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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mitrajayeeta23

Sooo beautiful...thora bada update pls... How greedy I'm


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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

read the two parts in one go.

Super going on.
riya already fallen for him.But Ram not able to express but his possessiveness growing

and .. where u ended yaar ..
next asap plzzz

thank u for ur pm


Aww thanks for reading
Will update it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Kiruthikaaaru

Awesome eager to read next update


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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: RamPriya_Rocks

Sorry for the late comment I was busy somewhere but finally got time and woaw it was really fabulous, you have showed Priya's emotions really well and always love Ram's character. But what...You stopped there?

where is my belan?? 😆

Please yar continue soon I am dying to read more. please update soon and yeah you are one of the best writer I have come to know about. Thanks for the lovely OS 😳


Aww thanks for making time to read my bakwas lol,I will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rayaland

Beautifully written n hope ram ll soon fall for priya n dono jaldo confess kar de


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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: reshak

beautiful update...
so ram is jealous seeing priya with others..
slowly he is falling love with Priya...
nice going... cntnu soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: contactcharu

Very nice

Pls continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: jodude

Hey wow superb stry
Read both parts...
Oho ram z J...hehe
Really good going... going lil fast too... 😊
Waiting for their confession part


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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Ram is changing Priya simplicity and sweet nature has influenced him to change for good. He has fallen hard for her and soon will confess the love. Thank u for the pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL..

Part 3

Finally priya entered office and was said to go to Ram's cabin,as soon as she entered Ram without noticing her started blasting her,but he felt something is wrong and turned to her
She was about to fall,he immediately rushed and took her in his arms,she was unconscious and was running with high temperature.
He tried to wake her up but she was not responding.
His eyes clouded with tears and he swiftly took her in his arms and rushed to hospital.everyone in office shocked to see Ram carrying priya in his arms.

There in the hospital doctor in casualty recognized her as she came in the morning, so she got late to office.

Ram asked what happened, doctor said him she is having fever since two days ,we have prescribed her medicine in morning and asked her to take rest but she has strained herself, not to worry she will recover soon and gave her few injection and shifted her to special ward.

Here Ram couldn't able to see her in this state, he was holding her hands all along and waiting for her to regain consciousness.
Finally she opened her eyes, she can see him, he gently touched her cheeks and carresed her,his eyes clouded with tears,she got up and saw his state and felt bad, he hugged her and said why didn't you tell me you are not well I'm sorry very sorry.
She told him nothing happened to her she is fine,just lil weakness.

By then doctor came and asked how she is now
She said she is feeling better and said she want to go home
Doctor said OK but to take care and said them to collect blood test report in evening.
Here Ram double checked with doctor whether she can be taken home,she assured him and left prescribing them medicine.
Priya told Ram to take her home as she don't like to be in hospital.
Finally Ram agreed.

She was about to step out of bed,he held her in his arms and carried her.
Priya shocked and asked him to put her on her feet but Ram refused and was adamant
He carried her even in home,KK was shocked to see that and asked him what happened, priya was embarrassed and Ram told her he will tell later and carried her to her room.

Then he himself fed her and made her to sleep,priya was weak and didn't said anything and she slept.
Ram came down and told everything to kk and said priya always take care of others except herself ,she needs rest and all
Kk surprised and was happy to hear that from Ram.

Ram had his food and went to hospital to collect her report, there it came as a viral fever he was relieved a bit.
Doctor gave her phone number to him and asked her to call in any emergency and explained him few danger signs and told him to take care of her.

Ram came to room,she was sleeping ,he changed and sat beside her working in laptop.
Priya got up and saw him near her,she was about to sit,sensing her he helped her.
She said she want to freshenup and about to get up,she was weak
Ram immediately took her in his arms and carried her to washroom and waited outside, she somehow managed to freshenup and came he again took her in his arms and placed her back .

KK came to their room and was with priya for sometime and kk had to go to Amritsar so they left telling Ram to take care.
Later he himself fed her and gave her medicine and due to tiredness she slept again.

But around 1 in the night, he heard her voice, she was moaning and running with high temperature
He tried to wake her up but she couldn't

He was worried and called doctor, she told him to give her sponge bath and said if not recovered to take to hospital.
Nobody was there at home
He didn't know what to do
So he decided to give her bath by himself
He was scared somewhere but he has to do it for sake of her health.
He went to washroom and adjusted water temp

He came to room he saw her and said priya I'm doing this not only for ur health but I'm doing it as your husband and I love you priya,may be its not right without ur consent but I have to do this
And then he took the quilt from her

He removed her nighty, she was in her inners, she was breathtaking,her perfect feminine figure provoked him,for a moment he was looking at her and couldn't control his harmones
He gulped and he thought how can I control myself and then he thought no Ram don't loose ur senses,she is not well and once she is fine she's going to be all yours.He blushed at that thought.

He didn't removed her inners he just took water and sponged her and soothened her temperature, and dressed her and he came and checked her,her temperature was lil down and she was in deep sleep.

He saw her,his breathing was fast,she was driving him mad,he so wanted to touch her and feel her but he suppressed his emotions

Whole night he was awake and taking care of her

Next morning she woke up early and saw him in sleeping in awkward position,she knew he took care of her whole nigt, she didn't disturb him

She was feeling better than yesterday, but she sensed something different and she saw her dress it was changed and felt her body sticky ,she tried to remember but she couldn't find out what's that

She went and freshenup and while taking clothes from cupboard she saw their divorce paper but today dont know why it disturbed her a lot and by that time Ram was awake, he came and made her to eat and gave her medicine.

And he went to freshenup and he came back priya wanted to ask him about that but she hesitated and Ram can sense what priya was thinking so he thought of telling her the truth.

He said her what happened yesterday and told her what he did .For a moment priya was shocked and was staring at him
He asked her sorry and she was still silent Ram asked her to speak something but she was silent and he couldn't take that anymore and told yes made a mistake but he was worried for her.

Finally priya spoke, Mr.Kapoor I didn't felt bad that u saw me in that state because u have every right to see me like that as you are my husband and I believe this relationship.
But for you this relationship going to end in next three months Mr.Kapoor, u won't think me as ur wife nor you love then why the hell u did that she cried
He tried to go near her and said see priya u are having high temp and I asked doctor and she only said that ,otherwise it would have been difficult for you priya.Priya I did for ur sake priya not with any other intension.

Priya shouted at him that's ur problem Mr. Kapoor,u have no feelings on me and it's better u could have allowed me to die Mr.Kapoor rather than allowing me in this state,I can't take this anymore.Priya screamed at him,for you I'm nothing Mr.Kapoor after 3months even u are not going to see my face then why the hell u did that

Ram couldn't tolerate any more especially hearing the word of dying from her,he raised his hand and about to slap her but he stopped and here she was scared a lot to see him like that.
He held her held her tightly, his grip was very tight,and started screaming at her

Never never say that words priya enough is enough, yes I didn't wanted to marry, I wanted to divorce because I had a horrible past,I was betrayed and I thought love is like that and never believed it and said what Esha did.he was crying and she was too.he continued then you came to my life,u changed my life by your presence and made me to believe that true love is different by your actions, i started falling for you and he dragged her to changing room and opened the cupboard and took papers and gave it priya
She opened it and shocked to see that he has cancelled their divorce petition
She was in tears,she didn't know what to do, she was just starting at him.
He continued yes I am in love, I fell in love with you and because of this paper procedure I was busy for last two days, yesterday I was waiting to tell you this but u know what happened.I want live everymoment of my life with u.I want to grow old with you. I want you all for myself
Yesterday I undressed u because I had every rights to do and I did because I love you and care for you

Thn again his anger increasd he held her and said u priya you know everyone's emotions, but u never understood what I am feeling, u never noticed what my eyes shows you,u never tried to understand me,how can you think that I will leave you priya and said u never understood me priya never,if u did u haven't said these words today and he left the room in anger

Edited by SakshiAddict - 9 years ago

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