PriRa TS-Your Handprints on My Soul (Final Part on Page 8) - Page 7

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Posted: 3 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: tournesol

I think the most beautiful aspect of your Ram and Priya is how they communicate with each other. And Pihu is simply the cutest, holding the flag of the RaYa ship 😆 The proposal is so cute. Beautiful story ❤

PriRa going in couple's therapy is what I need at this hour🤦‍♀️ *crying like Chandler* why can't they figure it out😭😭😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Jiyarao

Awesome awesome awesome .. beautiful shot ☺️😇✨.loved it 🤗😇✨

Glad it was worth your time🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

This is so so cute. Loved it

Glad you liked it🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Loved this TS Shibani and do write more. I loved your TS on Sara too and it is an absolute joy to read AU on these characters.

Thanks for commenting🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#65

Such a lovely part to end an beautiful tale ❤️🥰. I loved it Shibu, it was so adorable and the moments between the three of them were so affectionate that it brought a huge smile to my face.


A happy family moment and amazing proposal makes up for a wonderful update. As always you were amazing Shibu and I loved reading this one 💖😍.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: BlurredLines

Such a lovely part to end an beautiful tale ❤️🥰. I loved it Shibu, it was so adorable and the moments between the three of them were so affectionate that it brought a huge smile to my face.


A happy family moment and amazing proposal makes up for a wonderful update. As always you were amazing Shibu and I loved reading this one 💖😍.

Aww... Thank you Mandy🥰😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#67

It's the dialogues which add life to a story, and your dialogues manage to do just that. I find your dialogues very strong and thought provoking. I especially loved that one about the Marathi saying.

And the female proposing in your story also shows how your FLs are strong and know how to be in control of their lives.😳 Maybe that's not what you wanted to show, but it adds impact.😆

Waiting for your next story!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: la_Reine

It's the dialogues which add life to a story, and your dialogues manage to do just that. I find your dialogues very strong and thought provoking. I especially loved that one about the Marathi saying.

And the female proposing in your story also shows how your FLs are strong and know how to be in control of their lives.😳 Maybe that's not what you wanted to show, but it adds impact.😆

Waiting for your next story!

It's one of the first sayings I remember my mom saying to me.🙈 My FLs are opposite of me, tbh, except for the bit that they are self destructive at times, and thier humour is for very few people🤣 tbh, you got it right, Priya, especially, should be written as someone controls her life after her father left, but CVs ruined her horribly, so m giving her my favorite cliches🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
#69

so precious 🥺❤️🥹loved it!!

i love how they talk about everything 🥺❤️the way he felt insecure and he talked to her about it and she reassured him🥺❤️ how beautiful is that✨❤️❤️‍🩹

they found each other’s home 🥰❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: tumhiho

so precious 🥺❤️🥹loved it!!

i love how they talk about everything 🥺❤️the way he felt insecure and he talked to her about it and she reassured him🥺❤️ how beautiful is that✨❤️❤️‍🩹

they found each other’s home 🥰❤️

Glad you liked it🙈

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