad aap ye bhool rahe hain ki ab aap mere pati nahin hain.Hamara talak ho chukka hai.Isliye ab aapko koi haq nahin banta mujhse koi bhi sawal karne ka.Aap saare haq bahut pehle hi kho chuke hain. Ab sirf ek hi insaan ka haq hai mujhpar aur who hain mere hone wale pati Shiv.Achcha hoga agar aap mera samay na barbaad Karen aur mujhe unke paas jabe dein kyunki unhein meri zaroorat hai" saying so Anandi slammed the door on Jagiya's face leaving him glued at his place.🤣
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Edited by Malika - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Malika

At his back was the pin that holed his behind and in front was Anandi and shiv holing his heart

👏👏 Hope this happens in the show.
This is very nice OS, a much needed one to survive the news of J's havelii reentry. Thanks Malika.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah kya sukoon mila dil ko ... Goong to have a sweet good night now...jagiya ki butt hahaha I am going to dream of this only now 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Malika: You are up this late with your Khayali Pulav !!! 😆
Nice one ! Loved the position you put jagya in. Deserves it. Felt good reading it because I know in BV it is going to take some more time for this whole fiasco to come out.
Waiting for Anandi to speak up like she did to Jagya in real too..
Edited by dixie123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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would love to see in the serial...very well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much for little medicine on our wounds too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb👍🏼
Finally Jagia was pricked 😵 you know where and I hope the pin stays there as a painful reminder!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome . Loved it. Really needed OS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please keep writing such fabulous stuff...CV's need good ideas 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Malika 👏

Kaash apke OS CVs saakar kare

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