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Posted: 12 years ago
Aditi, thanks for taking the time to update even if it was a filler part. ๐Ÿค— You still managed to make me smile! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kurup

Yaaarrr...so sorry to say but cant hold it from saying parrt 19 was reallly boring as u said...nothing interesting except for the way Sanchi and Uday part...Dont give such flller episodes plz, aise toh hum Tv mein filler episodes dekhte hain, but not on IFs plz.,,,,,

gud effort but make it more khattaa, meethaa, theekaa, with more of ANSH and only ANSH...sanchi aur maahi toh chale ANSH ke saath delhi ghumne, but let them give the couples a good space to b alone so that some guttargooo or coochie coochie can happen...



YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND !!!!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Part 20

Next morning Shiv and Mahi are waiting for Anandi & Sanchi in car.๐Ÿ˜” Mahi is getting restless.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Yeh dono kab aayengi bhai he asked. Shiv smiled.๐Ÿ˜Š

Good morning boys'.sanchi said.๐Ÿ˜›

Both of them turn their head & shocked.๐Ÿ˜ฒ Shiv was completely surprise to see Anandi. She was wearing Jeans with long Kurti & Bandhani stole. She was bit awkward. She hides behind Sanchi quickly.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Shiv asked her to come out. He gave her look to top to bottoam.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Anandi tum bahut acchi lag rahe hoo. โ˜บ๏ธSach he said to her. Mahi gave her thumps up too.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Dekha maine kaha tha na Bhabhi Bhai ko pasand aayega Sanchi said.๐Ÿ˜Š

Further much surprise to Anandi Shiv picks her in his arms and made her sit in front seat beside him. Mahi whistled loudly ๐Ÿคช& Sanchi clapped.๐Ÿ‘

And four begin their Delhi Darshan with Lami Narayan aka Birla Mandir. Anandi & Shiv offer their prayers. Anandi is happy to see such a beautiful mandir. Anandi asked for shiv's well being and her entire familes happiness. She thank God has giving her such caring loving family. Shiv is equally pleased to see her beaming๐Ÿ˜Š.

There next stop is Qtub Minar & Red Fort. Anandi was surpised to see its height & large granger.Shiv hired guide so they get proper information from him. Anandi was amazed to hear some stories. Sanchi & Mahi are busy clicking pictures of them. They made Anandi & Shiv pose like typical filmy hero heroine.๐Ÿ˜† After much hesitation finally they agreed. Anandi was bit embarrassed but started enjoying this later on. Shiv was bit irritated. Anandi made to him to do these stupid things. ๐Ÿ˜†All these times Shiv and Anandi hold each others hands. Sometimes he used to put his hand around her arm. They are behaving like typical in love couple.โค๏ธ Anandi's apperensives has been vanished. She feels free relaxed and most important happy with Shiv.โค๏ธ

After lunch Sanchi compulsory made them visit to famous Delhi Haat.๐Ÿ˜† Anandi & Sanchi were chatting nonstop while looking at different antic piece, clothes, jewellery. Mahi & Shiv are giving them company.๐Ÿ˜† At evening they went Rajpath. Shiv showed her India gate, Vijay path and Rashtrapati Bhavan. Anandi was amazed to see all this buildings which she only saw on TV or in books. ๐Ÿ˜ŠWhile eating famous Kulfi Mahi asked about their next plan.

Ab hum wapass RH jayenge. Thoda aaram karenge. Usske baad ek nice Dinner.

Wow sounds fun'.Sanchi said.

Lekin aap dono nahi ayenge'.Shiv states.๐Ÿคฃ

Kya???? Both Mahi & Sanchi scearmed.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

It's only for me & Anandi. Our date.

Oh hooo'.they screamed.

Anandi was surpised.๐Ÿ˜ณ Lekin yeh dono phir kahan jayenge. Hum inhe akela toh nahi chod sakte.๐Ÿ˜•

Anandi yeh dono chote bacche nahi hain.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Aur Delhi pehli baar bhi nahi aaye hain. They can manage. Aur konsa unhe yahan chod jaa rahe hain bass 2/4 gante ki toh baat hain.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Haan'.bhabhi'..hum promise karte hain. Hum acche bacchon ke taraf behave karenge.๐Ÿ˜†

Yes bhabhi...hey Mahi hum Myra ko bula lete hain. You guys carry on.Mahi & Sanchi left with Myra in her car.

In late evening Shiv was waiting for Anandi. He was wearing Cream color suit with maroon shirtโ˜บ๏ธ. As he turns saw Anandi wearing beautiful light ornage colored designer sari with matching jewellery & cluch. He always gets mesmerized to see her in sari. He gave her Red Rose & kiss her hand. โ˜บ๏ธShe blushed. He offered his hand to her. He opens door of car for her. And they drove to their first date.โ˜บ๏ธ

Hum kahan jaa rahe hain she asked with curiosity.

Well Mehrauli Road he told her.

Wahan kya hain?

Oh hoo wahan chalke pata chalega Sweetheartโ˜บ๏ธ Shiv said.

Anandi was surpised.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Kya hua? Tum muskura kyun rahe hoo?

Kuch nahi'.isse hee.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Nahi batao'I insist.

Kuch nahi'.aap aage dekehke gadi chaleye.

Ok Honeyโ˜บ๏ธ'..he winked at her.๐Ÿ˜‰

They arrived at beautiful garden restaurant. Shiv gave anandi his hand while coming out of car. She holds his arm & start looking at everywhere.

Kaise lage jagah?

Haan'.bahut acchi hain. โค๏ธLekin aap mujhe yahan itane badi hotel leke aaye hain. Mujhe woh kya kehte hain haan khaane peene ke maaners bhi nahi maloom she said in wooried tone.

Anandi he cupped her face. โ˜บ๏ธTum bahut soochte hoo. Main hunn na tumahre saath. Maaners kya hain woh tum mujhe dekhkar sekh jaogi. Come now. Smile.๐Ÿ˜Š

Shiv has booked their table in lawn. Shiv offered her chair. Anandi sits with bit wooried face. Shiv sits infront of her. Shiv asked her to smile.

Waiter gave her flowers & asked them for Welcome drink. Shiv asked for some mocktails. Drinks came.

Anandi was bit furious. Yeh kya hain?๐Ÿ˜•

Anandi yeh juice hee hain. Ghabrao mat yeh sharab nahi hain. Bass do teen tarah ke faalonse banaya hain.๐Ÿ˜†

Much reluctant Anandi sips some mocktail. She liked it.

Shiv smiled at her. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Anandi was looking everywhere. It's quite place. Lush green lawn, fountain, antic statues, and flowers vaz in evey corner she loved it. Bahut badi jagah hain. Lekin log itane jayda nahi dekhaye dee rahe hain.๐Ÿ˜•

Isse liye toh laya hunn tumhe yahan'.Shiv replied in mischevious tone.๐Ÿ˜‰

Anandi turns red.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Anandi bahut badi jagah hain isse liye tumhe isa lag raha hain. Log hain lekin dur dur hain. Tum ghabrao mat.๐Ÿ˜†

Aap ke saath bhala kyun ghabraungi main.๐Ÿ˜†

Pakka'nahi. He holds her hand.โ˜บ๏ธ

She stunned.๐Ÿ˜ณ Kya kar rahe hain aap Shiv. Koi dekh lega.โ˜บ๏ธ

Dekha ghabra gaye'''.he laughed.๐Ÿ˜†

Anandi laughed too.๐Ÿ˜Š

Precap

Anandi saw '.๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Keep guessing.๐Ÿ˜‰


Vedo & Kurup I hope I live up to your expectation !!! ๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by blushing - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww... its like u have fire in ur writing!!! loved it... read in one go... and totally loved it!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
the magic of magique!! loving your writing and imagination!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: blushing

Vedo & Kurup I hope I live up to your expectation !!! ๐Ÿ˜Š

๐Ÿค— What are you saying yaar...of course you did live up to my expectations!!

Such a sweeet part! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Haila AnSh on a date!! Loved it! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Now who is gonna be kebab mein haddi? Surely it's JaGa! ๐Ÿ˜ก

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 21

Waiter serves them first with starters then Main course. Shiv asked anandi to follow him. He helps her using folk & knife.๐Ÿ˜Š Anandi minutely observe Shiv. Anandi loves all dishes which were served. Shiv make sure food was bit spicy and tasty as per Anandi's liking.๐Ÿ˜Š Anandi enjoy entire process. She loved food, ambiance, service & most important Shiv's company.โ˜บ๏ธ He makes sure she is comfortable. He gave her equal importance values her opinion. Anandi keep thanking Shiv for wonderful experience she never had in her life. Shiv is equally pleased to see her happy face.๐Ÿ˜Š

Finally Desert has been served. It's fusion desert. Anandi was completely surprise to see this innovation.๐Ÿ˜ƒ Shiv feeds her first bite.โ˜บ๏ธ Anandi happily obliged & feed him back. They are enjoying each and every moment. Anandi told shiv she would like to cook this at home for him. Shiv promised her to bought recipe book. Suddennly anandi saw stain in her brand new sari.๐Ÿ˜” She accused herself being careless. Shiv clams her down. Anandi asked waiter for washroom & moved towards there. Anandi carefully washed stain. Fresh n up and goes out.

Anandi'.tum yahan sudden question made her turn.๐Ÿ˜ฒ

It's Gauri behind her.๐Ÿ˜ก

Anandi is in shock to see her. ๐Ÿ˜ฒGauri is equally shocked & surprised to see anandi in this attire. ๐Ÿ˜†She keeps staring at her. Anandi gave her look and stated walking.๐Ÿ˜Š

Ruko'Anandi Gauri said.

Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hain Gauri.๐Ÿ‘

Lekin mujhe tumse baat karni hain Anandi.๐Ÿ˜ก

Woh tumahri marzi lekin main jaa rahe hunn Anadi said determine & firm voice.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Tum yahan Delhi mein kya kar rahe hoo. Woh bhi itane bade restaurant mein raat ko Gauri thow her questions one by one.๐Ÿ˜ก

Tumhe batana main jaroori nahi samjhete main.๐Ÿ˜†

Main yahan All India Surgeon conference ke liye aaye hunn. Aaj hum sab Doctors dinner ke liye aaye hain.๐Ÿ˜ก

Anandi stood there sliently & ignored her.๐Ÿ˜†

Jeaitsar ki Sarpanch Delhi mein woh bhi itanai raat ko. Dadi sa ko bata kea aye hoo ya phir she asked her in sarcastic tone. ๐Ÿคฌ

Anandi smiled & said'.woh mere aur Dadi sa ki beech ki baat hain. Kisi bahar wale ko uss mein dakhalandazi karna koi haq nahi hain.๐Ÿ˜†

Gauri gets furious. Mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hain dakhandazi ka. Tumhe yahan raat ko dekha toh mujhe ghar walon ki izzat ki chinta hoye iss liye poocha.๐Ÿคข

Ghar bhi mera aur ghar wale bhi tumhe unke izzat ki chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi hain anandi answered her.๐Ÿ˜†

Thik hain bhadakti kyun hoo. Haan tum kuch bhi kar sakti hoo. Ek akele aurat kare bhi toh kya Karen. Sab couples ko dekheke tumhari bhi iccha hoti hogi na. Tumhara koi kasur nahi hain.๐Ÿคฌ

Anandi gets angry & starts walking.๐Ÿ˜ก

Waise kiske saath aaye hoo tum? She followed her.

She saw Shiv was sitting. Anandi joined him. He asked what took her so long.

Gauri showed up there. Anandi gets irritated. Shiv looked confuse to see this lady.๐Ÿ˜• Gauri stare at him & introduce herself to him. Hello I am Dr Gauri Jagdish Singh.๐Ÿคฌ

Shiv immediately understands who the hell this lady is.๐Ÿ˜† He looked at anandi who look visibly angry.๐Ÿ˜ก He completely ignored Gauri๐Ÿคฃ and came near to anandi held her hand. They are about to leave from there. Gauri stops them.๐Ÿคข

Aapne bataya nahi aap kon hain she asked him?

Jee main ajanabiyon ko aapna parichay nahi deta he states.๐Ÿ˜†

Main anandi ko acche se janati hunn.๐Ÿ˜ก

Accha lekin usne toh kabhi jikar nahi kiya aapka. ๐Ÿ˜†Now excuse us we need to leave.๐Ÿ˜†

Haan'.jaayeh. Aap jaise log aapne aap ko kisi scandal kyun fasayenge gauri said in loud voice.๐Ÿคฌ

Now gauri crossed her all limits. Anandi who was quite all this time lost her control.๐Ÿ˜ก She turns around and gave Gauri a well deserved tight slap.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐ŸฅณGauri gets furious & angry.

Bandh karo aapni yeh bakwas she shouted. Kabse aapni gandi sooch se parshan kar rahe hoo. Main aapne baarein mein kuch bhi sun sakti hunn lekin inke baarein mein agar tumne aapni yeh gandi zabaan se kuch kaha toh mujhese bura koi nahi hoga Gauri. ๐Ÿฅณ

Shiv was surprised. He came backward & drags anandi from there.๐Ÿ˜Š

Nahi chodiyeh mujhe Shiv'aaj isse mujhe jawab dene dijeyeh.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Nahi anandi koi jaarurat nahi hain. Koi girta hain toh use aur girne doo. Tum mat aapne aap ko takleef poochao. Chalo yahan se.โญ๏ธ

Ek min Shiv. Anandi request him. Kya kaha tumne main yahan inke sath aiyashi karne aaye hunn. Tumne mujhe kya aapne jaisa samjh rakha hain.๐Ÿ˜† Yeh mere honewale pati hain Mr Shivraj Shekhar.โค๏ธ Jeaitsar ke Collector.๐Ÿ‘ Inke saath agar tumne batamezi ki toh main police bulake tumhe ander kar doongi. ๐ŸคฃEk sharif Govt officer par bewajah kichad uchalne ke jurm mein. ๐Ÿ‘Gauri was in total shocked to hear this.๐Ÿคช

Aayenda tumne mere pariwaar ya mere pati par ghatiya comments pass kiye toh uska anjaam accha nahi hoga. Yaad rakhana yeh baat. Anandi said.๐Ÿฅณ

And both of them left from there leaving Gauri in deep shock & humiliation. All this time Jagya was hiding behind bushes listened their conversation.๐Ÿคฌ He was equally shocked to hear Anandi's enagement to Shiv.๐Ÿ˜†Shiv is the same person because of him Jagya landed in jail. ๐Ÿ˜†But he doesn't have courage to face Anandi.๐Ÿ˜†

While driving back to RH both Shiv & Anandi are quite. Anandi still looked mad & angry. ๐Ÿ˜กShiv was worried for her. As reached Anandi quickly gets out & started walking towards lawn in RH. Shiv parked the Car & started looking for Anandi in lawn. He saw anandi was sitting on one of the bench in garden. He came near to her. He sat beside her. Anandi gave him look & hugged him tight.๐Ÿค—

Mujhe maaf kar dijeyeh Shiv.๐Ÿ˜ญ

Tumhe maafi mangne ki koi jaarurat nahi hain.

Nahi'Gauri aaj ke aapke baarein itani ghatiya baatein kahi'

Woh uski sooch hain anandi. Mujhe se usse koi farak nahi padata. She is nothing for me.๐Ÿฅณ Mere liye tum mayane rakhte hoo. Tumhari khushi tumhara dukh.

Lekin mujhe accha nahi laga.

Insaan jaisa hota hain waisa hee woh soochta hain. Shayaad uske sanskar yehi sekhate honge. Aapna aapna tarika hota hain sabka. Mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahi laga. Kisi ajanabi ka humari zindagi se koi vasta hee nahi uske kehne ka kya bura manna.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Haan thik kaha aap ne. Kisi ajnabi ke liye hum kyun takleef sahe. Nahi uske wajah se main aapna aur aapka mood nahi kharab karungi.๐Ÿ‘

Yeh hue na baat'shiv smiled.๐Ÿ˜Š

Anandi smiled too. Waise Thank you so much for date Mr Shivraj Shekahr.

You are most welcome Miss Anandi Singh.

Khali thank you'..Shiv said in mischievous tone.๐Ÿ˜‰

Anandi looked at him and said'.toh kya chaiyeh aapko.๐Ÿ˜•

He gave her smile'.and move closer to her lips. ๐Ÿ˜ณAnd they kissed each other passionately. โ˜บ๏ธโค๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

Edited by blushing - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is my first post for you dear really so nice of you... Apart from the daily epics... enjoying your OS... Oh my god the way you are portraying both the lead was really so nice... And you didnt leave any character... just mindblowing... Please keep continue...please...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Massst update Aditi!! It had lots of drama + romance!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Liked this Jhansi Ki Rani attitude of Anandi's...tell her anything you want about herself but don't mess with her loved ones!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Gauri got a much deserved slap!! Whohooo! and coward Jagya was hiding behind the bushes! ๐Ÿคฃ
AnSh kissing!!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant !!! Enjoying your OS so very much!!

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