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1. Rishta- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4675154/rishta-part-21-pg-27

2. Unique marriage- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4587882/raya-ss-unique-marriage

3. Laadki- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4649135/laadki-last-part-16-pg-10

4. Kuch toh hai tere mere- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4576112/new-ss-kuch-toh-hai-tere-mere

5. Pyar liye toh darna kya- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4598245/os-pyar-kiya-toh-darna-kya

6. Falling love with my boss husband- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4570792/ss-falling-love-with-my-boss-husband-part-34-to-last-part-pg-11

7. Unexpected- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4573497/os-unexpected

8. Koi aap sa- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4572793/os-koi-aap-sa

9. College wala love- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4481105/os-college-wala-love

10. Cake shop wali love story- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4478148/new-os-cake-shop-wali-love-story-completed

11. Everything in fair in love n war- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4478207/small-os-on-raya-everything-is-fair-in-love-and-war

12. My best frnd or my love forever- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/4568855/os-my-best-friend-or-my-love-forever

13. Contract Marriage- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/136353682
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well dear u made the index of your stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you daer for the list it means alot to readers...


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Hi dear..
Thanks for the link.. i have read all the stories...all were nice..
Will post the comments soon on it... :)
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First on the Os i have read...😊

Pyar liye toh darna kya :
A sweet cute Os it was..
A chashmish priya.. i am imagining it..new and cute to imagine :)
Cutie one with the RJ story..
Shy introvert priya, being the most loved RJ with diff name, neha being her bestie,vik and ram in friends group and ram loving sankriti voice, raya's banters,then friendship, closeness due to sankriti in pic, then priya falling for him, ram coming to know sankriti's identity,then their cute beautiful confession..all good..loved it...


Unexpected :
Again a short cute Os it is..
And so apt title unexpected...:)
Yes it was unexpected that priya would go on her knees and propose ,surprising Ram and us too..
And ram accepted, no ring so a hug..naughty ram..lol.
yes priya's reasons were right..be it on same profession or not, u need a partner who understands you on all front, in work and passion too..
So their mutual decision is good and raya had to endup one,that much connected they are.. :)


Koi Aap Sa :
Sweet,fun written Os it was..
Ram being a professor and priya ,tv actress..different plot and profession..
So cool priya and responsible Ram..good to read their friendly conversations..
It had fun.
Priya had been so carefree with ram, dialogues are funny between them..teasing ,pulling, having good time in canafa,then one month separation making them realise, bring in love and final sweet confession with a kiss..all good..enjoyed reading it..


College wala love :
Cute college love story..
Priya being studious, Ram rockstar..
Then their friendship, spending time together..ram changing himself in love for priya,seeing that priya falling for him, then jaan being her nephew, priya being jealous and misunderstood nutz , the slap..lol and the final confession of Raya...loved reading this cute one..


Cake Shop Wali Love Story :
A simple,cute and literally sweet story with cake as a medium of love between raya...
Just remembering her school friend's smile,she started sending him cake, and that formed a base for their friendship to blossom again, then they came to know that he/she is their school lost love and finally ended up together with nehvik witnessing it..
Simple sweet love story it is...


everything is fair in love & war :
Very short different Os...
Story on love at first sight..priya fall for him,doesnt want to reveal due to the bet but smarty Ram played his part and made her confess with 7 days..nice one..


My best frnd or my love forever :
Cute Raya story,childhood friends ,their friendship turning into love forever..
Loved the jealous priya..she had esha photo on dart board and playing..lol..
So the close friends loved each other but to realise it, priya needed esha in pic..
Nice lovely one..

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Next is the comments on SS i read.. :)

SS:Teri Meri Love Story
Loved the story...
Ram is so sweet in his ways of manofying priya and showing his love towards her.. he realised later ,did hurt priya with words..but then his doings after that were great..
Priya's love for ram, she getting anger on esha, then after ram confessing his love,her hesitation,then jealousy again took over in payal case, she showing her right and warning Ram...lol..all were good..
Her kiss to ram before esha..hawww...i am imagining..lol..

Then finally their marriage,ram's challenge, priya winning it all were good and cute..

NehVik added to the story well..nice one..


SS:Falling Love With My Boss Husband
Nice story, written nicely,different concept, priya being a intern, Ram the boss, he falling for her, she unknown to the fact that she is marrying him, then gradually she started loving him, but due to juhi,the memory loss,again Raya had to start their relationship from scratch , ram sweetly giving her time,waiting in and finally priya started feeling for him,loving him ,finally giving herself to him and then ended on a happy note with cutie pihu's epilogue..all were good..

And the epilogue by pihu was the icing on the cake.. loved it more..hers with raya was a good ending..

Neh-Vik as always remained a good friends of raya, helped them..neha is neha..loved her...she is a true frnd for priya..

Juhi,ashwin,niharika and jayesh played their evil parts and

Krishnaji,amarji,dadi and nutz,karthik, the lovable ones loved raya and helped them in uniting...

Many intances i liked the scenes or dialogues..the one kartik asking oh u got gussa on telling abt jiji


SS: Unique Marriage
Loved the story dear..
Priya ,an architect and Ram a software engg..
Then their reasons to not marry, due to meenu, their datas reaching the parents and then their meet, decision to marry on conditions,finally their marriage ..
Nice..then the nokjhoks between them , priya jelling with ram's family..krishnaji being a mom to her...
Ram having a good rapport with sudhirji..
Neha being a lovely sister to priya, kind vik jeeju..all good..
Ram going to hyderabad, priya knowing about kirti,then ram showing his anger to mom,and priya for not going thru interview..
Priya being hurt,going to her home, ram understanding his fault,then trying to manofy her, their day out...all good.

Then both of them doing cooking together, started feeling for each other, then priya falling ill...ram looking after her,then famous holi and Raya in nashe confessing each other...

Then the separation,both missing each other ,their office meet,then ram bday,
Finally priya words in heart ,loved it..
Then her confession to him..
Finally ram decided to not to go USA and priya's condition to reach a spot,then dadi involved in it, finally raya being together..loved it...


SS:Laadki
A sweet story with peehu in mission of bringing her parents together who out of ego separated.
Raya and ram with his big ego is one we could relate easily..their separation obviously affected peehu..

Pihu gave tough time to Ram ,she being a duplicate of himself..
Finally ram showed his father feelings to her and then she left to make his mother understand..
Finally priya came to resolve issues,but ram spoiled it but then he came to delhi,wanted to solve all, priya was already convinced but buddhu ram didt understand what she meant by staying in mumbai forever..then finally cute raya reunion..


SS : Contract Marriage
I think this is the first ever SS i read on balh forum long back.. but didnt remember it was written by you..
Raya both being singers,was diff backdrop, then those Internet friend suspense, priya having fear due to her sister's bad past , then slowly raya feeling for each other and finally confession on stage..all were good..
Good story with good flow...nice one..


SS: Kuch Toh Hai Tere Mere.
Out of all the SS,after rishta, i loved this very much dear..
It had all my fav characters,the awesome foursome,raya,vik-neha and it had lovable cutie pie small pihu and kady...
I liked heer too..

Nice story,written well,good flow...
Past and present written neatly,loved the parts..
Raya being friends in college, loving each other,then engaged,but finally broke up due to juhi's evil plan..

Felt sad for priya..the hurt due to ram's loss of trust on her,would be more tht those last words piercing her heart more..so could understand her hurt and pain..

Ram was living with the pain if losing priya due to his fault and he is pouring out his heart to his diary..

Then destiny made them meet thru a marriage ,ram came to attend it and priya wedding planner...
Priya's gussa is correct and all her scenes ,she showing gussa written well.. :)
Then her talk with vik, he trusting her and love her like sister,then she beoken down in tears,hugged him..told all the truth of her life..

Then with pihu,kady and all friends,they made up raya milan plan and succeeded in it too.. priya worried for ram on his health spoiled, peehu's advice to priya,finally priya deciding to tell ram all, then pihu knowing ram as father from priya,finally Rapihu hug,then scenes followed,raya marriage,finally their reunion and ending with pari and myra coming into pic,all perfect and good..

Loved pihu throughout..all scenes of her..
Hers with kady and others too..
The friends gang,neh,vik and heer are good too..
I liked heer's seeking maafi letter to priya..dhamki with peanuts..lol...
Then priya sending sandwich to neha,their hug and talk..all good..
In past raya scenes, priya's nature ,pani puri challenges,loved all..

Present treatment of priya to ram also understandable and finally happy ending, their reunion happened and blessed with pari ,myra at end...

Nice cute SS it was.. :)
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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Next is the comments on SS i read.. :)

SS:Teri Meri Love Story
Loved the story...
Ram is so sweet in his ways of manofying priya and showing his love towards her.. he realised later ,did hurt priya with words..but then his doings after that were great..
Priya's love for ram, she getting anger on esha, then after ram confessing his love,her hesitation,then jealousy again took over in payal case, she showing her right and warning Ram...lol..all were good..
Her kiss to ram before esha..hawww...i am imagining..lol..

Then finally their marriage,ram's challenge, priya winning it all were good and cute..

NehVik added to the story well..nice one..


SS:Falling Love With My Boss Husband
Nice story, written nicely,different concept, priya being a intern, Ram the boss, he falling for her, she unknown to the fact that she is marrying him, then gradually she started loving him, but due to juhi,the memory loss,again Raya had to start their relationship from scratch , ram sweetly giving her time,waiting in and finally priya started feeling for him,loving him ,finally giving herself to him and then ended on a happy note with cutie pihu's epilogue..all were good..

And the epilogue by pihu was the icing on the cake.. loved it more..hers with raya was a good ending..

Neh-Vik as always remained a good friends of raya, helped them..neha is neha..loved her...she is a true frnd for priya..

Juhi,ashwin,niharika and jayesh played their evil parts and

Krishnaji,amarji,dadi and nutz,karthik, the lovable ones loved raya and helped them in uniting...

Many intances i liked the scenes or dialogues..the one kartik asking oh u got gussa on telling abt jiji


SS: Unique Marriage
Loved the story dear..
Priya ,an architect and Ram a software engg..
Then their reasons to not marry, due to meenu, their datas reaching the parents and then their meet, decision to marry on conditions,finally their marriage ..
Nice..then the nokjhoks between them , priya jelling with ram's family..krishnaji being a mom to her...
Ram having a good rapport with sudhirji..
Neha being a lovely sister to priya, kind vik jeeju..all good..
Ram going to hyderabad, priya knowing about kirti,then ram showing his anger to mom,and priya for not going thru interview..
Priya being hurt,going to her home, ram understanding his fault,then trying to manofy her, their day out...all good.

Then both of them doing cooking together, started feeling for each other, then priya falling ill...ram looking after her,then famous holi and Raya in nashe confessing each other...

Then the separation,both missing each other ,their office meet,then ram bday,
Finally priya words in heart ,loved it..
Then her confession to him..
Finally ram decided to not to go USA and priya's condition to reach a spot,then dadi involved in it, finally raya being together..loved it...


SS:Laadki
A sweet story with peehu in mission of bringing her parents together who out of ego separated.
Raya and ram with his big ego is one we could relate easily..their separation obviously affected peehu..

Pihu gave tough time to Ram ,she being a duplicate of himself..
Finally ram showed his father feelings to her and then she left to make his mother understand..
Finally priya came to resolve issues,but ram spoiled it but then he came to delhi,wanted to solve all, priya was already convinced but buddhu ram didt understand what she meant by staying in mumbai forever..then finally cute raya reunion..


SS : Contract Marriage
I think this is the first ever SS i read on balh forum long back.. but didnt remember it was written by you..
Raya both being singers,was diff backdrop, then those Internet friend suspense, priya having fear due to her sister's bad past , then slowly raya feeling for each other and finally confession on stage..all were good..
Good story with good flow...nice one..


SS: Kuch Toh Hai Tere Mere.
Out of all the SS,after rishta, i loved this very much dear..
It had all my fav characters,the awesome foursome,raya,vik-neha and it had lovable cutie pie small pihu and kady...
I liked heer too..

Nice story,written well,good flow...
Past and present written neatly,loved the parts..
Raya being friends in college, loving each other,then engaged,but finally broke up due to juhi's evil plan..

Felt sad for priya..the hurt due to ram's loss of trust on her,would be more tht those last words piercing her heart more..so could understand her hurt and pain..

Ram was living with the pain if losing priya due to his fault and he is pouring out his heart to his diary..

Then destiny made them meet thru a marriage ,ram came to attend it and priya wedding planner...
Priya's gussa is correct and all her scenes ,she showing gussa written well.. :)
Then her talk with vik, he trusting her and love her like sister,then she beoken down in tears,hugged him..told all the truth of her life..

Then with pihu,kady and all friends,they made up raya milan plan and succeeded in it too.. priya worried for ram on his health spoiled, peehu's advice to priya,finally priya deciding to tell ram all, then pihu knowing ram as father from priya,finally Rapihu hug,then scenes followed,raya marriage,finally their reunion and ending with pari and myra coming into pic,all perfect and good..

Loved pihu throughout..all scenes of her..
Hers with kady and others too..
The friends gang,neh,vik and heer are good too..
I liked heer's seeking maafi letter to priya..dhamki with peanuts..lol...
Then priya sending sandwich to neha,their hug and talk..all good..
In past raya scenes, priya's nature ,pani puri challenges,loved all..

Present treatment of priya to ram also understandable and finally happy ending, their reunion happened and blessed with pari ,myra at end...

Nice cute SS it was.. :)



thank you very much for all read ss & os and thanks for comments too

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