Tistaa's FF:Chalte Chalte(02/12/12 on page 8) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one pinki liked it very much good work
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Lovely n long update Pinki! 👏 👏
So now the journey starts...with friendship!! ☺️ Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya !! Please do post the next part ASAP...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anandi was still feeling little hesitation in her mind.She didn't understand how to start………but suddenly her all doubts was vanished when she felt a strong warm hand on her shoulder giving her unlimted assurance.Then she started her story…………….

A: Kareb ek mahine pahele ki baat hai.Main meri kuch dost aur meri best friend asha aur uski boyfriend Abhishek ki sath ek chhoti si outing karne gayi thi.Kitna khush thi main usdin kyun ki who meri Birthday gift tha meri friends ki taraaf se aur ussi din main kisi se milli jinho ne meri zindegi badal diya…………Jagat……….Jisko maine saab se jyada pyaar kia aur meri pyaar ki beadle jisse mujhe sirf tanhai mili. Mujhe nahi pata tha uss din ki ek chhoti si mulakat meri zindegi mein itni toofan le ayegi.Woh hamari hi camping spot pe tha ,Photo le raha tha………ghumne ayatha woh Mount Abu mein.Maine usko dekha aur ek ajeeb sa attracktion feel hua pata nahi kyat ha who…….par joh bhi tha mujhe nafrat hai uss feeling se," suddenly her face turned into disgust ,anger and hatred.

Shiv undertood her feeling and very softly he said ,"Go on………I am here to listen,"

Anandi stared at him with teary eyes and nodded her head then she again started," Woh apne kuch dosto ke sath ayatha aur hum dono ki group ek dusre ki sath ghulmill gaya.Humari tin din ki camping thi but unlogo ki do din kit hi but wohi do dino main aur Jagat ek dusre bohoth karee baa gaye…….itne kareeb ki main ne apni saari zindegi uske sath bitane ki sapne dekhna shuru kar diya," Anandi started sobbing and Shiv gently rubbed her shoulder.After sometime she again Started……

"Hum dono the toh saabke bich but aisa laag raha tha ki humari ek alag hi duniya hai………aur hum dono ki friends hum logo ki taang khichai karte the yeh kahe kar ki ek din mein hi tum log saara pyaar kar loge toh shaadi ki baad kya karoge? Jis din woh jaanewala tha uski pahele raat ko woh mujhe bulaya tent ki bahar aur saab se durr le jakar yeh kaha ki,,,,,,,,,Anandi ,yeh joh raat main Asmaan bharkar taare hai yeh meri pyaar ki gawah hai…….yeh jitney saare hai tumhare liye mera pyaar utna hi hai…..chahe kuch bhi ho jaye main hamesha tum se pyaar karoonga aur yeh Wada hai mera……." Then Anandi smiled with disgust and said,"Huh….Wada….kash Jagat uska matlab bhi samajhta…….woh wada itna hi kachcha nikla ki USA mein settle hone ki baat se tuth gaya."

Shiv looked at her little puzzled and asked,"kya matlab? Main kuch samjha nahi."

Anandi said,"ghar lautne ki baad maine soch liya ki Papa aur Mommy ko baata dungi meri relation ki ware mein but I was shocked when I came to know that Papa has already chosen a man for me.woh papa ki dost ka beta hai joh London mein raheta tha.He is big businessman there and very good person.Par mujhe usse mill na hi nahi tha kyun ki mein toh Jagat se pyaar kart i thi nah……..maine papa ko mana kar diya……paheli baar maine papa se unchi awaz mein baat ki……..papa ko bohoth bura laga kyun ki maine hamesha bachpan se apna Rajkumar dhundne ki duty papa ko hi de rakhi thi aur jab sayed woh dhundkar laye toh maine mana kar diya but Papa ne phir bhi meri zidd maani aur Mere aur Jagat ki rishtey se raazi ho gaye.Iss kush khabri dene ke liye maine Jagat ko kitna call kiya uske doston ki bhi call kiya lekin koi response nahi milla.Phir meri bechaini ko dekhkar Papa Jagat se sath face to face baat karne ki advice diya aur khud bhi Jagat se millna chaha."Anandi's voice chocked with pain.She couldn't figure out how to say the next incident which is stabbing her heart and Soul every moment.

Shiv understood that the darkest part is gonna come,so he asked her very softly," Tum kahe paogi Anandi? are you ready? Agar main tumhe trustworthy laagta hoon tum tabhi mujhe batana warna maat baatana mujhe koi shikayat nahi hoga"

Anandi looked at him with full of trust in her eyes and said," nahi Shiv main aj tumhein batana chahati hoon …..main aj iss dard se mukti chahati hoon……..aur iss mukti mujhe sirf tum se hi millegi yeh trust hai mujhe."

Shiv then smiled at her and said," toh bolo Anandi main hoon tumhari sath"

Anandi then started with a sigh,"main aur papa Jaipur gaye usske ghar………pata nahi kyun ek ajeeb si darr laag raha tha mujhe…….jahan mujhe khush hona chahiye tha unha mein daar rahi ghabra rahi thi……..puri do mahine baad jab maine Jagat ko dekhi tab mujhe uski ankhon mein pyaar dikha hi nahi .ek ajeeb si daar aur guilt payi maine.Aur kismaat bhi kya khel khela mujhse pata hai main kaun si din uski ghar gayi thi? Jagat ki engagement ki din………yes he was going to get engaged." Anandi was screaming bitterly while she was saying last words,"Jagat was going to get engagaed with Gauri bcoz her father promise him that Jagat will be settled in USA if he marries Gauri……..meri pyaar ko ussne bikao bana diya…..main ussko kuch kar nahi paayi sirf itna puchthi maine usse Kyun???yeh dokha kyun?aur jawab kya mill?...Jagat ki bapusa ka sapna hai yeh toh yeh toh pura karna hi padhega na usse," then Anandi looked at Shiv full of pain,"par mujhe koi shikayat sayed nahi hota agar woh sirf uski bapusa ka sapna hota…..woh khudh bhi yehi chahta tha….uki liye zindegi mein aage badhna bohoth zaroori tha uski promise se bhi zyada…..main hi bewokuf thi main aapni sath sath apni Papa ka bhi Mazak bana diya puri duniya ki saamne." Then she gave a little pause as she was out of breath."

Shiv then asked her,"phir tum ne kya kiya?"

Anandi:"Papa was trying to convince him but Ididn't let him do that.Main apni papa ki aur beizzati tolerate nahi kar paya aur sirf ek thappad mar paya Jagat ko.lekin aisa laga who thappad maine Jagat ko nahi apne aap ko maara.phir main papa ko lekar laut aayi.Sach mein Shiv main unse aur apni family se nazaar nahi milla paya aur bhaag ke aagayi yahan par."

Shiv in shocked,"Kya? Bhaagke aayi ho?your family don't know anything about this?Pagal ho kya tum pata hai kitna pareshan ho rahe hongay woh log?" Anandi was silent on his question which led him more restless.Then he asked her,"Plz Anani will you tell me how you've done it and why?"

Anandi then said with a hopeless voice,"toh main aur kya karti Shiv.main unse nazar nahi milla pa rahi thi…….issiliye main Asha aur Abhisek se meri halath ki bare main boli aur Abhisek ne saare arrangement kar di kyun ki uske ek dost travel agency mein kam karta hai." There was so much guiltyness in her face as she knew that she has done a mischief.

Shiv then asked her,"Kaise dost hai woh joh tum ko aise khatre mein jaane se roka nahi?" anandi then hurriedly said ,"Nahi nahi issmein unn logo ka koi galti nahi actually maine unn dono ko blackmail ki thi…….agar who yeh nahin karengay toh main pakka suicide karoongi…….."

Shiv glared at her with full of surprise as he couldn't believe what did she just say and his glare made her very uncomfortable…………

P:S This is the gift from bachha to Saangs for her marriage anniversary🤗

@All plz do comment bcoz you comments are really precious and bare with my hindi bcoz I am not good atall in hindi but I hv to incorporate it otherwise I cant covey the feeling of Anandi 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tistaa...I am so overwhelmed...Thank you than you so much for this belated gift 😳

I am so humbled tume yaad rakha aur promise poora kiya inspite of your hectic schedule...love you loads...I owe you one😳

See you in the thread soon...jaldi aa bahut pyaar udelne ko man kar raha hai...


I am so glad she is liking Shiv and trusting him...btw is he the one jisse uske papa ne shadi pakki ki thi 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely River! Yeh dil maange more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: roberoi

Tistaa...I am so overwhelmed...Thank you than you so much for this belated gift 😳


I am so humbled tume yaad rakha aur promise poora kiya inspite of your hectic schedule...love you loads...I owe you one😳

See you in the thread soon...jaldi aa bahut pyaar udelne ko man kar raha hai...


I am so glad she is liking Shiv and trusting him...btw is he the one jisse uske papa ne shadi pakki ki thi 😳

Thank you so much Saangs Embarrassed actually yeh main ne specially tumhare liye hi update kiya 😃 aur kahani main abhi bohot twist aanewala hai toh abhi kuch bata nahi sakti 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely River! Yeh dil maange more...

Thanx Ginu 😳 but tumne apni disclaimer mein woh kya likha tha?Finito???😕😕😕 Y Ginu ?mujhe toh aur bhi padhna hai 😳 plz finish maat karna dear 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello tistaa omg yeh wahi ff hain jo tumne itne uniquely start kiya ii think i missed few parts in between but yeh part kaafi aacha hain pura toh hindi mein likha hain and mere se kaafi acchi hindi hain teri and bolti hain hindi aachi nahin

gt work partner am loving this unique ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzi12

hello tistaa omg yeh wahi ff hain jo tumne itne uniquely start kiya ii think i missed few parts in between but yeh part kaafi aacha hain pura toh hindi mein likha hain and mere se kaafi acchi hindi hain teri and bolti hain hindi aachi nahin


gt work partner am loving this unique ff

Thank you partner 🤗 but you know I really find difficulties in hindi grammer 😕 that is why I said that but I am glad you like it 😳

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