TS : Crashed hopes getting Destiny Shot-2/8 - Page 8

Hiya bar na aage kya hoga. Mai to soch me hu . Ghotala chale gye? Now what?
Superb hai yaar so interesting 👏
HAPPY Holi meri pyaari hiyu, Krishu, aur anju darling 🤗

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Hiya bar na aage kya hoga. Mai to soch me hu . Ghotala chale gye? Now what?
Superb hai yaar so interesting 👏
HAPPY Holi meri pyaari hiyu, Krishu, aur anju darling 🤗

haan at d end ghotalas toh apne grah jayenge hi na..
thnk u...😳😳
happy holi to u too...

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

haan at d end ghotalas toh apne grah jayenge hi na..
thnk u...😳😳
happy holi to u too...

Nahi unhe lao na 😭
Achha Teri story hai mai tujhe tang kar rahi huhu 😆

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Nahi unhe lao na 😭
Achha Teri story hai mai tujhe tang kar rahi huhu 😆

thik h.. unko bolti huu aane k liye..
par yahan nai.. kahin aur 😉

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

thnk u 4GV..
m glad u all r loving it..
now i seem to b a bit satisfied not fully though...

no problem

Wow it was so gud ⭐️ really want this to happen actually in bdsah.
But as I writer I know why u are not satisfied because it happened really fast, but that's because it was a TS. I so wish it was a ff, you are such a gifted writer. I gave my honest review, I would like to apologize in advance if it hurts you somehow

Originally posted by: whiteMagic

Wow it was so gud ⭐️ really want this to happen actually in bdsah.
But as I writer I know why u are not satisfied because it happened really fast, but that's because it was a TS. I so wish it was a ff, you are such a gifted writer. I gave my honest review, I would like to apologize in advance if it hurts you somehow

thnk u so much for ur words NO..
i appreciate...
thnks for encouraging me..
y would i be hurt..
i had no intention of writing an ff...
this was actually an os.. which started frm just d last dialogue of vasant in 1st part...
i just gave a continuation wen i realised that os was incomplete.. & u readers asked me for continuation..
so a TS..
Yeah it was really very fast..
dint understand how to move on with d scenes...

Originally posted by: --Shamoo--

no problem

we will love it na as u wrote it really well

thnk u once again...

wow wow didi u wrote it so well yaar
u really have lot of patience u can write yaar
y r u always withdrawing
keep it up
u r bhai kah rahe hain follow karo
write an ff soon ur friends will love it yaar
hmm so gud it is
keep pming me like this k

Originally posted by: Saibhargav

wow wow didi u wrote it so well yaar
u really have lot of patience u can write yaar
y r u always withdrawing
keep it up
u r bhai kah rahe hain follow karo
write an ff soon ur friends will love it yaar
hmm so gud it is
keep pming me like this k

thnk u so much bhai. for cuming here & encouraging me..
m not withdrawing.. m just a bit of alsi...
wil think abt it too...
yeah wil surely pm u wen i write sumthing...