FF - The Confession [Part 3 updated on page 7]

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone😊
I joined this forum recently, but being a silent reader for the past few days, I understood how much everyone loves reading romantic fictions on AnSh😳. So yes my love for writing made me start one😆 I absolutely love Shiv and he is the one who made me start following BV☺️ I love Anandi too, cudos to Pratyusha's acting👏 and ofcourse to Siddharth too😆
Okay okay I'm not going to waste your time😆
Go ahead and read...but be warned I'm writing for the first time...so do bear with me😊
Now about my story,
The characters are very well the same as in BV, so I dont see any need for an intro here😆 and I'm not planning to add any new character since my focus is on AnSh😳..its completely romantically inclined and anyone not interested in romance may back out now😆
Also I'm not sure how long or short my whole story is going to be😕 I'm never good at planning😆
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The Confession
So many months passed since their marriage. Shiv always loved Anandi, but knew he needs to go slow, too slow with her. Her heart was as delicate as her; no matter how much ever strength she showed outwards. Shiv had agreed to stay in the haveli for Anandi. She wasn't yet ready to leave the Singhs. Though he felt awkward to stay there, Anandi's condition made him rethink. She was already forced into this marriage, her mother's death and a divorce- everything had happened at an eye-blinking speed. He didn't want to add to her trauma by separating her from her family.

One night as usual, Shiv was sleeping on the floor and Anandi was in the washroom; having bath. But suddenly she realized she forgot her dress. She peeked through the door and found that Shiv was already asleep. She had finished bathing and thought that she would come out in towel. Her dress was kept ready on the bed. She thought she just had to dress up quietly without making any noise. So she stepped out in towel.

Now the thing is Shiv wasn't sleeping. He was used to the sleepless nights, in which he would keep imagining him and Anandi being happily together- a carefree Anandi'

As she stepped out and walked a few steps towards her bed, her anklets' noise made Shiv snap back to reality. He quickly closed his eyes and went ahead with his usual pretension. But he was curious about the rhythm of the anklets, as she was walking very slowly trying her best not to make any noise. He was also surprised that she came out so quickly. So he opened his eyes, and that caused a great commotion. She almost screamed and he was so shocked seeing a towel-clad Anandi that he sat up instantly as if electrified. She wanted to run back inside the washroom, but it was too late. She instead dropped herself to the floor on the spot where she was standing and covered up herself with her hands. Her eyes were tightly shut as if closing her eyes would stop Shiv from seeing her. Shiv on the other hand was still shell-shocked. He looked at her as if she was some alien. A few seconds later [which seemed like eternity to Anandi] Shiv was back to his senses. He soon realized that she was really embarrassed and quickly noticed the reason behind her towel-clad appearance; her dress was on the bed.

Okay I know its a small part😆
But cant proceed without your encouragement...or it would turn out that I'm writing and no one is actually reading it😉
Criticism and ideas are all the time welcome🤗
Please do let me know if you like it😳 [also feel free to ask me to stop writing if you think so😆]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting start... Please do continue

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Posted: 13 years ago
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You should definitely continue!! Here I was hoping Amamdi would slip and fall on Shiv! Lol :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey😊 Thats a nice one😃...please do continue😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: FairoozT

You should definitely continue!! Here I was hoping Amamdi would slip and fall on Shiv! Lol :P

LOL me too wanted the same!!!!😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice ! Ofcourse you have to continue. Can't leave us midway 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hahaha! This is funny. I bet Anandi is mortified...and poor Shiv. He doesn't even know what to do!

Continue soon please!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey it's nice... You really need to continue ur story for us
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dats a cute part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all for liking it🤗
Now that I got the green flag,I'll be updating it soon😃

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