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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Wow MTA...u write soo well..👏
Loved both the chaps...annas pov...sharads dilemma well written👏
Ahh what plan does sharad have...
Waiting for next chap😳
Edited by .anjali. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
read both the chapters..
beautifully described !!
story somewhat seems real coz if anna expressed her feelings, sharad has to tell her the truth n then how will she react !!
definitely looking forward for ur next update :)
try to update soon n do pm if possible
request : try to update a long chapter :))
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Chapter 3
Sharad's pov::
I was ready. I knew I had to lie to Ana. But I had to convince Ana.
She came out of the house. I was mesmerized. No, don't look. I turned around and took out my phone. I wanted her to call me and then I would do it.
I was right after 5 seconds I heard my name.
Ana- " sharad "
I pretended not to hear. When I turned back she was right behind me.
Ana- " mai tumhe kab se bula rahi hu sharad"
Sharad-" ha to mujhe aur bhi kaam hai Ana bhaiya ne bahar bheja hai"
I could see she was hurt.
Ana-" lekin tum meri awaaz to sun sakte ho na sharad"
Sharad-" OK I am sorry chalta hu"
Ana-" sharad tumne jawab nahi diya"
Sharad-" kya jawab?"
Ana- " mere proposal ka sharad"
Sharad-" oh! Ha mai tumhe pyaar nahi karta Ana"
Ana- " ye tum kya keh rahe ho sharad?"
Sharad-" wahi jo tumne suna Ana"
She was visibly hurt. I turned my face away.
Ana-" lekin tum hi to..."
Sharad-" tum colony ki sabse khoobsurat ladki ho Ana. Wo sirf infatuation tha pyaar nahi"
Ana-" Oh my God I don't believe this tum usko infatuation keh rahe ho. Really sharad? "
Sharad-" thik hai Ana to sach sunlo...mai kisi aur se pyaar karta hu "
Ana- " kis se sharad? "
I had no answer to that.
Sharad-" mai jald hi usse leke aaunga"
I didn't wait after that. I was successful. She was hurt now she would never love me.
In a way it was a good thing. We won't live here forever. After we find 2015 we will go back to our planet. I will never see Ana again.
Ana's pov::
I know he was lying. Sharad might be many things but he is not unfaithful. He does not even look at any other girl.
I came back home. Ronnie bhaiya was sleeping on the couch. I entered my room. I wanted to cry not because sharad rejected me but because he was making lame excuses to reject me. I fell down on the bed.
Sharad's pov::
I was roaming aimlessly in the market. I had only been here to avoid Ana.
After roaming for two hours I came back home.
Bhaiya was very serious, in thoughts.
Sharad-" kya hua bhaiya?"
Vasant- " sharad ek bohot badi khabar aayi hai. Yaha se 1 ghante ke raaste pe ek do sar wala alien mila hai"
Sharad-" kya ye kya keh rahe hai aap bhaiya. Kya wo hamara 2015 hai?"
Vasant-" pta nahi sharad lekin pta lagana padega"
Sharad-" aur log kaha hai bhaiya? "
Vasant-" sharad ye baat sirf hum dono ke beech hai. Mai varsha ko koi jhooti umeed nahi dena chahta"
Sharad-" mai samajh sakta hu bhaiya. Aap yakeen rakhe mai kisi ko nahi btaunga"
I was relieved. I was searching some reason to forget Ana and this was it.
I went out. If this alien is our 2015? I will free him. Bhaiya and bhabhi spent every second of their life searching him. They will be so happy to see him.
As I was passing I saw Ana. She was on her window. She was just standing on her window. She wasn't looking at me. She was staring at infinity. I had hurt her. But she will not live a two faced alien. She will not hate me either. She will get scared of me.
I still remember when bhabhi turned into the alien. Everyone was so scared. So convinced that she is dangerous. Will she consider me dangerous too?
I started walking out of the colony.
My only aim is to find 2015. And I will do that.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
MTA its good post I can really imagine it ..dear..in ghotala's style it was mmm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Another nice update 👏⭐️
I feel that I have watched another nice episode of BDSAH 😃
Keep writing. 👏We ll keep waiting 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Wow ⭐️ it all felt so real like I was watching it.. waiting to see what will happen next update soon dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you @ice cold and @whitemagic
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
awesome update MTA..👏👏
well written...👏👏

finally anna decides to break d silence & catch sharad...
sharad tells anna he doesnt love her.. it was infatuation...😭
shrad hurts anna but more he hurts himself...😭
but he needs to b strong...
he decides to divert his minnd...
& right then mr. ghotala gives him solution of his pain...
vasant gets sum info abt an alien found.. & asks sharad to find out but secretly not informing varsha abt it...
sharad takes this chance to b away frm anna's thoughts...
wil he succeed??😕

continue soon..
thnks 4 d update...
sorry for late comment...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Chapter 4
Sharad was walking towards the lab vasant had informed him about. He was excited. What if that alien is 2015?
Happiness on vasant bhaiya's and varsha bhabhi's face, a smiling hemant, an emotional shishir and their journey back home. Though the only sadness would be to loose Ana forever. But when did she ever belonged to him. She was manav's. Always and forever. He just came between them. This thoughts started hurting him. Manav and Ana happily married. Even if one day he comes to meet her from his planet. She will be scared of him. She will pull her children closer and prevent them from her. Will he seem so scary to her?
He reached outside the lab. He could not enter it like that. Suddenly he saw a guy coming towards him. He thought if he can take the form of that guy. He went to the man.
Man-" excuse me aap andar nahi ja sakte"
Sharad-" lekin kyu?"
Man- kyunki ye jagah bohot dangerous hai yaha ek khatarnak alien hai"
Sharad-" kya kaha alien. Kya mai usse dekh sakta hu?"
The man looks surprisingly at sharad.
Man-" bhai Saab koi nayi car launch nahi ho rahi hai ek alien hai wo bhi khatarnak "
Sharad(making baby face)- " par mujhe alien dekhna hai "
Man- " bhai Saab aap pagal hai"
As he starts walking away sharad picks up a stick and hit the man. He faints. Sharad takes his form and badge and enters inside.
Sharad thinks hard. " akhir kaha chupaya hoga alien ko?"
Sharad decides to ask someone. A man passes by.
Sharad-" bhai Saab ye alien kaha rakha hai?"
The man looks angrily at sharad.
Man-" aaj peeke aaya hai kya gaitonde?"
Sharad-" haan piya hai na paani"
Man-" dekh gaitonde bakwaas mat kar. Tune kyu pucha alien kaha hai?"
Sharad-" wo mai bhul gaya wo kaha hai? "
Man-" dekh gaitonde dubara pucha to job gaya Tera. Alien left se stairs leke first floor ke third room me hai"
He goes. Sharad gets super excited to see 2015.

After 2 hours

Sharad comes home running. Vasant sees him.
Vasant-" kya hua sharad. Tu mila 2015 se?"
Sharad(panics)-" bhaiya bhaiya..."
Vasant-" kya hua sharad kuch bta na?"
Sharad-" bhaiya wo 2015 nahi hai bhaiya wo wo..."
Vasant-" kya wo sharad wo 2015 nahi hai to kaun hai hame isse kya matlab"
Sharad-" matlab hai matlab hai bhaiya kyunki wo 2015 nahi -8779 hai"
A fear runs on vasant's face.
Vasant-" kya -8779?"
Sharad-" haan bhaiya wo -8779 hai apko yaad hai na 5 saal pehle usne kya kiya tha?"
Vasant- " kaise bhul sakta hu mai sharad?"

* flashback*

-8779 was the high command of the planet. He was a very ambitious alien. He used to help everyone on his planet. Everyone considered him an ideal high command for the planet. He was a close friend of ghotala family too. He had power and he knew how to use it.

Or how to misuse it. -8779 had another face too. He wanted to conquer the whole world. He had even created a small army to attack the other planets starting with earth.
But vasant came to know about his plan. He tried to stop him but in vain. Finally vasant took the strict action of reporting him. It was unanimously decided to take away the position of high command from him. That day from best friend he became the worst enemy of vasant
Vasant came back to the present.
Vasant-" kya kaha usne sharad? "
Sharad-" bhaiya usne kaha wo bohot jald insaano ki qaid se azaad ho jayega aur uske baad uska pehla shikaar honge hum"
Vasant knew that they weren't mere threats. Even though he was powerless now but he still had millions of followers.
Vasant-" sharad ab hamare 2 maksad hai. 2015 ko dhundna aur -8779 ko yaha se bhejna"
Sharad-" par hum ye karenge kaise bhaiya?"
Hemant was listening to all this.
Hemant-" papa hum high command ko bata debge. Kaisa idea hai. Eee"
Vasant looked at him like a proud father. His genda wasn't that stupid afterall and if this plan works they could get rid of -8779.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
MTA it was so good after all this time ..I was waiting for it..I m excited..continue soon

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