Raya SS:The Way You Make Me Feel Last partB two posts on Page32(19/8)

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reshak

@reshak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

wow another story from u...
its beautiful n interesting..
felt bad for Priya..Bt sure she will change ram's thinking abt love... waiting for next...

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SakshiAddict

@SakshiAddict

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shakshithebest
nice story line.your writings are good.eagerly waiting to read many stories from u.

Thanks, will try to write more

Will update this soon

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SakshiAddict

@SakshiAddict

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi
yaar pl don't mind
but I have a request. pl u give us ur story one by one. first complete ur previous story. and then start another one. aisa karne se na aapki writing ka hum aur bhi maja le sakate hai. sorry if I hurt u. we all want to read RaYa stories. aap kitna bhi likhoge him pagalo ki tarah padhenge. but ek ek karke likho.

as far as this story..its a nice concept. Priya bechari phas gayi. ram don't love her. but shayad baad me Priya ka jaadu ram pe chal jayega. chalan hi chahiye . after all they r OUR BELOVED RAYA. thanks for pm. pl continue.
again I m sorry if I have hurt u

Aww u are sweet, I understood in what context u said .

I am new to this writing, I haven't wote anything before this ,

Coming to my first story I have planned many things for that it's going to be long and passion filled but before that I want have lil experience of writing so I wrote this one this will be completed in 4 parts so that I can improve verbally and I can continue with that.

Thanks for your suggestion,I will complete this soon and I will update that too

Both are different stories, thanks for liking this

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SakshiAddict

@SakshiAddict

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sakshiashu
Very nice beginning.
Nice story.
Please continue and pm me.

Thanks will update it soon

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SakshiAddict

@SakshiAddict

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa
another beautiful story dear
indeed a nice concept
The pain and betryal Ram got in past made him lose hus faith in love and the same he did with Priya on first night only he told her about divorce. Hope her love and care able to change his perspectives.

Thanks for your lovely comments he will surely change, will update the next part soon

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SakshiAddict

@SakshiAddict

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Interesting story , it's something like hum aapke dil me rehte hai , but lil diff whr ram's parents are unaware of his divorce decision .

Priya's character seems to be quiet sensible and calm,but somehow she felt this marriage of her is not the one a girl expects it to be.
Let's see how it goes thx.

Yea but it's going to be lil different.

Priya is very sensible and her nature changes Ram lot

Thanks for commenting, will update next part soon