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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it! Nice OS 👍🏼❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part Two - Priya's Tale


The morning sun greeted the sleeping Ram and Priya. Ram's hand rested on Priya's waist, and her hand hugged Ram's cheek with her hand, he woke up first and saw his wife's hand on him.

Honey, if we wake up like this, I will never go to work and we will go broke and my teacher will feed me)

Okay, I'm joking, it's good that you're asleep, I need to run, otherwise you will reject my gift, my stubborn wife.

Suddenly, Priya stirred and Ram frightenedly jumped a meter away from her, almost knocking down an innocent bedside table.

Ram, you are incorrigible, run away from here before she wakes up! - Ram said to himself and ran away.

About 20 minutes passed, a sunbeam woke Priya, she opened her eyes and heard a sound, gentle, melodic.

"What it is?" The question struck her mind.

She threw off the covers and saw bracelets on her feet, a solid ring of silver surrounded by bells in the form of stars, in the center of each was a stone red as blood.

Priya grabbed her legs and said:

"How did he know my tale?"

When I was little, I was very fond of fairy tales, especially Arabic ones, like "1001 Nights".

Mom read them to me, and told her own, in a similar spirit.

One of them spoke of a sad princess who did not know who she was, lived very poorly, but amicably, with her foster family. She was sad because she could not provide for them, but she tried very hard, she worked hard and hard in the gardens of a wealthy Arab ruler, and then one day, it was there that the already grown girl was going through a particularly difficult day: she had to harvest cotton on a large plot , she worked so hard that she tore her shoes, it was impossible to interrupt, the clouds in the sky promised a heavy downpour, blood dripped from her feet, and raindrops began to fall from the sky, large and bright, they even seemed to the girl like stars, they were so strong shone, it was a special rain.

She walked and put the cotton in a huge bag, drops of blood and ringing rain trailed behind her. At that time, a man rode through this field on a horse, in simple clothes, and yet, stately and handsome. He had a thick dark beard, but his eyes were light and like the ocean, with blue and green notes.

He saw the girl and shouted:

- Little doe, you won't have some water, I've been working all day and I'm very thirsty!

- Yes, of course, brother, now I will come and give you water.

The girl's legs could barely carry her, but her kindness gave strength.

- Hold, if you want, I'll give you something to eat, I have left a cake.

The girl did not say that this was her only and last piece and gave everything to the man, who nodded embarrassedly, betraying his hunger.

She smiled slightly and said goodbye to him, not hearing for: "Goodbye", what he said next:

"We will definitely see you again, princess, very soon."

The next day, our girl was called to the local master.

“Have I done something to anger the master?” The girl thought frightened.

She decided that there was no need to be afraid, straightened her back and went to the palace.

It was very large and bright, and inside it there were many Arabic patterns and colored tiles, everything delighted the girl so much that she did not even understand how she ended up in front of the throne. On it, in a snow-white cloak, with a hidden face, sat the ruler.

He signaled and the girl spoke:

"Did I anger you in any way, sir?" My work is always very conscientious.

Yes, but you didn't listen to me.

- When?

- Yesterday...

Having said this, the gentleman threw off the cloth from his face, and yesterday's tired worker turned out to be in front of the girl.

- I have been watching you for a long time and I see your pure soul and kind heart. Be my wife, I am the ruler, nevertheless I ask you.

- Sir, do not think that this is because of your position, I say that I agree, I liked you yesterday, when I did not know anything, the ocean of your eyes took me with it.

So the princess found out why she is a princess, it's not about the title, but about the soul. She became a queen next to her husband and moved the family to the palace, her mother and three sisters lived with her. And on the wedding day, her husband gave her a scabbard

silver bracelets with stars in the center of which were stones red as blood. It was a symbol of the rain and blood that spilled on the day the girl met and her fate.

After hearing this tale, Priya decided that she would not wear anklets until her husband gave them to her.

She was a serious and practical person, but this fairy tale settled in her forever. And now Ram gave her such a gift.

"My naive husband, how can I sleep when your hands are on my legs? Your presence makes my days special, you are my weakness, my desire and I don't recognize when you touch me?"

I don’t know where Ram got them from, but they are exactly like in that fairy tale, does he really love me?, Priya asked the heavens, then abruptly got out of bed and circled so that the bracelets began to jingle.

Now this sound, these bracelets will bind me to you forever, Mr. Kapoor, no, Ram.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so good😆... I loved the fairy tale, and Priya waiting for her husband to give her ankets.... They indeed are made for each other❤️


An amazing one... I enjoyed reading it

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Posted: 3 years ago
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There is something serene about anklets. ❤️


[In real life, I don't like them but in stories, they represent ownership.]


The story you have written is very sweet and heartwarming. I wish the creatives show Ram putting it on Pri, not when she is sleeping, but in the whole consciouness. There is so much romanticism in him adorning the anklet on her.


Loved your piece absolutely! Keep writing! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Is this a real tale? It was beautiful!


A next part where Ram and Priya are talking about the anklets is a must. Maybe Priya can share the fairy tale.


Thank you for your amazing writing.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you, I'm always glad to hear that I was able to please someone)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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❤️I send my happy heart in return)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you) I really like the anklets, it's something romantic and very suitable for Ram and Priya, what is the essence of their relationship.

I hope we will see a similar moment in the series, but until this is not, you can show yourself a little)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Well, how to say, like everything that was written, I composed it) In the next part, there will definitely be a conversation between Ram and Priya, everyone will share something magical, important and warm.

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