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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blushing



I will share a secret...My wife was sulking wen I screamed ur name in excitement with ur last update, Gauri being slapped by Anandi...🤣

I am so sorry...for trouble.😭

Hope she is better now...😉

Yeaahhh she is fine, it was just a bit of possessiveness at tat time on hearing an other girl's name...just like our Anandi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very much thanks dear...
Such a great OS of part 22...
Keep continue... Waiting for next part...
Oh my God our ANSH romantic was so cute...
The way u r narrating the story was so nice...
Hope it happens... fingers crossed...
Have try to be a writer for some love story serials...
Advance wishes fr the next part of Ansh romance...
With lots of love SHANAVI...

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Posted: 12 years ago
OOO I likeyyy Anandi Slapping Gauriii MUCH MUCH MUCHHH NEEDED CVS please take notes!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u so mach for the lovely os, plllz continue yar. I m eagerly waiting. [:Y:]
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Posted: 12 years ago
love u 2-3 more Aditi. This part so... Good i just loved it, Plsss continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 23

Next morning all of them were gets ready & rushed to the Airport. But unfortunately their flight gets canceled.😭 Shiv enquires about any other flights but all are full. Shiv was in deep thoughts & anandi came she asked him how they will manage to get back in time. They need to reach Jeaitsar today only. Shiv declared they will go back by road & he will drive.😊

Nahi nahi itani dur…anandi was reluctant.😔

Anandi jayada dur kahan hain. Hum 7/8 ghanto mein pooch jayenge. Mujhe aadat hain.😊

Lekin aap itane der tak driving karenge. Kalse kaam bhi suru hoga...aapki tabiyaat...anandi showed some concern.😒

Kuch nahi hoga shiv assures her.😊

Aur bhabhi main bhi driving kar loonga Mahi told her.

Fir hum Jeaitsar nahi direct Swarg mein poochenge Sanchi winked.🤣

Shut up...Sanchi...Mahi sold her.😆

Finally Anandi agreed & they started their road trip to Jeaitsar. Sanchi & Mahi were excited. Shiv was driving & Anandi sits beside him. Mahi & Sanchi were having some argument on back seat.😆

Aap dono zagada mat kijeyeh. Deevar ji main aati hunn peeche aap aage aayega.😊

Nahi nahi aap aage baitheyeh Bhai ke pass main thik hunn Mahi said.

They stop near Behror for some refreshment. Again they start their journey. Sanchi spotted something while looking outside window. It was old fort. It looks very old. Sanchi insisted so they moved toward that Fort.

They enter in fort. It's old fort in bit bad condition. Sanchi & Mahi were busy clicking pictures. While anandi & Shiv keeps looking everywhere.

Kahi purana quila lag raha hain….anandi said

Haan….achhi condition mein bhi nahi hain. Khandahar hee lag raha.

Haan darwana bhi hain. Yeh Sanchi aur Deevarji kitane aage chale gaye ? kahin nazar bhi nahi aa rahe hain. Naye jagah hain…dekheye na Shiv…she turnes. Shiv was disappeared. Anandi scared.😲

Shiv…………kahan hain aap Shiv she screamed.😭 She keeps searching for him. She started calling Mahi & Sanchi. But they couldn't hear her. Anandi had tears in her eyes….she started crying.😭 Shiv kahan hain aap?

Hey Anandi …main yahan hunn…😊

Aanndi looked everywhere. She followed his voice & shocked….He fall 8 fit down.

Aap neeche kaise gir gaye Shiv?

Arre aage dekheke chal raha tha…neecha dekha hee nahi aur…….

Mujhe aawaj kyun nahi dee ?

Arre dee thi lekin tum itane zor se roo rahe thi chilla rahe thi meri aawaaj tumtak pooch nahi paye Shiv said.😆

Aapko mazak lag raha hain. Kuch second ke liye meri toh jaan hee nikal gaye thi. Pata nahi kya kya sooch liya maine. Yahan aapko hansi aa rahe hain.

Nahi main has nahi raha hunn….jao Mahi ko bulao.

Main koshish karti hunn. 👍🏼

Tum….anandi tum nahi kar paogi...🤪

Kyun nahi...ek min. Wahan kuch badasa pathar hain kya?

Haan hain toh sahi. Kya karogi marogi usse mujhe he winked.😉

Nahi aap us par kahde toh rah sakte hain.

Haan ruko...shiv bought some big stone on which he can climb. But still it's not possible.

Ek min she gave him her dupatta & she tide other one around one pillar.

Ab ussko khichke upper aane ki koshish kijeyeh Shiv she told him.

Shiv tried slowly he pushed himself up. Anandi hold him too.

Gosh….wow kya idea lagaya tumne. Thanks.👏

Aapko kahin chot toh nahi lage…dekhun toh….she said.

Nahi kuch jayada nahi bass thodisi karoch aaye bass.

Jayada kaise nahi...abhi thodi der mein dard hona suru hoo jayega. Hey bhagwan bahut chootein lage hain aapko.😭

Mahi & Sanchi showed up too. They were shocked to see Shiv's condition.

Kya hua bhai?😲

Kuch nahi main neeche gir gaya.

Arre bhabhi aapne mujhe bulaya kyun nahi. Aap upper kaise aaye bhai…

Aapki sherni bhabhi ke wajah se.😆

Don't tell me ki bhabhi ne aapko kheenche ke bahar nikala...Sanchi & Mahi screamed.🤣

Nahi...yeh duppata ko pakad ke. Bahar aaye yeh. Tum dono kitani dur chale gaye the...maine kitani aawaaj de tum logon ko. Kitani sunsan jagah hain. Chaleyeh aab.

Soory bhabhi. Extremly sorry. Haan chalate hain😳

Aaram se Shiv Anandi said to him.

Bhai aap change karlo….yeh dekho samane koi hotel dekh raha hain. Hum wahi chalate hain.

Anandi washed his wounds. He changed his clothes too.

Bhai main drive karta hunn. Aap aaram se peeche baithe yeh.

No…I m fine. I can drive.

Nahi aap mere sath peeche baithenge…Anandi ordered him.👍🏼

Shiv & Anandi sits back seat. Mahi was driving. Sanchi was listening some music on her ipad. Shiv felt bit sleepy. Anandi saw him sleeping awkwardly. She move close to him put his head on her shoulder.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 24

They reached late in Jeaitsar. They drop Anandi in Haveli first. Shiv insisted coming down & meets family. But anandi told him not to since they needed rest after hectic journey. Anandi enters in haveli. Dadisa & Bhairon are waiting for her. To see her alone they were surprised.

Shiv aur Sanchi Mahi kahan hain? Andar nahi aaye Dadi sa asked?

Nahi dadi sa…maine mana kar diya. She told them whole story.

Dadi sa looked worried. Bhaut chot aaaye kya Shiv ko kyun re anandi ?

Nahi bahut jayda nahi. Aap chinta mat kejiyeh.

Thik hain. Anandi ab tum aaram kao. Thak gaye hogi Bhairon said.

Anandi came to her room. She fresh up & rings to Sanchi.

Hello Sanchi….tum log pooch gaye na.

Yah bhabhi….ab batayeh kya karna hain?

Haan kitchen mein jao aur doodh garam karo. Aur uss mein haldi dalo usse aapne bhaiya dedo. Aur suno koi painkiller hogi toh bhi dee dena.❤️

Ji bhahi main kar doongi. Ok Good Nt.

Good night. Pata nahi dard ke maare unnhe raat bhar neend aayegi bhi ya nahi she said with concern.

Next day early morning anandi all dressed up and doing something in kitchen. Dadi sa saw her. She asked what she is doing in kitchen in such a hurry.

Ji dadi sa main kuch khane ke liye bana rahe thi. Wahan CH koi nahi hain na. Sanchi aur Mahi bhi hain. Aur unnhe….😳

Kuch kehne ke jaarut na hain chori…..tu jaa. Shiv ko chot bhi lagi hain. Main bolne hee wali thi thare wahan jaane ke liye she said with smile.😊

Anandi hurriedly came to CH. All were sleeping peacefully. Raghu kaka opened door. Anandi directly walk towards Shiv's room. She enters his room saw him he was sleeping. Anandi goes near and sits caress his hair with love.❤️ She looked his buries on hands. She opened her thaila (bag) and put antiseptic cream on his buries. Shiv felt something.☺️ Anandi's tear rolled down on his hand.😭 He opened his eyes. He saw anandi was sitting near to him. He was surprised to see her. He tries get up.

Nahi….lete rahiyah aap Anandi instruct him.👍🏼

Tu itani subah mere pass. Kya baat hain sweetheart🥳 mere bina neend nahi aa rahe thi kya 😉 he winked? Arre isse mein rone wali konsi baat hain Anandi while saying this he gets up.

Kuch nahi…isse hee. Aapse kaha na maine. Aap soo jaye.

Arre lekin tum roo kyun rahe hoo batao toh sahi

Aapko bahut dard hoo raha hoga na. Kal raat ko neend aaye aapko?☺️

Anandi main thik hunn.☺️

Kaise thik hain. Itane neeche gor gaye aap who bhi itani unchaiyee se. Lagi toh hogi aap bata nahi rahe hain.

Nahi I am perfectly fine. He hugged her.🤗 Anandi hugged him back. All of Sudden Shiv felt pain in his back. Anandi saw him in pain.😭

Kya hua?

Kuch nahi….

Nahi kaise aapko peeth pe lagi hain shayaad…main hath lagay toh dard hua….hain na.

Nahi….kuch jayada nahi.

Dekhaye mujhe….she ordered him.👍🏼

Anandi sach mein kuch nahi hain….he tries to say something.

Anandi gave him look. 😡He pulls of his T shirt & turns back. Anandi was shocked to see many bury, dark patches on his back.😭 Dekha….kitani chot aaye hain aapko. She touched his back. Shiv felt pain.😭

Anandi went in kitchen. She mixes some powder & bought back to Shiv's room. She put that powder to his back. Shiv felt some pain he holds her hand.

Kuch nahi Shiv…abhi aapko thandak mehsoos hogi. Main aaram se lagati hunn she said in soft voice.

Now Shiv is feeling much better.😊

Ab aap ko kaisa lag raha hain she asked?

Haan ab accha lag raha ahin. ☺️Tumhara haath lagate hee main thik hoo gaya❤️. He said with lots of love in his eyes.❤️

Ab aap…baithe raheyeh…main aap ke liye chai leke aati hunn.

Nahi baitho na….mere pass. He came close to her.☺️ She pushed him.

Aap aaram se baitheyeh. Main chai late hunn.

She came back with tea & some snacks. But shiv was not in his bad.

Arre kahan chale gaye…Shiv. 😕She started looking for him. He comes out from washroom and holds her from her back.🤗 Anandi was surprised with this.

Shiv….chodieyh. Kya kar rahe hain aap. Aapko chot lagi hain.😳

Nahi…ab main bilkul thik hunn. He hugged her form back more tightly.🤗

Anandi tries to struggles bit and both fell on bed. Shiv was on top of anandi.☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for delay.

I couldn't resist myself for Shiv's shirt utaro abhiyaan.😆

Serial mein yeh delhana shayaad abhi mumkeen nahi hain...😭
isse liye sari Shiv deewani aur mere bhi liye aapne OS mein maine usse shirt less kiya...😉

Gosh I became so shameless...🤣

effect of Shiv aka Sid☺️
Edited by blushing - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mine! 😳
Aditi, you are too good yaar 👏 👏...you will surely give me diabetes from such sweeet updates!!
Haila...Shiv's superwoman saved him!! 😳 Loved her concern for him!
Omg shirtless Shiv...*faints*
Edited by Vedo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply superb Aditi!! Your narration is simple, straight forward yet BANG ON.👏👏.. Loved it so much..

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