NEW STORY: SERENDIPITY Part1, Preview page 2 (13/12)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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NEW STORY: SERENDIPITY

You taught me everything. About life, hope and the long journey ahead. I'll always miss you. Our love is like the wind. I can't see it but I can feel it. I don't know why I'm still waiting for you but I want to show you this new me. The one you have changed.
The one who just belongs to you

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow dear once again very good concept.
A role reversal with in the story
Ram being a mere employee and Priya being millonaier daughter but in this both of some kind of understanding.
I am looking for the first chapter of RaYa life in this story
Thank you for the pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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i want to make a confession... i swear i love your stories and the way of ur narration. superb. absolutely mind blowing. new story, new concept, new characterisation. wow
thanks for pm. waiting for next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow new concept...very interesting pls update 1st part ,waiting ...waiting...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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plsss update first part...waiting for your writing yaar
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 1: My BOSS updated
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow super good
Ram doing the narrative part with the introduction of his boss was nice as well.as seems he has crush on her.

Same applies with Priya from her body language but now who is this peehu Kapoor and related to Ram.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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omg!!! how could u write so so so well everytime? i just love ur wrtiting. its really intoxicating. ek nasha sa hai aapki writing me.
i m really short of words to praise u.
superbly narrated story. i m loving it. pl continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb... Interesting story.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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My trip is finalised and there will be no updates for next 20days. And here is the preview for those who were pestering me. Now you can imagine the next part
I have updated the note on passion ignites do have a look and give me your opinions

Preview

"Get out of my cabin at once." She warns

He held up his hand to motion her to silence.

"I don't like if you dress up like this and even I'm not ok with your decision of staying alone away from your parents." He said everything in single breath.

Her brows furrowed in confusion, "What does that mean? Do you have problem if I dress in saree too!!"

"And how do you know I'm staying alone?"
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Every muscle in her body tensed as sexual awareness surged through her body like a streak of white hot lava.

Her mouth opened slightly, her breath caught in her throat and every sense in her system reacted to the man, to the memory of the way he could make her feel, and yea he is an expert in this.

"You are perfect. You are best thing I have felt in my whole goddamn life Priya" he whispers.

She bites her lip, a smile dimpling her cheeks.
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"You are my boss and I'm very well aware of that damn fact" Saying he finally hooks her blouse making her world to spin.
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I feel no change in her. But how can that be possible. She is a mother now there should be that changes in her but no there is nothing like that. She is still same. He was confused with what he felt.
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Mumma why I don't have brother or sister?" She pouts.
Priya looks at her surprised.
"What will you do after I go? You will be alone na Mumma, Don't you get scared?" Saying Riya wipes her mother's tears.

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