RaYa OS: The Liar and The Fool ( Part 2) - Page 2

Oh my god!

If part 1 made my heart happy, then part 2 just made it soar 😭

This is so beautiful and wholesome and full of feels Nita, I love it ❤️❤️

Kaala teekas to both of them ☯️☯️☯️ and an extra one for Pihu ☯️

They deserve their happily ever after 🥺

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Aaah, it's so beautiful 💞🥰

Thank you Meri Shibu . I am so happy you liked it ❤️🤗

Can you write something where both pihu and ram possesive for Priya and how Priya handles it

Originally posted by: Alasmine

Thanks for tagging me!

The things I just loved:

1. How Pihu reminds Ram of Priya and vice versa.

2. How Priya thoughts are described- She doesn’t want to cry, doesn’t want to let him know that it hurts, she doesn’t dare to hope for a reunion. She believed things will go wrong. And now, the stakes are high cause Pihubis involved.
3. The writing of Ram’s response- he is the only solution to her fears. I know he’s gonna throw a fit first, like he always does, but once he gets to know about her securities, I hope this OS will be his response- he will restore her faith in their family.

Thank you for the lovely feedback❤️. Glad you liked it

@bold- I have zero hope with regards to the show 😆. I just am going to see all the lollipop scenes and live in my own version how it went down then trust the writers of the show.

I love this story of 2 Fools

We got a family of sweet three & I like how Ram acted maturely instead of going beserk & that would let them handle the unknowns here

Originally posted by: tournesol

This is so beautiful, I literally have tears in my eyes reading how you have described the depth of their emotions and the ending. I also loved how you played with the words 'fool' and 'liar'. Loved it ❤️

Thanks Meri Tia ❤️🤗. So glad you liked it.

I kind of wish the show works like the OS a bit too. Show us some emotions and regrets. But I know I am wasting my time hoping for anything.

Still it gives me plenty of different pov to write and I am glad you liked this one 🤗

Originally posted by: mysterious-soul

Woww.. It's beautiful❤

Thank you ❤️. Glad you liked it

Originally posted by: Bee222

Oh my god!

If part 1 made my heart happy, then part 2 just made it soar 😭

This is so beautiful and wholesome and full of feels Nita, I love it ❤️❤️

Kaala teekas to both of them ☯️☯️☯️ and an extra one for Pihu ☯️

They deserve their happily ever after 🥺

Thank you Bee for the lovely feedback 🤗❤️. So glad you liked it ❤️.

Indeed . They do deserve their happily ever after.

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

Can you write something where both pihu and ram possesive for Priya and how Priya handles it

Will write if get an idea 👍🏼

Originally posted by: SONIA441

I love this story of 2 Fools

We got a family of sweet three & I like how Ram acted maturely instead of going beserk & that would let them handle the unknowns here

Thank you for the lovely feedback ❤️. Glad you liked it 🤗.

The last two episodes in the show did show a glimpse of the sweet three and I hope we get to see more of them even when truth gets revealed