my OS (UPDATE 22ND ON PAGE 3RD) - Page 2

Hi Payal

Such a romantic😍 and funny🤣 OS. Good combination⭐️.
Please continue. 😊

How can i miss this os
payal please continue this one is cute 😳

its awesome payal.please do continue it.ll love to read more of such writings of urs.

HEY PAYAL REALLY THE OS WAS WORTH READING REALLY LOVED IT THIS IS WHAT SHUD EXACTLY HAPPEN PLS WUD LOVE TO KNOW HOW WILL ANANDI MANAGE TO MAKE SHIV CONFESS HIS LOVE FOR HER REALLY IWUD LOVE

in black- english version

Evry one is siting in hall,DS,bhairo,basant and gehana and anandi serving cool cool drinks to them and basant ask anandi how the nehar project is going on...and anandi is about to start explaning ke makhan came running and says registry aye hai maa saa(registry leter has come)

Bahiro ' han tou sign kar kai lai anaa...

So go and sign and bring

DS ' kay baat hou saka hai??

What can be the matter in the registry

Basant ' abhe pata chall jayga

Will come to know now

Anandi and gehna signalling each other what can it be

Makhan comes and gives the letter to bhairo...he sees the name and says aloud anandi teray naam sai hai registry (its in your name the registry)

Anandi ' han tou bapu saa padreya naa keya hai

Then open naa father and read whts in their

Bhairo opens and read the letter and is all smiling...all are like will you say whats in their and why you are laughing...bhairo says its an inspection letter...it says tom. The education-in-charge inspector will come and take a look around your school and then will decide for the further step...anandi and evry one is rejoiced...and suddenly anandi says she needs to go and assemble all the students and fulli and have to do lots of work before the inspector comes...DS is happy and says to gehna - get tiffin ready for anandi as she hasn't eaten since morning...and as anandi is leaving DS calls her and touches her face lovingly and says take care of yourself and keep smiling this way...anandi bends down and touches her feet and turns to see gehna standing their and faking anger...signaling tiffin...anandi jsut smiles and hugs her tightly and says i love you tai saa...gehna is all like smily and says badmash(naughty) and DS says kai kahee tuunay abhee...(what did you just said) anandi turns and pulls her cheeks and says i love you too dadi saa...and that fuuny music goes in background which we always hears ... and anandi runs outside laughing on the expression on DS face...

its morning,in school evry one has done the work assigned to them and comes and report to anandi..jiji all work is done...and anandi says finnly..now all get back to their classes and i will do the final check up... and she is goin thru evry thing DS with gehna arrives and ask can they too stay... and before anandi can reply anything the inspector arrives...and as soon as DS sees the inspector she is in shock and is like what to do and what not to do...

Inspector come inside and as soon as sees DS touches her feet...anandi is little shock,now whats happening...

Inspector ' app kaise hain

How are you

DS ' devi mata ke krepa hai..

Belseing of god all good

Inspector 'agar app bura naa manay tou, app yahan kaisy

If you don't mind asking ,how come you here

DS ' yaa sacool mere choree kaa hai

This school belongs to my grand daughter

Inspector ' apkee chore??

Your daughter?? And before any one continues anandi comes and inspector understands what DS is saying...anandi leads the inspector towards the parts of school but she is continuously giving stare to DS..DS is like ' hey!devi maa!abb yaa chore mere kalasss levegeee,jaisay he yaa bandrou inspector jawougaa ( now anandi will take my class as soon as this monkey inspector will leave)

Inspector is all praises to anandi about her effort and hardwork and promise to do as much as on his hands to make this school modern and high standard... and before he is about to leave he is lillte unshure and dosent know how to ask anandi...

Anandi ' kuch baat hai inspector sahib

Some thing their inspector sir

Inspector ' yaa apky ghar ka mater hai phir bhe..bapu sa nai batay apkay divorce kai baray mai...agar mater solve hou gaya hai tou ajj bhe mujhay apka rishta pasandh hai

This is your family mater yet ' my father told me about your divorce process and if mater is sorted out i am still open for the marriage with you

Anandi is having the shock of her life...and she cant understand what he is on about..with whome he is saying to marry...and she turns and sees towards DS and DS just turns around and calls gehna...and anandi got all the story in that responce of DS...

DS ' yaa inspector ke tou..bandrou manay musebat mai daal kai khadryo hai..devi maa mere racksha karo(this inspector wil bring trouble for me..and plz god help me and save me)...and she suddenly sees shiv coming towards the school and towards her...he bends and touches her feet and is smiling on the expression on DS face..and asks what happened

Anandi is about to say something to inspector but as soon as she seen shiv she is all smilly and turn to inspector...now her face is all serious and her eyes all full of naughtyness and mishief...

Anandi ' ohhh!wou !wou tou kaab kaa solve hou gayaa...

Inspector ' now he is all smily and says really

Shiv ' his all sences is now in full alert as he hears anandi gossiping with inspector and that too happily and smily

Anandi ' han!dadi saa nai apky bapu kou nahe batay...lagat hai kaam kaaj mai bhul gayee hogee batanaa

Didnt DS said to your father,all this was over long ago..i think she forgot,as she busy woman

Inspector ' theek kah rahee hai app

Yes you are saying true

Anandi ' waisy jab dadaisa nai apko pasand keya hai tou mujhay apkou jaany ka acha avsar mila hai...app jaitsir ayah ain tou ekk din ruk jaeya...kaal yahan mela lagega..bahut acha mela hota hai hamary yahan and apkay sath thodra time betanay kaa mauka bhe mil jaygaa

Well if DS has choosen you for me then its a good time to know eachother...as you have come to jaitsir so why not stay one more day as tom. Their will be mela and its quit beautiful and we can spend some time together and can know about eachother

Shiv ' abb yaa anandi keyaa musebat khadre kar rahe hai...aur esnay inspector kou kuyn roka

(now what she is up to..and why did she stoped inspector form going)

DS ' she is watching anandi and shiv continous and she is shoked to know anandi is making fun of the situation and little confused whats happening with anandi..and her hands on her chin and thinking about whats this change in anandi and why shiv is all angry...

Anandi - tou kall subh miltay hain breakfast mai...(lets meet in the morning at breakfast table)

DS & shiv ' what!

Inspector ' jee havelli mai?

Ohk!in havelli?

Anandi ' yess!!what would you like to eat..anything particular

DS & SHIV ' oh!no..no way...they both turns to gehna to warn her not even to keep legs in kitchen tom...but gehna is no where to be seen...

Anandi ' inspector sahib meet my tai saa...she is very fine cook and she loves to make varities and experiments lots in kitchen with different food...

DS & SHIV ' they staring at each other...DS is like where to hid, what to say and what not to say to shiv about this strange side of anandi...she has her face here and their turning and saying devi maa save me today..just today..

Inspector leaves and DS is all like she has commited biggest mistake of her life..gehna is all confused and shiv is all angry and leaves in anger..and DS tries calling him back but as if he can hear...and anandi has a great big big secreat lovely smile on her face

DS ' chore yo kai thaa

Dear what was this

Anandi ' kuch nahe dadi saa... collector sahib kou desi nuska bahut pasandh hai naa bass usay he estmal kar rahe thee

Nothing dadi saa..as collector sahib loves home base threpy na so applying that only on him

DS ' hey!devi maa ess chore kee raksha karnaa...koe bhoot woout tou nahe chdryo hai naa gehnaa..kai boly hai tuu...bhairo nai bol kaa ajj he pujare ji sai nazar utrwane ahi chore kou

Hey!devi maa take care of her grand daughter...just hope some ghost or any such thing has not goten inside anandi..and she ask gehna to consult with brahimn of temple and ask bahiro to be home as soon as possible so that he can do whatever rituals to take that ghost out of anandi

Anandi ' she is all smily and watching shiv going and says to herself...abhe tou picture bakee hai merey akdru sadru collector bab, and turns and same way pulls DS cheeks and says i love you D,

DS is more shure ghost is inside anandi and starts prying again to devi maa!

Nigh time

Shiv in his room...roaming to and fro...

Yaa anandi apany app kou samjhte keya hai (what does anandi thinks of herself)

School khol leya tou bahut badra kaam karleya (she has opend school so she thinks she is gr8)

Uss inspector sai itna hans hans kai baat karnay ke keya zarurat thee (what was such need to talk so sweetly with that inspector)

Aur hans kai baat karleya theek hai but mela mai kyun bulaya??(ohk she talked sweetly but what was the need to stop him for tom's mela)

Aisee keya afat agyee the school mai kee uss inspector kou itnaa pataya jaa raha thaa(what need arised ke she had to behave this way)

Kuch tou baat hai...kahen anandi mujhsay kuch chupa tou anhe rahe hai...(their is some thing...i hope she not hiding anything from me)

Han...yaa he baat hogeee...(yep she is hiding something)

Ekk kaam karta hun...call kartaa hun aur puch leta hun akhir baat keyaa hai (ohk..let me call and ask if everything all right naa)

Calling anandi...and anandi was waiting when he will call...and as soon as she sees name of collector sahib she is all smily and let the ring goes and start singing...intehan hou gayee intazar kee..ayee naa kuch khabar meray yaar kee...(this is hindi song - where its saying about one waiting for so long and its limit of waiting and when his\lover will come or any news of him\her)

Shiv is watching if his phone is allright naa..ring is going naa...yes ring is going...then he checks the number..its anandi's number only...then why the heck she not picking

Their anandi is busy singing her song quit lovingly and taking out her cloths for tom.

Shiv is confused and worry why anandi not piking.its not even time for her to go to sleep...then why she not picking..is she alright...should i call again or do i call DS in landline number and ask anandi is alright or not...or should i call anandi again...

Their anandi having fun and ..she takes the phone in her hands and sees the miss calls of collector sahib and says to her phone...tou keya bolty hou utha lun abb...and jsut then the phone rings again...she let the ring goes 2 or 3 times then piks up...

SHIV ' anandi...

Anandi ' collector babu ... app..sab theek tou hai..itnee raat kou call keya(collector babu ..you..evrything alright..how come calling so laye at night)

Shiv ' itne daer sai call kar rhaa hun...phone kuyn nahe uthaya (caling you for so long..y dint piked up before)

Anandi ' she is all smily,but says in serious tone..actualy i was in kitchen..remember inspector sahib coming so doing necessary work required for tom. Breki... i don't want to leave anything behind...hope you can understand

Shiv ' he is pissed off and irritated and cuts down the call and is all frustrate and angry...

Anandi ' she is all full of laugh and love is coming out of her eyes and she taps her one legs and says to herself...anandi good work your home made remedy is not only working fine its working wondrous on shiv...lets see how long he can hold his heart and temeper before he spills the beans and accepts he love me

Shiv - its my fault..complete my fault..help karnay chala thaa..laou help hou gayee achay sai...itnay achay sai kee inspector kou mela mai hee nahe ghar mai bhe bula leyaa..khalee nashtay mai hee kuyn bulayaa..rahnay bhe bula letee...aur bula leyaa tou mujhay nahe invite kar saktee theee..laken mujhay kuyn bulaygee..surpunch jou hai..wou bhe jaitsir kee...laken wou bhul gayee mai bhe collector hun jaitsir kaa...anay dou uss inspector kou mela mai..aisa mela dekhungaa naa kee zindge bhar yaad rkhega melaa keya hotaa...agar aisaa na keya tou meraa naam COLLECTOR BABU nahee..shiv stops and make shoking face and says in frustration..wht i am saying since when i changed my name to collector babu...and remembers its anandi who calls him this..and runs his hands on his hairs and says,,yaa anandi mujhay pagal bana kai choudrgee...now i call myself collector babu..very good shiv very good...

(i wanted to help her with her school naa..now see what a help i ahve done..now this collector is not going to stay for mela tom. But going to her home too and that too for breakfast...and anandi will cook for him..and she dint bother to invite me...forget invite she dint even bother to ask me..she thinks she is supunch so can do anything..but she forgot i am collector...ohk now wait you donkey inspector...when you come for mela tom. I will show you so perfectly the mela ke you will remember whole of your life about it...if i dint teach you lesson my name is not COLLECTOR BABU...)

thanks for updating n pls do not abandon this one wud love to read more dear more nok jhoks also

yipeee the first one to comment so happy hurray

its just hilarious pls continue

Originally posted by: maneta

its just hilarious pls continue

Loved it dear...
Plz continue soon...