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Posted: 14 years ago
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All Aboard!!!!!!!

Epi starts ov wiv Radhe cum item girl who is trying 2 get the glass bit frm his feet while murmuring in pain.......Amoli cums n quickly takes his feet in her lap n takes out the glass bit n Radhe's pain evident n Amoli looks as if she felt his pain completely......n asks does it pain that much n he replies yea......Amoli says den y didnt u stop ??? Radhe being innocent says if i had stopped it wud have ruined their celebrations didnt u see how happi every1 was esp Chandana.....Amoli luks at him thinkin can ne1 be like this??πŸ˜•......she asks wot about ur pain ur happiness doesnt that have a place in ur life???? Radhe looks at Amoli n her concerned face while Amoli caresses his feet......n both hav a eye lock which is broken as Amoli touches his wound n Radhe out ov pain catches her hand......now both hav a long eye-lock about 2 mins .....then finally Radhe remembers DV devil n da whole nut-cracker session 😈 n lets her hand go..πŸ˜†......she then blows on his wound n he luks away.....luv her nose stud/ring i want 1 like dat........she tears a bit ov her saree n ties it on his feet n pulls it tight n out ov pain again he catches her hand n again he remembers DV n his EVil-Devil avatar takes his foot frm Amoli n limping leaves a stunned Amoli.............

Cut 2 Suman n co in temple......tani sleeping BTW........she scolds tukaram for sitting idle while their daughter's life is about 2 get ruined by DV n how he is holding the land papers (given by DV) n waiting 4 free food.....she adds shame on u.....tukaram unable 2 reply.......Suman picks up a wooden torch frm da fire place (hawan kund) n burns da papers but tukaram puts out da fire......Suman furious says understand plz....... this is the price of ur daughter's (izzat) honour this way thakur will play wiv Amoli's life howeva he wants..........this wedding is only 4 namesake jus like kings used 2 do b4 n now thakur is doing it......tukaram finally replies i understand everytin .....all u said is tru but wot can we do??? tell me 1 thing by burning these papers will everytin be alright will Amoli be saved??? we have already lost 1 daughter n due 2 our poverty we may hav 2 sell our 2nd 1 as well......Suman's eyes wide wiv shock n fear......tukaram adds think Suman see wot i see.......wot future do we have???......Suman now recovers n beats up tukaram.........gr8 going Suman sum punches frm me as well plz..... quite funny actually u wudnt think a women living in rural areas 2 do this jus shows how helpless she is....... n she says it wud have been gud had i killed both my daughters wen they were born but i didnt becoz i thought their dad loved them hence he didnt ask 4 a son despite having 2 daughters......wot kinda dad r u who is talking of selling his daughters.......i will kill tani n myself but i wont touch these papers......
Cut 2 haveli where Urmi is telling servant if all preparations are done in the SR (wedding night)
room n he says yes all done.........Dv listening 2 all this.........Urmi adds dont call Radhe for
anything tonight he will do no work ......distribut his work amongst urselves.....DV not liking
this at all...........servant leaves n DV cums 2 the stairs n Umri asks where r u going this late
in the night??? DV replies some villagers cumin 2 meet him as they hav sum problem regarding their grains so ill see if i can help n leaves..........Ahaa the perfect alibi πŸ˜‰.........Urmi thinks my hubby works so hard always thinkin about others (yes he is thinkin about others ie Amoli).....

Cut 2 Chandana n Puneet stoppin Radhe frm entering his SR room unless he givs them money .......n TA DAAAAAAAA who apperars 2 save da day i mean night...... DV......now he jus went out didnt he??? how did he cum bac so soon??...πŸ˜•πŸ˜†......neways he tells them 2 stop troubling him n let him go inside........so Radhe goes inside his room n DV outside says ill give money on Radhe's behalf n i love this line.......ek tarhe se ye suhaag raat meri bhi to hain (In a way this is also my 1st night)........both shocked so he laughs n adds i mean its my repsonsibility that all goes well for this weddign night as i am the 1 who got the 2 together......Punnet takes the money n says thank u n Enjoy ur suhaag raat........wow chacha sher to bhatija seva sher.......n bro n sis leave while DV turns his head n smirks n says Thanks.......
dat smirk was awesome loved it n listen 2 the bacground score wen he smirks ...........
Cut 2 SR room where Amoli very shyly n coyly on the bed while Radhe cums n sits down n Amoli
blushing n smiles n then Radhe drops a nuclear bomb on Amoli 🀣 he says Amoli MAlik could be cumin ne minute now.....Amoli ki citi biti gum super duper shocked.........poor thing was hoping for a romantic roop tera mastana pyar mera deewana type SR but wot does she get ??? soye gori ka yaar balam tarse types........bac 2 stupid Radhe who says Malik sent me here 2 tell u this n Amoli cries n closes her eyes ........very gud performance by SupriyaπŸ‘.........he gets up n adds i know wot this marriage means 2 u n dat u consider ur hubby as ur GOd but understand 1 thing my MAlik is like my God as well...........man Radhe n his Malikpuran 🀒.......... he goes wot eva i am 2day is coz ov Malik.......he has given me life n no is ahead of him not even God.......if u respect me
Amoli then u must respect Malik as well........Amoli is double triple shocked n me as well look at
wot he expects his wife 2 do?????......bac 2 dumbest who adds the way i do everytin Malik says u
must as well.......this is my request 2 u as ur hubby.... u consider me as ur God isnt it then
think of it as an order frm ur GOd.....huh ??? come again??? do u even know wot hubby means??? aghhhhh he gets on my last nerves this guy😑😑......he adds Malik is really nice n really kind.....n he looks at his fingers which were gonna get amputated by this same kind nice Malik.πŸ˜•πŸ˜†...n says but if sum1 doesnt listen 2 him den he becums a maniac n will go 2 any extent 2 make sure his words r obeyed......he turns 2 face Amoli i want 2 save u n me frm his anger.....as it is Malik likes u so plz dont do anything 2 make him angry........i listen 2 Malik always n see how Malik loves me so u listen 2 him as well n he will also love u n not get angry at me........he leaves a shocked surprised Amoli.........

Amoli remembers her so called hubby's words n goes in2 flashbac scenes......i really dont like dat bacground score tar tar daman neva mind......afta about 2 mins of flashbac she falls bac on the bed n screams Aai!!!!!!! (mum)......

Cut 2 DV pacing up n down on a little bridge in his bagh (garden) where Radhe cums n says
Malik.....DV asks is my job done???......Radhe replies yes i told Amoli ur cumin n 2 wait 4
u.....DV smiles n says wot a husband u r.....there has neva been a hubby like u in this world nor
will there eva be.......DV n me thinkin alike.........Radhe buddhu daft says i dont get it?? DV
says thats the best part if u did then the situation wud have been different......neva mind atleast
u understand ur God listen 2 him dats enuf 4 me.......there is a lot of happiness in not
knowing/unawareness whoeva has understood is very sad......Oh n sleep in the garden 2night so no 1 knows ur not in the room n Radhe nods yes..........DV about 2 leave but Radhe says Malik i really like looking at the stars n moon etc.....DV laughing at Radhe's foolishness......turns around n says ok u enjoy the stars n i wont disturn u till morning.........in fact i wont even cum out of
the room jus 4 u Radhe jus 4 u n leaves.........

Cut 2 Dv entering the haveli n Tum Mero Ho plays..........his footsteps echo n Amoli apparently
hears it 😲 n gets up terrified..........Urmi puts her hand out on the pillow n realises DV is
missing......Amoli again terrified n Urmi gets up.......Dv walking up 2 Amoli's room n jus look at
the lust n greed in his eyes.........marvellous portrayal by Sharad....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.....he cums up the door jus b4 the room (the little passage) n closes it n Epi ends.............

Enjoy πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
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simply mind-blowing pri πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the written update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mindblowing,superb jobπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update. You describe it so well. I really have to hand it you as you put so much effort into writing these and I know these take a very long time to write. So GREAT JOB!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitu123

simply mind-blowing pri πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Awwwwwwwww thank u sooooo much Nitu darling πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: uxghya

thanks for the written update

No worries πŸ˜›
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Originally posted by: swfer

mindblowing,superb jobπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

My plesure hun πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: king99

Nice update. You describe it so well.

Thanks a ton Saba...............was wondering where u were ........
I really have to hand it you as you put so much effort into writing these and I know these take a very long time to write.
Thanks a lot 4 all ur appreciation πŸ€— yea it takes me nearly 2 hours coz i dont wanna miss any detail 😳
So GREAT JOB!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Muchas Gracias πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear PreciousPri
thank you soooooooooo much
you describe and translate the episode so beautifullyπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
what a episode😲 especially the endπŸ˜‰
poor amoli, poor radha, poor urmi and it will be poor dv as wellπŸ˜†
..........
best of luck⭐️

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