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Posted: 3 years ago
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My eyes welled up. Honestly, I cannot say why. As Priya walked away, proud, independent, yet broken like a fragile glass, every cell in my body desperately wished to call out her name. I wanted to stop her, to hold her. I wanted to tell her that everything will be fine and that all the pain was in the past. I wanted to wipe away the unshed tears that she hid behind the facade.

Instead, I looked down, fighting away my tears.

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Inspired by episode aired on 21 September 2020. Hope you liked it. Drop down your comments and leave behind your reactions.

You can find my drabble collection here Entwined: A Drabble Collection


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it...⭐️❤️


Keep writing more ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing 😍😍


Shibani you are giving beautiful and wonderful drabble.


Keep writing🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so tear-jerking. I felt I was tearing up along with him. And also, such fine writing 🤍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

My eyes welled up. Honestly, I cannot say why. As Priya walked away, proud, independent, yet broken like a fragile glass, every cell in my body desperately wished to call out her name. I wanted to stop her, to hold her. I wanted to tell her that everything will be fine and that all the pain was in the past. I wanted to wipe away the unshed tears that she hid behind the facade.

Instead, I looked down, fighting away my tears.

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Inspired by episode aired on 21 September 2020. Hope you liked it. Drop down your comments and leave behind your reactions.

You can read my first drabble on BALH2 here:

Priya Drabble- Facade


Beautiful writing 👏

Exactly portrays Ram's state in the scene 💔

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

This is so tear-jerking. I felt I was tearing up along with him. And also, such fine writing 🤍

Thank you so much🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awee that was beyond outstanding

it was so intense and palpable !!


Loved reading your work!


Keep writing! Big smile

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Popppins

Awee that was beyond outstanding

it was so intense and palpable !!


Loved reading your work!


Keep writing! Big smile

Thank you😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful summation of a beautiful scene❤

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This was beautiful 😍

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