RamYa FF : Second Chances (Discontinued. Note on Page 37) - Page 24

Hello,

Looks like I am jumping in on this story with 28 Chapters already written. I wish I could have started on this earlier. But nevertheless, I'll keep leaving comments for all the chapters.❤️

Cheers!!😊

Chapter 1: Them

Awesome introduction. You have shown such a beautiful parallel in their lives - of the wistfulness - like looking at life from the other side of a glass window. Beautiful!😊

Chapter 2: Silver Linings

I feel so bad for Ram. On TV too, in such moments I feel really bad for him. He is so selfless - I can never understand his family's reasoning for always pushing him aside💔. Love how you have shown the bond between his friends!

Chapter 3: Dark Skies

Again a beautiful chapter - giving us a glimpse into Priya's mind. Also, I liked the way you structured the chapters here - as we are slowly progressing with their lives running in parallel. It felt like I am watching a movie.👍🏼

Chapter 4: Glimpses

.....and they get a glimpse of each other for the first time. Despite the worries in their lives, both of them took a moment to notice each other🥳

Chapter 5: Harsh Truths

Both their reactions are the same.

Ram: "You are kidding right?"

Priya: "Are you kidding me?"

Love how you brought a little bit of humor in the chapter. 😆

Chapter 6: The meet

I couldn't help laughing out loud here🤣. Ram is really adorable. Loved reading this one!!

Chapter 7: The Condition

At this point it has become rather redundant for me to say that this was another awesome chapter (like every chapter). But I am going to say it nonetheless. Awesome Chapter!!

Felt like even though Ram and Priya were on the opposite sides - they were on a common ground. Ram understood Priya, having met her hardly a few minutes ago, goes to show how deeply an empathetic person he is. Loved how he took a stand for her.❤️

This is a wonderful story! Looking forward to reading more of this!

Cheers!!

Can’t wait for you to update this

Finally you updated, you made us wait till infinity...

Beautiful as always !!

Tying the shoe lace was such an oblivious caring gesture from Ram, the most instinctive natural thing for him to do, but the sea of emotions it would evoke in Priya, beautifully portrayed ❤️

Hi

Good to have you back.

Amazing chapter

Kindly update frequently

Oh it's so nice to see you back😍

Only through you we all are getting to see Raya on a long honeymoon.❤️😌

It was soo good. The slow progression in their relationship in your story is a treat to read with every new chapter.🤗😌

Damn it was so beautiful 😍. So many scenes were just fab - ram tying lace,the first scene nok jhok of frens,ram getting happy just with the prospect of getting picture clicked with Priya ,whose phone ram got that adi got to know?I didn't get it.Was it shubham to blame ram again? N final determination of priya to let ram in and acknowledging that even ram needs her.There were so so many mushy soothing moments.loved it.

Oh wow finally an update! I was eagerly waiting for this.

Can't wait to see RaYa's relationship grow. They both need the companionship.

Beautiful loved it !! Please please continue soon ... Such heart felt moments just make our day... Take care.. eagerly awaiting the next part.

wow finally they are letting each others in

i just love these two