Rishta. part 21 PG 27 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm.
Wonderful update.
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interesting. pihu mulgi ahr na ram chi? nice part. finally ram agree to take priyas case. gud. thanks for pm. pl continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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just superb dear .. so emotional .. but u penned down so well.
Both RAM and Priya in pain.. but both side diff.
these pain of two will make them fall in love with each other .

though I am reading in fb .. and commenting here 😆😉
So thank u for tagging there 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Priya is in so much of pain!!!!
Please jaldi use is pain se bahar nikalo.
Is Pihu from his first marriage?
Somehow I'm unable to accept Ram is already married with his love and has a baby too.
Thanks for pm and continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3
Ram- wo kiu.
Vik- aandar Jo 3 deviya baithi hai wo chote bacchon se kum nahi hai.
Ram- ok then see you soon tc.
At ram's car.
Ram thinking- aj itne saal baad wo insan mujhe mil raha hai, wo bhi aisi halat me, mai khud usse jeena sikhaunga uss ne mujhe new life Di thi, mai usse dunga.
At vikram's place.
Priya, neha n nuts, saw vikram came with smile face.
The trio signal to eachother.
Nuts- waise priya neha ka patta cut hone wala hai.
Neha got confused.
Priya- haa bhai ki muskurath dekh kar toh aisa lag raha hai ke unhe koi aur pasand aayi hai see na his smile is so special, jab neha ko haan bola tha tab bhi aisi smile nahi thi.
Neha little got possessive now- sach me aisa hai.
Priya one eye blink to nuts- haan mujhe pata hai jab bhai ne tumhe haan kaha tha shaadi ke liye tab he was not that much happy, like now.
Neha believe in priya's pranks.
Nuts- it means vikram bhai ko koi aur pasand aayi hai abhi love at first sight.
Neha- nahi aisa nahi ho sakta he was said me that he was love at first sight with me.
Nuts- sab ladke aisa bolte hai, hai na priya!
Priya- haan nuts is right.
Vikram called with happy mood- girls chalo dinner karte hai.
Priya- aayi bhai.
Priya to neha- best of luck neha, i would like to u would be my bhabhi no one else n she get up from there, nuts also behind her.
Neha in dilemma is it true or not.
Vikram saw they both came n seat there chair, he asked where is neha they both said she still seat there were they enjoy the movie, he go there to asked neha whether she take dinner or not.
Vik- chalo dinner karne.
Neha- you liar! You..
Vik- kya hua, Maine konsa jhoot bola ab.
Neha- kon hai Jo tumhare muskan ke piche chupa hai.
Vik confused- meri muskan toh tum ho.
Neha little shouted- bilkul jhoot.
Vik- arrye sacchi meri kasam.
Neha- phir se jhoot.
Vik- hua kya hai, ye baatao mujhe.
Neha narrated whole convo between three girls.
Vikram started laughing.
Neha- dekha priya aur nuts sach bol rahe the, you had a love at first sight.
Vik stop him n said- ram ne haan bola hai priya ko treat karega wo kuch bola but mai nahi samjha paya but, all over convo is he say yes.
Neha- what.
Vik- haan Jo insan door pe tha Jo new neabiour aaya hai wo ram hai.
Neha surprise- what!
Vik nodded in yes- haan but hum dono usse jaante hai ye baat priya ko nahi pata chalni chahiye, most important doctor too.
Neha- ok but yeh sab hua kaise.
Vik- pata nahi.
Neha- peehu bhi.
Vik- pata nahi.
Neha- mai jaate waqt call karke puch leti hun.
Vik- but...neha cut him middle.
Neha- don't worry.
At dining table, both giggle for neha's future condition, but they both saw she came with happy mood.
Priya asked her very surprisingly- neha sab thik hai na.
Neha- haan kiu kya hua.
Priya- kuch bhi toh nahi, all are take their dinner.
At ram's house, he doing cooking, morning time, he calling.
Ram- bacche utho toh, jaldi its already 9am mujhe thode kam se bahar jaana hai.
'aa rahi hun na, exam khatam ho gaye lekin late tak soone bhi nahi dete kash mai dadi ke paas hoti ye papa bhi naa' and she woke up from her sleep.
At priya's home.
Priya- bhai chalo na jaldi aapko aaj late nahi ho raha hai.
Vik- late ho raha hai lekin aaj itna nahi jitna roj hota hai.
Priya- ok.
Vik- dawai lee priya.
Priya- baad me leti hun na.
Vik- abhi.
Priya- bhai.
Vik- priya plz na bacche.
Priya- aap na aaj kal bahot jaada maa ki tarah behave karne lage ho.
Vik- chal ab bahot hua butter karke, dawai khaa.
Priya- bhai aaj doc ke paas n she stop in middle.
Vik smile n said- nahi jaana hai.
Priya also happy- sacchi me.
Vik- haan.
Priya- aisa kiu, sab thik hai na.
Vik- haan priya tension na le aur jaada soch mat, Jo kuch hua acche ke liye hua aisa samjh aur aage badh, ok.
Priya- bhai sach me kuch problem nahi hui hai na.
Vik- you trust ur bhai na.
Priya- bahot jaada.
Vik- toh don't worry, aur tere liye ek gift aa raha hai abhi tak aa jaana chahiye tha, shayad mere jaane ke baad aayega to tu received karegi na.
Priya- karungi.
Vik- pakka karegi na.
Priya- bhai ek baat bolu.
Vik- bol.
Priya- thoda sa darr lagta hai mujhe jab door bell bajti hai tab, lekin itna jaada bhi nahi darr lagta hai jitna k pehle, haan ye baat alag hai ki mujhe dusre logo se milna aaj bhi.
Vik- don't worry mai hun tere saath sab thik hoga aur rahi baat darr ki toh hum dono uss ke saath milkar football khelenge.
Priya- tennis ball se jaise bachpan me khelte the.
Vik- now don't laughing on me, i know mujhe nahi pata tha football kaisi kehet hai aur tennis.
Priya stared laughing.
Vik- very bad.
Priya- mujhe naa aapki ek baat yaad aayi, aapko pink colour ki hardik ek shade pata hoti thi like all girls, n mujhe pink colour sirf pink hota tha, uss ke shades se mujhe kuch bhi nahi padi hoti thi. Vik- baap re pink se yaad aaya.
Priya- kya yaad aaya.
Vik- arrye wo neha ne tumhare paas Jo book hai na pink wala cover hai usse.
Priya- haan toh.
Vik- uss me kuch rakhna hai tere liye, koi passes hai kahi par toh lekar jaa rahi hai.
Priya- mai nahi jaane wali.
Vik- kya hai uss me?
Continue soon
Edited by Arpipatil - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow ..ram accepted to treat Priya. good going. loved priyas and nuts teasing of neha. thanks for pm. pl continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2
In the between of fun Priya met Ram but still she is unable to forget her painful past but in this the news of Ram treating her made Vik happy.
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part 3
Priya and nuts are nughty mke a fool of Neha and Vik has to put through difficulty but with Ram determination Priya life will be changed and surely he will able to pull out her from her sorrows.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4


Vik- kya hai uss me.

Priya- kuch hospitals ke sessions hai Jo mujhe karne bol rahi hai.

Vik- that's very good na.

Priya- i m not mentally stable.

At ram's home.

Ram- ye mujhe pagal kar degi.

'mai kiu pagal karungi aapko dad, aap hi mujhe itne jaldi utne ke liye bol rahe hai, kuch kam nahi hai mujhe uthkar school toh khatam hua hai aur yaha, iss ghar me koi bhi nahi hai mere saath khelene k liye, bore ho jaaungi mai', she said.

Ram- ooo meri chota pack baada dhamakha, breakfast kar ke tujhe mere saath ek hospital aana hai, 2ghante ki baat hai fir uss ke baad tu jaaha bolegi waha jaate hai.

'zoo jaate hai,' she said.

Ram- you are not a kid peehu.

Pee- papa toh mai 50 saal ki old women hui hun.

Ram murmuring to himself- kiu tu aise swal karta hai, jise tu handle hi nahi kar sakta.

Pee- kuch bole aap.

Ram- nahi meri maa, plz take ur breakfast.

Pee- kya hai BF me.

Ram- sandwich.

Pee- mujhe nahi chahiye.

Ram- peehu mujhe itna hi aata hai BF me.

Peehu making face- dusra kuch aur nahi hai.

Ram nodded in no.

Pee- phn doo mujhe.

Ram- lekin kiu.

Pee- doo na.

Ram give his cell to her, she dial numb, on other side neha.

Pee- maau (masi) where are you.

Neha- at home, ready to go hospital.

Pee- papa ne BF accha nahi baanaya hai, mujhe fluffy omelette chahiye.

Neha- abhi.

Pee- haan bhukh lagi hai.

Ram- peehu aj ke din khaa lo na.

Pee to neha- fluffy omelette.

Neha- ok give me 10mint n she cut the call.

Pee to ram- 10mint more.

Ram to god in mind- kaisi beti Di hai mujh se bhi ziddi ye abhi sirf 5 saal ki hai, aage jaa kar kaise handle karu issey.

Pee- don't worry itni bhi ziddi nahi hun bas khaane pinne ke saare habits aap ke hai na.

Ram- aaahhh kya.

Pee very prankly- wahi Jo aapne dil me bola, n she smile.

Ram- ye dimag padhna aapna kaha se sikha.

Pee- aap se sikha.

Ram- very smart.

Neha called priya.

Priya to vik- neha ka call hai.

Vik check his phn- mera toh chalu hai.

Priya pick up the call- haan bolo.

Neha- tumhe fluffy omelette aata hai banane.

Priya- haan aata hai.

Neha- plz bana doo aur mai jis address par bolti hun waha par plz bhej doo, its hurry.

Priya- lekin kitne.

Neha- 1 lekin 2eggs.

Priya- ok baanti hun.

Neha- address msg karti hun.

Priya- ok.

End the call.

Vik- what.

Priya- fluffy omelette ek address par dena hai n her phn beep, neha's msg.

Priya- arrye ye toh humare yaha ka address hai.

Vik- where.

Priya- samne wala flat.

Vik in mind- ye toh ram ka.

Vik to priya- ok toh tu waha par de degi na.

Priya- but bhai mai toh uss insan ya waha par Jo koi hai usse janti tak nahi toh mai kaise.

Vik- arrye don't worry mai usse jaanta hun, kal hi raat ko mila hun usse, neha ka dost hai.

Priya- wo kal raat ko aaya tha, wo mota insan.

Vik- priya.

Priya- ok sorry.

Vik- mai niklu.

Priya- bhai jaldi aana.

Vik- haan aapna khayal rakh aur jaada soch mat.

Priya- haan, vik go from to his way.

Priya making omelette, n ring the bell ram's home.

Ram wear grey vest with black pant, he open the door.

Ram- hi.

Priya only give him plate n went from there.

Ram- she was really Dr.priya Jo London me thi, i wish wo insan agar mujhe mil jaaye itne saare shock dunga ke khud ki identi bhul jaayega, kya karu kaise baat karna start karu jab tak baat nahi karunga tab tak kuch nahi kar sakta, kuch soch, kuch soch Jo..

Peehu called him- papa bhukh lagi hai, he closed the door n said- haan.

Priya close the door n something reflect or some bad flashed came in her mind.

Past:

men- kaha par gayi thi.

Priya- wo..wo kuch saman laane, men doubt on her and asked.

Men- kon sa saman.

Priya- wo glossary khatam hui thi bas usse laane gayi thi.

Men- glossary! Mujhe phn kar ke bol deti mai lekar aata tum kiu gayi.

Priya- tumhara call nahi lag raha tha.

Men cut her middle- itna jaruri tha.

Priya- haan.

Men- phn dikhao aapna, kaha par hai, priya give him her phn, he check her recent call, n saw vikram's call on phn.

Men- vikram ka call aaya tha.

Priya didn't said any word.

He again asked her same question, priya didn't say any word, he hold her arm, very hard, priya wincing in pain, tears rolled down from her eyes.

Men- kya kaha aapne bhai se bolo.

Priya- kuch nahi.

Men angry n he press his fingers more on priya's arm- sach bolo kya bola.

Priya controlled herself- kuch nahi kaha.

Men pushed her n he throw her phn on floor, priya dis-balance n her hand got injured by stool, flashback end.

Priya open her eyes n take breathing fast, she getting little scared n that men voice echoing in her ear's n mind, her legs stared shivering, same time door bell ring. She turned to door n she imaging that men in front of her, he was full of drinking stage n he came near n force for unwanted relation. She imaging him in her thoughts n reacted in present n her imaging go to dark.

Vikram at door, to wait priya open the door but she didn't came to open door, he again press the door bell but no response, he open the door by duplicate key, he called her but no response from her, he find her in hall, seating at near by sofa.

Vik called her- priya.

Priya didn't response him.

Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully written..priya 's condition is horrible...update soon

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