AnSh OS- 'I am missing you'..LAST PART on page 6

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MY 1st ever attempt on AnSh OS. Plz bear with my lots of grammatical errors. I am too lazy to recheck it.

This is after AnSh marriage. Shiv has gone to jaipur for few days due to official work. Anandi is alone at circuit house.

1st day

Shiv reached jaipur and immediately left to attend an imp meeting. Anandi too busy with some school related work. Both talked to each other at night too. It day is over like another day.

Next day

In the early morning shiv went for his jog and here at jaitsar anandi is still sleeping. Its 7 Am now! Anandi woke up and shocked to see the clock it stopped at 3.55 AM. She is like,yeh bandh pari hai hayee kitni der tak main soti rahi..yeh shiv v naa utha nehin saktey the mujhe! She calls out shiv..shiv shiv kahan hai aap..mujhe uth..and suddenly realized that shiv is at jaiput not with her rite now. She smiles a bit and when after seeing the time in her mobile..She rushed to finish her daily routin!

Next day

In the morning at jaipur its raining.so shiv can't go for jogging. So he decided to do his push ups in the guest house itself. He got the FBs when few days before when he was doing push ups in the hall due to the same prob, raining outside.anandi asks him how could he the push ups without fail! Shiv told her yeh toh bahat aasan hai anandi baas practice kartey rehena chahiye! Tum v try karo. Anandi looked at him and said main aur push ups..sayad aapki neend nehin khuli main jaati hoon ek kadak adrak ki chai banake le aati hoon!when she abt to leave shiv called out and says wah jetsar ki sarpanch push ups se darti hai!! Anandi glared at him with mock anger and came near to him and asked haan darti hoon..toh kya karlenge jetsar ke collector saab..boliye..kya karenge aap!shiv made a puppy face and said meri itni himmat,jaisar ki princess ke against kuchh karun,main bewakuff dikhta hoon kya! both burst into laugh!

shiv suddenly fell flat on the floor while doing push up coz of the the FBs . He mutters areey anandi ab toh tumhare bina do din v rehena muskil ho raha hai while checking his chin that was all rite or not!

Next day

Anandi was alone having her dinner. She is abt to eat hari mirchi and got the FBs of shiv telling her not to eat so much hari mirchi n achhar and reminded her prev ulser prob. He really looked concerned coz few days back lal singh adv anandi not to eat those things! Anandi at that time wanted to light the moments and says aapko darr lagta hai mirchi se isi liye manna kar rahe hain naa,jetsar ke collector hari mirchi se dartey hain.she giggled. Shiv too asked her same way haan darta hoon bolo,jetsar ki sarpanch,bhari panchayat main yeh sikhayat karengi ki unka pati unko mirchi khane ko nehin de raha hai.anandi replied nah meri itni himmat jetsar ke collector saab ki sikayat karun,unki pyaaari dadaiji mujhe maar dalengi! Shiv said haan who toh hai pata nehin dadiji nehin hotin toh mera kya hota.Both laughed!

Anandi couldn't eat the mirchi, put that aside!

Next day

Anandi made halwa at that day coz gully and few girls came to meet her in the morning for some work. They happily ate that finished the work and left. Anandi looked at her bowl but cant eat.Shiv is complete fed up with the food at the guest house. He knows food was not bad at all but not good like food by anandi. He missed her halwa Anandi too realled, the way she served him with a bright smile, his appreciations for her everytime while eating halwa without fail. He used to say anandi tumahare hathon main toh jadoo hai,mere pass sarre words khatam ho chuken hai tumhari hathon ki jadoo ke tariff ke liye..kuchh nayaa advice karo naa!

Next day

Shiv at that time recalled how anandi used to keep his all things at proper place without letting him to do. He wanted anandi to choose his shirt for office, his hanky, his watch were always on the bed completely ready. At that time break fast is brought for him by a staff but shiv is no mood to eat that. He picked his mobile and calls anandi.

Here at jetsar anandi is getting ready for school and is missing shiv how he everyday called her to come with in his jeep to school but she dined everytime as she used to walk. This time she really wanted to go with him but he is not with her rite now. She is lil frustrated and muttersab main mirchi,halwa v theek se nehin kha para hi hoon..ab toh subha subha v shiv ke bina kaam nehin hora hai,,uthne main late..jate time v shiv ka lift offer..sigh..yeah shiv v naa..meri aadat hi bigaad di!

At that time,her mob strats ringing. She took that with absent mind without looking at the name. A voice came tum yeh kya kar rahi ho anandi,tum v naa,tumne toh meri aadat hi bigad di. Anandi's heart skipped a bit.its shiv.its shiv's call.shiv is saying usne unki aadat bigad di!! she is unable to reply!!this is the exact line what she was thinking a moment before.how could shiv said that line to her exactly!!

After not getting ans,Shiv asks her with lil concern tum theek hona anandi..kya hua koi prob hai..tum chup kyun ho,bura laga kya..main toh baas.anandi fumbles and replied apne abhi kya bola .shiv is relaxed after hearing anandi's voice and said yehi ki tum theek ho ki nehin.. anandi asks nehin usse pehele..shiv back to his naughty mode and starts saying non stop,tum mujhe bigaad rahi ho.subha subha mujeh sab kuchh tum lake deti thi..meri shirt, watch, hanky..office ki files..ab yeh sab saadi se pehele main hi karta tha..but abhi mujhe esa laga raha hai ki main koi bahat mehenat ka kaam kar raha hoon yahan..aur yahan ka khana..main kha hi nehin paa raha ha hoon,mujhe toh tumhare haath ka halwa raat ko sapne main ata hai..aur subha meri bhuk badh jati hai but yahan ka boring breakfast khana kha hi nehin pata,batah buri halat hai meri.At that time his staff calls him as they r getting late for meeting..so he quickly says anandi main abhi jaraha hoon but baad main aake apni sikhayat puri karunga...!!and hangs the call and laughs

Anandi still in unbelievable mode and thinks,sapne main halwa.hey kanha ji mere paati ek number ke bhukad hain.halwa,pakoda ke ilaawa kuchh sujhta nehin.halwe ko miss kar rahe hain. kisko sapne main halwa kese dikh sakta hai and burst into laugh..

Here on the other hand shiv on the way, is thinking ab main kahan bol paya tumko anandi.halwe ke saath halwa banaewali v sapno main aati hai,ab toh khule akkhon se v tumhare sapne dikhne lage hain mujhko.!!

Anandi is looking at shiv on her wedding pic on the wall, says khadus,bhukad.

Shiv looking at anandi's pic on his mobile screen says.I am missing you my princess with a big smile...

Anandi's saw the gift of shiv the mirror with her two smiling pics and realized that she is smiling too...!

Do tell me..hows that!

PART 2 - page 2

PART 3(Last part)- page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anandi - shiv ki mohabbat
Shiv - Anandi ki adaadat
Kya baat! kya baat! Kya baat!

Keep em coming, Khusi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that is so sweet anj..thanx😳..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifull ! Utterly butterly romantic !
I hope ki aisa hi ho ! Pls CVs read this OS ! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one Khushi !
Again I am going to write, Anandi still thinks Shiv is Kadoos !! 😡 How mean Anandi ! 😡
Luved Shiv's words 'Halwa ke saath Halwa banane wali' !!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dixie123

Good one Khushi !

Again I am going to write, Anandi still thinks Shiv is Kadoos !! 😡 How mean Anandi ! 😡
Luved Shiv's words 'Halwa ke saath Halwa banane wali' !!😊


See he wants Halwai not biwi! No wonder Anandi thinks he's kadhoos, bukhad!😆 Let me add - Bewakoof!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... so refreshing and cool👍🏼 itna light or chill hay maza agaya...We all know Shiv is badly in love with Anandi but Khusi show something more than Aadaat with Anandi... Let her feel something more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...awersome..truely romantic and nicely written :)way to go
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!! What a nice OS...Wish it cud be shown in one of the BV episodes after ANSH wedding...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg awesome os khushi.. its so lovely.. yaar.. continue please

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