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Part 29 - Star Investigation

Guys, I'm sorry, the new part is not very big again, I am haunted by difficulties, but I hope you will find something interesting for yourself here)


While Ram was indignant that his Priya was accused of some disgusting things, Priya herself continued to go about her business.

That 8:00 p.m. case, as we all understand, had nothing to do with that sir. It was completely connected with Ram. Priya decided to restore not only the meeting in the bathroom, but also to create some other moments. The first of them is the cupcakes that Ram ate, surprised by such a significant and appropriate note for his then situation. He got what he wanted, but he did not yet know everything he needed to know and understand about Priya and her life.

So she continued with her plan even though she wished she could just come and hug him.

Priya decided to give Ram cupcakes again, not with one note, but with many, each of which would say something about her. True or not, his instinct should have told him.

She thought for a very long time about a dozen notes that she would make, so Kun threw this phrase about this business of the century, it was really very important, and Priya chose 20:00 because it was the perfect time for cooking so that her Ocean would receive a message at night .

During the time that Priya knew him, she managed to learn that he loves to eat at night.

She was very nervous, but there was nowhere to retreat and at those very 20:00 she stood in the bakery and kneaded the dough to please Ram and make him think about who she was.

According to a long-standing skill, she prepared the cupcakes themselves very quickly, the difficulty was in writing notes.

What was in them?

You will learn it together with Ram.

Once again, he was nervous about everything that was happening and walked around the office from side to side:

“What is happening around? Why is all this happening?

I need to eat otherwise I'll go crazy!"

Just as Ram was about to dial a familiar number and order his favorite cupcakes, the doorbell suddenly rang.

“Who comes at this time? We need to go to the door as soon as possible, otherwise everyone will wake up.”

Ram quickly went to the door and opened it, but no one was there. Just a nice box of cupcakes.

“Oh, my beloved! Who sent them? My Priya, is that you?"

Ram was sure that Priya did it because he knew that her sister had a bakery.

“Honey, did you want to please me or did you come up with something again? Let's see".

Ram untied the ribbon on the box and inhaled the familiar, chocolate-cherry scent.

"Darling, you definitely did it, when I kissed you, your taste was the same."

Ram finished eating the first cupcake and saw a note under it:

1. I sang for you.

From the number and number of cupcakes, Ram realized that there must be more notes. He unfastened them from the sweets and began to read one by one.

2. I wrote a song for you.

3. I am learning to trust for you.

4. I bake for you.

5. I play for you.

6. I fight for you.

7. I rejoice with you.

8. I change with you.

9. I live with you.

10. I sing for you.

11. I cross the line for you.

12. I kill for you.


Ram read the last 2 notes and said, raising his eyes to the sky:

What did you do, Priya, was it really you?..

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Part 30 - Star Fears


A new part has come, we have another anniversary, guys. Hope you still like it)


Ram knew that Priya had not done what the detective said, but her words in the last note made him afraid.

"My beautiful golden-winged bird, what have you done? I sincerely hope that you will share your pain with me, tell me about that, and about those who dared to touch you with deed or word. You've always been lonely. You didn't tell me anything about it. But I felt it even when you sang for me for the first time, that night when I was drunk and broken by complete stupidity. Yes, now I know it's nonsense. I don't know half of what you've been through, but what I've learned, how I recognize you, made me realize that my experiences and the time lost because of the Vedika in the bottle were utter nonsense.

Honey, I am so grateful to you for what you are, if I hadn't met you, I would have continued to consider my experiences the greatest suffering in the world. My father would not have liked it, the only real suffering in my life is the loss of my father, but I had him. I am full of memories, warm feelings, moments that I will be able to cherish for the rest of my life. Just like mom, only her death and dad's departure can be considered a true grief, and I was grieving over the loss of a selfish girl who, in fact, was never interested in me, she was worried about my income, status and a million other things, but not me. But I was so carried away by it, my God! How stupid I was, thank you, bird, that you, without knowing it, showed me the difference between the real and the artificial. My mom and dad would be happy to know you and would set you as an example to me. I'm sure. You wouldn't be proud of it, but they would be proud that I could find someone like you. This means that their love and lessons were not in vain. I become what I should be, the Frame that life and the most loving parents created me, and not the fakes that began to appear next to them after they left. But now I know what to do and no fairy tales will lead me astray from the path to the true fairy tale that I want to create for you and myself. Speaking of fairy tales, I have absolutely no doubt that you will get along with my friends. Yes, it may be difficult for you, but you will get along with them, when I was looking for you, these crazy people have already fallen in love with you and I understand them. We haven't been together much yet, but you turned my life upside down. And I'm very happy about it, I agree if you do it with me every single day.

It hurt me that my mother left me first, then my father, I had a step-family, I fell in love with Shivi, Shubhu and Nandini's mother as relatives, they were also with me, but their attitude was never the one I aspired to. They showed me some attention and are doing it now, but deep affection, will it ever appear? My friends, the Gang, replaced my family, these people are the only ones who are ready to accept me in any way, and after Vedika's act, I did not hope that there was anyone the same, seeing me in me, Rama, just Rama, and not the billionaire and celebrity Ram Kapoor, with pockets full of money. But when I met and started to get to know you, I found hope that it was possible. You've never asked me about my status, you haven't asked for anything. You told me everything when I behaved like an impudent idiot, not paying attention to my expensive watch or the fact that I was a customer, and you sang in this restaurant for customers, nevertheless, this did not stop you from an honest argument with me, because I did not ask your permission to approach. The other one would have been scared or let me do what I want, but you fought and gave up only because I didn't give you any chances and we both clearly felt a special craving. If you only knew how much I want to kiss you again, but those little moments without any kisses made me as happy as I haven't been for many years, if ever. I hope that I will be able not only to think about it, but also to tell you everything that I am thinking about tonight, after reading your notes. You're scaring me and I'm scared too, but not because you could have made an attempt on the life of that non-human. But because you are frighteningly desperate, you are both strong and fragile, and I am very afraid of not being worthy of you, I am very afraid of becoming the cause of your new disappointment. Therefore, I understand and accept all your actions, scare me further, do what you want, confess to murder, theft, betrayal of the motherland or deception, I will listen and I will know that all this has nothing to do with you. Do whatever you want, pour out your fears on me. I know your truth, I see who you are. And what are you coming to me with. You want to give yourself to love, just like me, without paying attention to any circumstances around. But you've experienced too much and you're responsible for too many. Therefore, I will not condemn your fear for a second, I am also timid. I've been drowning myself in alcohol and stupid distractions for many years, it's not for me to judge you. I just wait and accept what you give to let you know that I will be your support, your protector, a man. Those from the past are not men and you probably don't call them that. If so, you're right, they don't know anything about being a man. I am not holy, but I have not allowed myself to mistreat any woman, and if they dare to appear before you again and allow too much, I will have to teach them. I'm totally ready to stand up for you. Stop standing up for everyone alone. I'll stand next to you."

Ram's mental flow was interrupted by an unexpected knock on the door of his office, which he reached automatically, walking around the house, absorbed in thoughts.

- Who can it be? Come on in.

- Hi...

- Priya...

- Sorry, I came uninvited.

- You don't need any invitation.

- Thanks.

- Don't thank me for what makes me happy.

"That much?"

- Yes.

"Then can I do something?"

- Consider that you are allowed here.

- Then I won't stop.

"I'm not going to stop you.

- Then be quiet...

Priya abruptly came close to Ram and kissed him in a way he never expected.

It was as if a kiss with him quenched her age-old thirst, and the water was Ram. For the first few seconds, he just enjoyed what she allowed herself, and then joined the kiss, capturing her mouth as he had dreamed for many days after that first moment.

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Thanks for the surprise at the end

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The surprise is not over) Thank you for your feedback, dear)

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