PriRa FF: will you grow old with me? Note: 60 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahra1977

Beautiful story can wait for the next update keep up the good work and happy new year

Thank you so much😊.will update now. Thanks for the wishes yaar

Happy new year 💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Welcome.❤️

Happy new year to you too.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ram's birthday is getting better) Health to your hands, dear author)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wishing everyone a belated Happy New year.


Part 4:

Everyone went to get ready,while Meera ma came and gifted a new dress to Ram

Ram: ma it was not necessary aapke aasirvaad kafi hai

Meera ma: phir bhi beta gifting my son gives me immense happiness. I know beta you always wear branded and costly dress. But If you are comfortable wear them otherwise it's not a problem beta

Ram: aise kuch nahi hai ma. Aapke pyaar ko badhkar kuch nahi hai. I will wear this only afterall it is gifted by my mother.

Meera ma: Mera pyaara bacha..get ready and come .we will wait outside

Ram: ok ma

Ram went to freshen up while at the same time Priya came and started waiting for ram

Ram came out wearing the new dress and saw Priya looking at him.

Priya was busy admiring her handsome husband

Ram: Priya

This made Priya to jerk back to the real world. Before ram could speak anything Priya handed him a gift wrapped box

Ram: another gift

Now Ram was excited to open it. So he just took the box from Priya's hand and started opening little enthusiastically. He opened the box to see a set of artistically crafted pocket square as Priya know his love for pocket squares. He just started taking out the blue pocket square which will suit with the dress he is wearing. Priya saw this and smiled thinking how a wealthy person like him can be satisfied with these small gifts.

Ram: thank you so much Priya. These are the best.

Priya: glad you liked it.

Ram: It is very different and beautiful. These handmade pocket squares with personalized touch is very unique. thank you so much Priya.

Priya : welcome Mr. Kapoor

Ram : you have to order some more pieces from this shop as I am in love with this type.

Priya just smiled and said

Priya: Now I will get ready and come . While you can join others Mr.Kapoor.

Saying so she was going to move when ram caught her hand spoke looking into her eyes with little tears in his eyes

Ram: I am really lucky to have you Priya ..thanks for coming into my life.you have filled my life with happiness.

Priya stared at him with little moist eyes.

Their moment was broken by their family's call.

Ram: you get ready I will be outside

Saying so he went outside before Priya can respond. Priya thought to speak to him later and went to get ready

Outside Everyone complemented ram and later his friends went to do last minute preparations . It was Sara who noticed Ram's pocket squares followed by brindha

Sara: aapke pocket square bohut aachi hai

Brindha : haan jaan kafi unique hai

Sara: Priya neh banaya tha na

Ram: nahi di Priya neh Diya tha

Sara: no no Ram you are mistaken I have seen Priya making these.

Now this was a shocking news to Ram.

At the same time Priya entered the room and Sara excitedly turned towards her

Sara : Priya these are made by you right?

Priya saw ram looking at her with utmost concentration so she just nodded her head.

Ram: why didn't you tell me this Priya?

Priya: it's not a big deal Mr. Kapoor

Ram: It may not be a big deal for you but it's a very big deal for me Priya.

Priya just kept looking at him without saying anything.

Realising they have so many audience Ram just thanked her again for the lovable gift.

Shivi came and started dragging ram upstairs,so he went with shivi followed by others.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome but so short .dil hi nai bharta.kya karein ji!!!😄

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Something handmade. What a priceless gift :)
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Both the birthday gifts are so thoughtful !!!

You have raised the bar so high that I cannot wait see what Priya is actually gonna gift Ram on show..


Loved all the parts. Very cute and beautiful ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Each part is beautiful, very well written and gradually building up the bond. Lovely, enjoyed reading and please continue 👍🏻

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Updating another part today as IF didn't allow me post yesterday. Hope you all will like it.


Part 5

When they entered the terrace Ram was dumbfounded by the arrangements.

The terrace was beautifully decorated with lights and flower bouquets. There was a neatly decorated table with huge three tier cake majestically sitting on it.

Ram stood there watching everything while brindha,shivi,sandy and Sara dragged him to the table.

Sandy: jeeju, Priya di and Sara di together made this cake for you with all your favourite flavours in it

Shivi: Bhai even I helped them in decorating the cake

Brindha: even I was making their work easy by talking with them ram

Ram laughed hearing this.

Ram was so touched by their efforts because he know the arrangements everything was personally done by his loved ones without simply handing over it to a event management.

Priya: it's time for cutting the cake. Let's get started

Saying so she lit the candle and handed him the knife.

Ram instead of taking the knife from Priya's hand. He started holding her hand along with the knife and moved to cut the cake. Priya was pleasantly surprised while akki , Kunal, vikrant started whistling and girls cheered for them. Ram looked at Priya and smiled while Priya blushed slightly.

After cutting the cake together, Ram fed the first piece to Priya and then Priya fed him.

Then everyone was around ram to feed him and get fed by him. Ram was enjoying his birthday for the first time in his life to fullest.

After finished eating cake,the boys bought the matresses, the girls bought the pillows and they started arranging it neatly.After arranging everything , they made both Priya and ram to sit in the middle and everyone sat surrounding them. This setup confused Priya too as it is a surprise for her too. Before anyone can ask anything adi signalled vikarant to start the slideshow.

The slideshow had a various pictures of both ram and Priya together,mostly candid pics which they both were never aware of for his favourite bade ache lagte hain song. Ram and Priya noticed in every picture there was a smile on their face which made them realise the effect the have on eachother unknowingly.

Everyone enjoyed the video and teased them for some pictures.

Then brindha got up and changed to next video before starting it she spoke

Brindha: Ram this is specially for you.

And started playing the video it was full of Ram's picture from his childhood,some with his mother and father,some with his grandfather and many with his goofy smiles. The pictures with his parents made him tear up but he controlled it and smiled. Everyone got emotional seeing the pictures since he lost his mother at the tender age of 7.

Shivina came near his Bhai and hugged him with her love and respect for him as she realised how lonely he would have felt remembering the way they treated him especially her mom. After marrying akki she got to feel the real simple love than a fancy fake love.

Shivi: Bhai thanks for being there for us always and I'm really sorry for taking you as granted. Love you so much Bhai. Now I got to understand and realise your love for us Bhai. You were there for me not as a brother but as a father. I will try rectify my mistakes that I did in the past Bhai. If you can please forgive me Bhai.

Shivina cried while pouring her heart to Ram who was also crying listening to his sister's talk

Ram: shivi bache, you have grown up so much and you didn't do any mistake, you have all the rights to ask me anything . So don't use big words like sorry,thank you.you will always be like my daughter.

Everyone's eyes were moist and the most happy person is akki since finally his wife understood his jeeju's love. To lighten up the mood sandy spoke up

Sandy: jeeju this is my gift for you and first you have to open it

Shivi: no no wait a second Bhai

Shivi ran and bought her gift and gave it to Ram saying you have to open mine first

Brindha: arey aise kaise , ram you have to open mine

By saying like this everyone started thrusting their gifts to Ram. Ram is finding difficult to hold the gifts as there were so many and to top that all were busy fighting. Ram gave a please help me look to Priya who in turn laughed seeing him like that. Finally deciding to help her husband she spoke loudly

Priya: Now Mr. Kapoor is not going to open any gifts . He will open it when he is alone.

Now everyone come we will start the dinner

The dinner was served in terrace itself. Every dishes were made in home. Everyone started eating while Ram kept playing with his food which was continuously noticed by his wife.

Seeing Priya looking at ram without eating Meera ma turned and saw Ram. One look at him the mother in her understood that he is missing his mother . Without saying anything, she picked up the plate and went near Ram saying

Meera ma: Today I will feed my son with my hands and started feeding him

Ram was too emotional to say anything so he ate silently. Watching this everyone understood his emotions so jovially brindha said

Brindha: I too will feed my Jaan on his birthday and started feeding him

Shivi: even I will feed my brother and she fed him one morsel

Followed by Sandy, Sara ,mami and seeing this adi followed even we will feed our Ram and started feeding followed by akki, Kunal ,vikarant and mama

Ram is enjoying everyone's love at the same time he looked at Priya who was smiling seeing him getting pampered. Ram mouthed a small thank you to her as she is the one who made it possible. Priya gave a full fledged smile in return seeing him happy.

After getting fed by everyone ram finally shouted I'm full yaar

Ram : now I will feed Everyone and started feeding others.

Shivi fed Priya and like this everyone ate happily and finished their dinner.

After finishing dinner everyone sat around and started talking about the silly things they have done during their college days and busy laughing listening to others story.

Meera ma noticed that Priya wasn't comfortable sitting as she know Priya was doing all the work without resting from morning , so she asked her to come near her, when Priya came she made her to lie in her lap, at first she protested later she gave in and lied in her mother's lap. By laying she started listening attentively to the story which brindha is saying about her Mr. Kapoor. Ram was talking with everyone still kept taking a glance at Priya and Meera ma as they both were near him. For the first time he felt little jealous of Priya. Meera understood his inner turmoil and called ram

Meera ma: ram beta you to lay down, you have not taken any rest today.

Saying so she made ram too lie in her lap near Priya. Ram too laid down without protesting near Priya. Priya saw ram through corner of her eyes but didn't say anything.

Everyone was happy seeing ram getting his fair of happiness as they don't want to make it emotional or awkward for him, they kept continuing the conversation without stopping it's flow.

After sometimes, they saw that both ram and Priya have slept with Ram holding her hand in sleep.

All felt happy seeing them sleeping peacefully as everyone know their struggle to reach this place. They thanked the god for giving their favourite couple a peaceful life.

They know both ram and Priya can face anything together. So they just prayed for their togetherness.


- to be continued

Edited by Supercool30 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww- this is so supercool :) the candid pics, Shivi scenes, everyone feeding each other - just wow!

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