my OS (UPDATE 22ND ON PAGE 3RD)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its morning time and shiv is doing his pushups wearing his sandozzz...and his 6pak can be seen clearly...he is continuously doing his pushups and bheem singh ji is counting its more then 100...and shiv yet not stoping...swating is oozing out of everywhere form his body yet he is least bother and keeps going on doing his pushups...suddenly bheem singh hears a jeep aproching...its anandi who gets out and then starts doing her jogging and time to time try to see if shiv has completed and then she had enough and goes to meet him...he sees her sneekers and starts more angrly on pushups...

anandi signals bheem singh...wats the matter

bheem singh is like he don't know and is quit confused why his collector sahib is so angry

anandi signals BS to leav and BS is happy to abide and leaves

anandi standing and watching him...

shiv knows but neglects

anandi strts tapping her toes a little

shiv can hear but again let go,he stands up and starts running

anandi ' yaa enhay keya hua raat bhar mai...huh!!!!!! she too starts running towards shiv...shiv increases his speed...she too has too..she tried talking to him but he is completing ignoring him...anandi stops and and says ohk...enough is enough...

he comes and stands opposite to shiv and stops him...he stares...she folds her hands and says

anandi ' kuch batynagay hua keya hai

shiv ' apkou nahe pata

anandi ' bends her head a little and says agar pata hota tou puchtee keyaa

shiv ' just stands and stares

anandi ' kuch bolengay baat keya hai,kaab sai daekh rahe hun naa baat kar rahay hain naa kuch bol rahay hain,akhir baat keya hai

shiv ' shiv reaches near anandi..tuk hold of her arms and shouts angrily... keya jarurat thee sumergardh akelay janay kee,agar kaal tumahy kuch hou jata tou????????? Ekk second bhe nahee socha keya natezaa hota agar mai time pai anhe pahunchta tou??????

Anandi ' keeps on staring at shiv for the outburst...but theri a smallsmile on her lips

Shiv ' tumhay hansee arhee hai?mazak sujh raha hai tumahay,shiv backs her with force of his hands and leave anandi and is frustrate and runs his hands on his hairs and turns around

Anandi ' agar apnay kah deya hai tou mai abb kuch bolun

Shiv ' keya bologe tum...tumany ekk paal bhe nahe socha gar tumahy kal kuch hou jata tou mera key... and he stops

Anandi ' anandi is little surprise but their is a big smile on her face when she hears the unsaid word

She went near shiv and take hold of his hand and turn him...mai ekk dum theek hun..and wou beh apke wajah sai... itna tou mujhay vishwas thaa app jarur ayngay..ess leya mai akelay chalee gayee...aur app ayaa...apnay mujhay bachaya bhee...pur yaa nahe samjh aarhaa app itna gusa kuyn hai...yaa batein tou kall khatam hou gaye theee naa

Shiv ' stares at anandi and wanted to say but turns and leaves in frustration and anger

Anandi ' tou collector babu gusay walay kae sath sath akdru aur unche naak rakhnay walay bhe hain...itne asane sai nahe kahegay pyyar kartay hain mujhsay...pur mai bhe surpunch hun...dekhtee hun kab tak apnay dil kee baat nahe kahtay...and a big sweet smile plays on her face and she too leaves for haveli

ps - if its like by members then i will continue for shure...as i wrote 1st time so dont know if anyone will want me to cotinue

Edited by payalibm - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue.. but i don understand much of hindi! so sorry abt tt... but i still LOVED it a lot!!!! can i request you to write in english so that i can understand better...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oye payalia Lovely OS 😛
Didnt know Anandi can be naughty also ...please continue its very good :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good Payal continue 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm...ur OS is good and yes hilarios too...😛..continue to ur good work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was nice...pls contin...but in english😔i dono Hindi...pls will u?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Awww it was really cute... I'm imaginign the scene in my brain...😆
I hope I dont end up in a mental hospital😆😆
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
pls pls dear continue this os i love it pls pm me when u pdate -pls pls continue will love to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
👏 very sweet payal...plz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
just one question what is meaning/full form of OS?

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