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Posted: 3 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: tEENkRmNsR

Lovely OS… Do write more… Waiting for these scenes


Thank you! Well, there is another one shot in the works. Should be up tomorrow. 🤞

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Posted: 3 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-


Thank you! Haha, what a treat it would be to watch something like this on the show. 😅

Yeah waiting for his obsession over his Vedu to end but right now she has to cause problems in Ram and Priya's relationship by continuously reminding him of their sacrificed true love. Iske bina ITV concepts aage badh hi nahi sakte 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: hapc

This was amazing.. Ram has already began to ignore Vedika whenever it comes to Priya so I definitely see this happening. They are so cute and I can't wait for them to be married.


Thanks you! Yes, he's begun ignoring her but I don't know why Shashi and Vedika are not around for Ram's wedding. It feels weird given that Shashi wants to prove all is well between them even after Shivina called off the engagement but we don't see them around.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sarcy-


Thank you! Well, there is another one shot in the works. Should be up tomorrow. 🤞

Awesome

Waiting for it :D

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Posted: 3 years ago
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You are amazing man! Loved this! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#66

Amazing as always 🙌


Ohh god I literally thought he is waiting for vedika.. when ram went to entrance I thought ye gaya fir Ra Ra Re land me but to my surprise he went straight toh his Wife Priya ❤️🤭


I had big grin plastered on my face throughout but specially when the gang of four were trying to hear prira's talk 😂 and when Ram went to Priya❤️

I really loved the way you wrote brinda's POV bcz she is the only one who deeply understand them.


I hope it go exactly like your one shots in the show 🤞 I m just craving for more of prira content from you 🙏 you know dil mange more 🤭 I know it's stupid que but when can I expect new content??🙈😝

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Posted: 3 years ago
#67

This was such a sweet OS! I'm bookmarking the tab so I can come and read this over and over again. My favourite thing about it was that you chose to write it entirely from an outsider's point of view which allowed us as readers to actually see and experience PriRa through their friends' eyes (I just think it's a really good writing choice!)


Your writing for Ram's friends (and I guess they're Priya's friends at this point too, lols) was spot on! Them trying to be cupids, their disdain towards Vedu and Neeraj, their utter disbelief and excitement at Ram ignoring Vedu and making his way towards Priya - it was perfect! I also think that Ram and Priya absolutely fit that saying 'the couple that judges people together stays together' or whatever that saying is, I am absolutely here for them bonding over making fun of their horrible exes + other people that deserve to be made fun (ie. Mahendra Sood).

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

You are amazing man! Loved this! ❤️


Thanks, Anushka! 💛

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: jd_jo

Amazing as always 🙌


Ohh god I literally thought he is waiting for vedika.. when ram went to entrance I thought ye gaya fir Ra Ra Re land me but to my surprise he went straight toh his Wife Priya ❤️🤭


I had big grin plastered on my face throughout but specially when the gang of four were trying to hear prira's talk 😂 and when Ram went to Priya❤️

I really loved the way you wrote brinda's POV bcz she is the only one who deeply understand them.


I hope it go exactly like your one shots in the show 🤞 I m just craving for more of prira content from you 🙏 you know dil mange more 🤭 I know it's stupid que but when can I expect new content??🙈😝


Thank you! 💛


Haha, the whole point of this oneshot was that I wanted Ram to come out of his Ra Ra Re land. 😆


I think Ram's friends are pretty cool, especially the way they get affected when his family ignores him despite all that he does for them. So I wanted to do this shot from their perspective showing their care, concern and worries as well as happiness as his emotional status changes. It's amazing the extent to which Bree cares for him so I absolutely could not let that go.


I'd love to write more on these two too but no new ideas yet. I'm yet to catch up with all of last week's episodes. If something strikes from there, then I can explore it. If not, I don't know how long it will take for something new to be available. But will keep you posted when I write. 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: foreverlazy

This was such a sweet OS! I'm bookmarking the tab so I can come and read this over and over again. My favourite thing about it was that you chose to write it entirely from an outsider's point of view which allowed us as readers to actually see and experience PriRa through their friends' eyes (I just think it's a really good writing choice!)


Your writing for Ram's friends (and I guess they're Priya's friends at this point too, lols) was spot on! Them trying to be cupids, their disdain towards Vedu and Neeraj, their utter disbelief and excitement at Ram ignoring Vedu and making his way towards Priya - it was perfect! I also think that Ram and Priya absolutely fit that saying 'the couple that judges people together stays together' or whatever that saying is, I am absolutely here for them bonding over making fun of their horrible exes + other people that deserve to be made fun (ie. Mahendra Sood).


Thank you! It makes me happy to know you enjoyed it so much as to want to read it again. 💛 Love that the external perspective resonated with you. Ram's friends have been so close to him for so long, I felt it would make sense for them to have these kind of feelings about Ram's life and I decided to explore that angle with this shot.


Though some fans find Ram's friends annoying in the show, I find it refreshing to see that they love him so selflessly and are always there for him. As to PriRa, if they team up, they can actually put so many people in place with the combination of their skills and personalities and it will be fun to watch/read.


In case of you're interested in more of PriRa, here's a link to a one-shot I wrote after this one. Would love to hear your thoughts if you do read.


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-achhe-lagte-hain-2/5253507/prira-os-family

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