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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Nice update
Ram is very big personality how come Priya didn't know about Ram
whereas Neha knew about Ram
I think Neha will find it out
Interesting love to see what will be Priya reaction after knowing Ram's identity
thanks for PM
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting story...beautiful update...
Kapoor not double 'o' hehe..
thnx for d pm arpita..cntnu soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 6


Vik- wo toh mai bhi soch raha hun.

Ram- iss ke bank a/c k details aur ghar ka paata nikal.

Vik- wo kam start hua hai kal tak information mil jaayegi aur yaha ke current a/c me bahot baada difference hai.

Ram- wo bhi dekha hai aur uss par work bhi chalu hai a/c ka head kon hai.

Vik- a/c departments se koi problem nahi hai, problem Mani hai.

Ram listen him carefully.

Vik- mujhe USS par full 100% shuk hai wo employee dikha raha hai 100% but waha par work kar rahe hai 85%, 15% fake hai.

Ram- ok toh ab tujhe Jo karna hai kar usske saath.

Vik- u don't worry aur ek baat.

Ram- ky bol.

Vik- inn sab me priya ke ghar ke papers mil jaate hai toh.

Ram- toh priya ko wapas karte hai aur kya.

Vik- wo toh hoga hi lekin.

Ram- ab ky lekin.

Vik- wo tu priya ke baare me phir se.

Ram little irritated- tujhe priya se problem kya hai, ye bata pehle mujhe.

Vik- ek ho toh batatu na tujhe.

Ram- matlab kya hai tera.

Vik- thode din ruk phir baata dunga.

Ram slap his forehead, vik went from there.

Next day class time, priya came little late, all students went for next class, her lecture after that so she enter in class without notice if anybody there, with books & sandwiches box in her hand, headphones on her ears, music on with full volume.

Ram saw her with all these n smile n memories of her each n every action.

Ram think- issey abhi tak ye bhi nahi Pata hai ke mai yaha par, itna busy hai music, book aur sandwiches me, very bad, disturb karna toh Banta hai, that's my rights year, ab toh sandwich bhi share hoga, n he got up from his seat n knock on desk she didn't take out her earphones from ear n said.

Priya little high pitch- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.

Ram took his fingers on ears with irritating look, she understand n she turn off her music n took out earphones.

Ram- thank you.

Priya- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.

Ram- wo sandwich.

Priya cut him middle - mera hai.

Ram- I know aapke hai but I m hungry please.

Priya - bahar hotel hai waha jaa kar Khaalo OK.

Ram- plz 2 pieces too much hungry.

Priya making face n give him sandwich.

Ram- thank you.

Priya again asked- lecture attend kiu nahi karne gaye.

Ram- wo aapke lecture jaise lecture nahi lete na toh.

Priya- iss liye abhi tak yahi par ho.

Ram- u joke on me.

Priya- naa naa joke nahi abhi tak tumhare umar ke bacchon ko bacche huey honge iss liye.

Ram- how funny.

Priya- I m ur teacher.

Ram- seriously! I thought u r my frnd.

Priya little rude with him- hey hero mind me fit karlo mai kisi ki frnd nahi hun.

Ram- lekin aap ne hi toh mere saath.

Priya cut him middle- bhukh lagi thi iss liye, usska galat matlab mat nikalo, issey insaniyat bolte hai.

Ram- mujhe laga aap tiffin share kar rahe ho toh, sorry.

Priya- bhukhe insan ko khaana khilane se plus point milte hai.

Ram- plus point n he nodded like understand.

Priya- now go n seat u r place.

Ram- thank you, ram think- how can she talked with me rude.

Priya in mind- priya bahot jaada rudely baat ki n she closed her eyes disappointment.

Ram in mind- phir bhi cute laga.

Priya- kuch kaha tumne.

Ram turn- kis ne.

Priya- tumne.

Ram nodded in no.

Priya- OK.

At evening vik came to pick Ram, n saw neha's scooty stand at entrance, she waiting there for priya.

Vik from car- she must be waiting for her GF n he came out from car n start walking towards her n stand little far from her n priya, sometime priya came out from the class n give her hand bag to her n said.

Priya- so BF aaj kaha par jaana hai.

Neha little naughty voice- hey my Jaan's mood is very good today.

Priya- ummm bahot jaada pp' k liye chale.

Neha little surprised- pp' n all haan aj kuch jaada hi mood me hai.

Priya- of course darling.

Neha- OK phir chalo pp' ke liye, usse pehle ek kiss.

Priya- yaha par.

Neha- toh phir.

Priya- hwww log kya sochenge.

Neha- jo sochna hai sochne do, mujhe kya padi hai.

Priya- Neha!!!!

Neha- OK ok chale ab, priya seat back side n they both away from there.

Vik in mind- kaisi ladkiya hai ye dono, duniya ki kuch padi hi nahi hai, public me itna sab kuch toh akele me, ohhh God how can these, ye priya kaise ho sakti hai, aur iss gadhe ko bhi yahi mili thi puri duniya chodke, priya ke dimag par koi asar toh nahi hua hai na, Ram se Maine priya ke baare me bahot kuch accha sunna tha lekin ye toh opposite hai, ram came behind him n saw vik making weird faces n lost in his thoughts.

Ram jerked him- pagal ho gaya hai kya.

Vik little frustrated tone- tum pagal ho jo galat insan se pyar kar raha hai, mai jo dekh raha hun wo tu kiu nahi dekh raha hai.

Ram- ek kam karta hun.

Vik- kya!

Ram- raastein me hospital hai.

Vik- haan hai.

Ram- waha par tujhe lekar jaata hun aur shocked data hun issey tumhara dimag thik hoga, pagal ho gaya hai, itna mat soch aur sochega toh aage jaa kar sach me pagal ho jaayega.

Vik- pagal mai nahi tu ho gaya hai.

Ram- tu chal ghar par, chal n he dragged him with him.

Mani's cabin intercom ring, he pickup the call.

Mani- haan bolo.

Sec- sir aap se milne koi vikram aaya hai.

Mani- appointment hai.

Sec- 1 mint sir n she asked to vik about appointment, vik say no to her.

Sec to mani- no sir.

Mani- usse kaho mai busy hun, baad me time milega toh mil lunga.

Sec told about his msg.

Vik asked to sec- can I speak with him by intercom.

Sec asked to mani about intercom, mani told her give him.

Mani- bolo kon ho tum.

Vik- vikram.

Mani rudely- toh what can I do for you? If you came here for any kind of donation or any kind.

Vik cut him middle- tumhare hi jarurat ki baat karne aaya tha lekin jaana do, you are not in mood to listen me, I have lot of important work, jaane do bad luck hai tumhara, bas itna yaad rakhna jo tumne jhoothi balance sheet banayi hai uss ka time aa chuka hai aur tum jail jaane wale ho.

Mani- what do you mean?

Vik in attitude- yahi ki kuch 20-25 jhoote personal a/c jo tumne dusre logo ke naam se open kiye hai aur present kiye hai aur bahot saare liabilities dikha kar jo company ko loot rahe ho, wo sab mujhe Pata hai.

Mani- kon ho tum?

Vik in mind- ab aaya ye glass me.

Vik to mani- tumhara humraz ya aisa samjho iss company ka jo mallik hai uss ka dushman, tum sirf paison ke liye ye kar rahe ho aur mai wo position ke liye.

Mani- give it phn to sec, he give it to her, she tell to Vik that he may go in.

Vik smilingly in mind- wow plan is working not bad Vik kya dimag paaya hai n he appreciate to him, he entered in cabin, he take seat without permission.

Mani little attitude- meri permission ke bina hi tum.

Vik cut him middle - look mani agar khud ko bacchana chahte ho toh attitude iss cabin se aur mujhse dur rakhoge toh hi accha hoga.

Mani- kya jaante ho tum mere baare me.

Vik- bahot kuch.

Mani- Jaise ke.

Vik- jabardasti se kis ko shaadi k liye majbur karna, Jaise k home loan ko chukakar uss ghar ke pepars aapne pass rakhna, Jaise ke ghar ki jo badi beti hai usse shaadi karni hai wo bhi jabardasti kiu ki tumhe wo pasand hai aur wo tumhe pasand bhi nahi karti, most important wo kaha par reheti hai ye baat aaj tak tum kabhi Pata laga hi nahi paaye ho, I m right Mr. Mani n he give successful smile to him.

Mani have no words to say.

Vik- itna dil pe mat lo dimag kharab kar dunga.

Mani- itni sari baatein tumhe kaise Pata.

Vik- abhi kaha Maine dil pe mat lo dimag par asar hoga.

Mani- deal manjur hai, lekin mujhe iss kya.

Vik cut him middle- tumhe issey bhi baada cabin jo tum abhi loot rahe ho company ko, jo amount har month le rahe ho uss amount ke aage 2 zero aur add ho jaayega.

Mani smile evil with acceptance- manjur hai mujhe.

Vik- good.

Mani- lekin maine jo ye sab Kiya hai uss me.

Vik cut him middle- naam nahi aayega kisi bhi chiz me.

Vik in mind- saare gaade murde ukhad dunga tere aur gold ke saath tera naam news me dunga with police van.

At priya's place, she reading something n click something in her mind n she smile.

Priya- Neha listen na.

Neha from kitchen- kya bol na.

Priya- idhar aa na kuch baatana hai.

Neha- array yaar tu aa na yaha.

Priya- tu gas band kar ke yaha par aa kam hai wo bhi bahot important tu hi hai jo ye kam kar sakti hai.

Neha switch off the gas n came there- bol kya baat hai.

Priya- baith yaha par.

Neha- yaar khaana banana hai.

Priya- I will help you.

Neha- it's my turn today.

Priya- so what I will help you darling.

Neha- kya baat hai bol.

Priya- mujhe ek baat baatani hai tujhe, I mean share karni hai.

Neha give her little surprised look with smile- sach me tu kuch share karne wali hai.

Priya- haan of course! Koi shak hai.

Neha nodded in yes- haan tune issey pehle bahot baar aisa bola hai aur baad me idhar udhar ki baatein baata kar time kharab Kiya hai.

Priya- nahi karungi time kharab.

Neha seat next to her side- bolo.

Priya- tujhe Pata hai meri shaadi fix hui hai.

Neha- uss me konsi badi baat hai mujhe Pata hai uss gadhe mani ke saath.

Priya slap her on arm- hatt uss gadhe ke baare me to mai aapne aapko bhi na sochu shaadi toh dur ki baat hai.

Neha little bit shocked- tu bhaghkar shaadi kar rahi hai, I mean kis ke saath, kon hai wo, kya karta hai, kaisa dikhta hai, pehli baar kaha par mile tum dono, she excited with happy n asking all questions in one breathing priya only look at her.

Neha stop n asked- what!

Priya- ho gaya hai toh mai kuch bolu.

Neha nodded in yes.

Priya- kitna bolti hai, meri baat jab tak puri nahi hoti tab tak tu ek word nahi bolegi.

Neha- OK plz continue.

Priya- meri shaadi fix hui when I was 12 with golu molu, my papa's frnd amar uncle son, I called him always golu molu coz of his dadi call him, n I was always teased him n u can't believe he never teased me back, Never! U asked me na that day why are you happy n I was said that k phir kabhi baataungi aaj baatana chahti hun, uss din golu molu ka bday tha.

Neha- bachpan wala pyar n all haan.


Continue soon "

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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Awww superb part yaar n hope vik ka doubt clear ho jaye ki priya n neha r friends but loving this story plss update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Superb ...update pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Superb update dear.
Vikram bechara.
Priya is also in love with Ram.
Thanks for pm and please continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
OSM update...
hehe Priya-neha ki pyar n frndship ko hmesha vikram galat smjta h...bechara
Priya ram ko kab pehchanegi.. cant wait for next update..pls update sooon...
Thnx for d pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Nice update dear...

So finally ram having some conversation with priya:) ..he initiated and priya being rude..oh i am waiting to see more of their meet and conversation.

And vikram started his plan to trap mani and bring out mani's wrong doings...good on tht part too.

As always priya-neha friendship bond too happy to see
and poor vikram,iss baar bhi took them wrong..😆

priya going to share her childhood love story with neha, i am waiting to read it.

I loved ur other story Rishta ...waiting for its update too ...😳
Edited by LuvSSever - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Nice part
please continue soon
thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
awesome update...
waiting to read childhood memories...
plz cont soon

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