AnSh OS- 'I am missing you'..LAST PART on page 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you guys for liking it...
and u all r making me more nervous abt my last part😕😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Khusi !
Shiv aate hi pin drop silence !!! Wow ! 😊
He calls her 'Tiny wife' !!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved part 2.The best line was..."Anandi-shiv eyes met each others and they felt a fresh air of oxygen"...I can so imagine their expressions😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So cute Khushi! I liked part 2 better! (they were apart for the most part in part1!!) 😆 Do continue! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Both parts are brilliant i loved the way you write very well done👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Khushi👏. So both Anandi and Shiv missing eachother but pretending otherwise.😍😆
Its so cute please continue soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you..guys will post the last one ASAP😳

Originally posted by: dixie123

Nice Khusi !
Shiv aate hi pin drop silence !!! Wow ! 😊

He calls her 'Tiny wife' !!! 🤣

haan collctor saab has a strong aura toh silence toh hona hi tha...
nah re he didnt call her like that...tiny means delicate si cute si dikhne wali uski wifey😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khushi...i finished reading two parts finally!!! 😃...sry for the late comment..i couldn't finish reading part 2 yesterday that is why i didn't comment earlier! 😛

it is lovely dear 👏...i can feel the fresh love between them!! can't wait for the next part..pls do PM me when u will update it 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3

Shiv cut HS's line n said yeh abhi kal hi decide hua hai and ish mamle main kisiko kuchh nehin pata, main ek …..(he intended to say that he has an middle path n wanted to discuss with them after getting their suggestion he will talk again with higher officials).but HS cut his words and says yeh toh bahat achha bahana haishiv yeh bahana nehin hai..govt work process kai stages pe hota hai. Sab ek chutki main nehin hosakta aur main ….At that time anandi says maaf kisjiyega main kuchh kehena chahti hoon. Shiv nodded. Anandi suggested the exact middle way to handle the situation what shiv thought. Shiv was amused at anandi's intelligence but controlled himself as he is the collector rite now. He started asking qs abt anandi's suggestion. HS trapped thinking that shiv will be against anandi's suggestion. He too asked qs and some other ppl asked too. shiv knows the way anandi convinced ppl no one can do that. So he made anandi to explain and clear all doubts in ppls' mind. Most of the ppl r convinced. But shiv pretended he was still not convinced. Seeing that HS thought shiv wont agree with anandi .so he decided to say yes to the proposal so that he can enjoy shiv anandi fight and also got ppl support. He says ab jab sab log ishse sehmaat hain aur mujhe v ab lagne laga hai ki yeh plan hi theek rahega. Anandi is all stern at HS but Shiv gave a crooked smile and got what he wanted now HS cant back off once he says yes to the choice of ppl.he will go down in the eyes of ppl. Then Shiv gave the final piece of suggestion in that plan which make that complete and declared they will work on it. Ppl are happy. HS was taken aback. Anandi was surprised and sensed that shiv was actually helping her! her heart filled with the respect for shiv.

Meeting is over. All left except AnSh. For sometime they lost in each other until shiv's mobile broke their eye lock which was ringing at the wrong moment. That was bheem sigh's call and shiv had a short convo and ended it. Anandi charged at him aapke jawab ka intezaar kar rahi hoon! Shiv thinks areey jaipur ke meeting ke decision baren main maine ph pe nehin bataya ish liye!! He started who maine soch ki ghar aake batata aur !!..anandi cut it and said ghar ake batane ka kya matlab,ghar pahunch jatey aur batate dekho anandi main agaya ghar !jese bina bole main toh jan hi nehin pati ki aap ghar agaye!! haan!aapne bataya kyun nehin ki aap aarahe ho ph pe. Pata hai yahan meeting ka saara tension aadha hojata mera agar mujhe pata lagta toh aur main aapkoand she stopped.

Shiv surprised n thought who mere ghar aane ki baat kar rahi thi aur woh sayad mujhe miss kar rahi thi!!! His heart was filled with joy. He smiled and wants to say something….but

Anandi asked- khana khaya aapne. Shiv innocently said no. Anandi took her Tiffin out and opened it and gave it to shiv. Shiv eyes popped out seeing his fav halwa and grabbed the Tiffin. Anandi amused at his behavior and tried to control her laugh. Shiv abt to eat but stopped and asked aap nehin khayengi. Anandi- nehin main ne breakfast bahat heavy kiya tha. Aap kha lo. Shiv says par main akele. Anandi kitni baaten kartey aap khana khayeye chup chap.Shiv knew she wont listen and time for some tricks. So he ate few times and said areey anandi halwe thoda zyada meetha hai.

Anandi- kya par…

Shiv-ek bite kha ke dekho toh.he fed her one time.

Anandi theek toh lag raha hai…

Shiv- gave her one more and said theek se khao…niglo maat .

Anandi- theek hi toh haiwith lil confusion.

Shiv- achha yeh chatni kuchh jyada theekha nehin hai…

Anandi- areey bilkul nehin maine kuchh dino se theekha nehin kha rahi hoon.

Shiv looked at her with a smile- kya baat kar rahi ho…khake dekho.

And he managed to make anandi eat few more bites. And lastly said achha tum keh rahi ho toh theek hi hoga. Maine itne dino se yeh sab khaya nehin tha naa..taste hi bhul gaya tha. He giggled and continued his eating without looking at anandi. Anandi realized that he actually tricked her to make her eat. She is abt to scold at him but cant seeing him eating like a kid.

Shiv finished eating. Both looked at each other and smiled.

Anandi - very smart haan collector saab

Shiv- thank you sarpanchji and lost in his wife's charm who is smiling innocently.

Yeh sab bahat miss kiya maine anandi. Jetsar ko,yahan ke logon ko,yahan ki hawayon ki khusboo, aapke hath ka khana aur…

Anandi- aur

Shiv- aapko princess. I missed u.

Anandi felt an unusual happiness in her heart which she never felt till now.

Seeing his silent wife that may be she is uncomfortable, shiv back to his sense and tried to divert the topic and said woh meeting main jo decide hua uske liye jaipur….

Anandi felt low suddenly and spoke out aap phir se jaipur jayenge !!

Shiv got anandi doesn't want to stay away from him. he said with a smile nehin

Anandi relieved and asked toh phir yeh sab kese hoga…

Shiv 2 higher officials yehin jetsar main aanewale hain and who kuchh aur upcoming projects ke baren main v discuss karenge iske sath. Main unko hamare ghar khane pe invite karunga..aur haan anandi tum halwa zarur banana..badam ka halwa.. who badam ka halwa jaipur main roz sapno main dekhta tha…

Anandi can't understand to laugh or not phirse halwa!!.

Shiv walked towards his jeep and saw that anandi is standing far behind and looking at him without blinking.

He said areey sarpanchji ka yehi rehena ka irada hai kya, mera nehin hai, mujhe abhi ghar jana hai abhi ke abhi and main aapko yahan akele chhod nehin sakta , chaliye, ab invite karna hoga jeep main an eke liye, chaliye v!!

Anandi in her mindbhukkad,khhadoos but with a bright smile starts walking towards shiv who was smiling at her too.

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Again guys sorry for my endless errors. But do tell me hows that😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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whoa awesome khushi.. love the way shiv made her eat halwa.. aur ye bhukkad aur khadoos to shiv ke liye anandi ki mooh se to aur be sweet lagta hai...

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