OS : Paas Aaye Hum Tum Part 10(last) on pg 40 ( on 29 Jan 16) - Page 27

Originally posted by: resha123

Nice preview...
pls cntn sooon...

Thank u :)

Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Interesting precap of wat will happen between RaYa. Thank u for the pm.

Thank u :)

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

oh My God! what an Os rishika!! superb yaar really superb!! the way u described there feelings... each emotion of being hurt...feeling of being in love...the nok jhoks...the naughtiness...wow...and hell of an emotional ride! they were destined to meet..and were planned to meet each other...there friendship and the affection in the earlier parts...was amazing...i can really imagine the great actors portraying this characters! really awesome...Priya is too emotional... she cant even bear a lil lie...hell so tough for ram! poor guy...!! this broken trust made him the emotionless guy all over again...same was with priya she to faced a lot of pain...she cried and craved for him...but her ego was adamant and was making ram as the culprit... his past was worst..and he already faced so many...so did he faced as she left him..he was all set to leave his feelings...but than the faith made him met her and she was soo happy...that her happiness was felt here in my heart to! can surely imagine the scene goimg in front of our eyes...really u nailed it...she kissed him just to make him understand her love and affection for him...awesome... and the precap!! hint of something hawt in this cool weather!! much neede! :-P and again a fight...am sacred with her trust breaking up!! uff plzz do post soon...and hope i did ffiled ur wish with this bigg comment hopefully... next soon... and thnks for pm...

Oh Gosh!!!! I didn't expected such a grt response for my os and my writing skills. Thank u. Really thank u so much. These lines means a lot for me. They are a source of motivation for me to continue with my work. Really these words means a lotttsss to me. I actually tried my level best to portary what characters are and make you all feel connected to it. I tried making it more of realistic rather than those chessy ones. I hope that I have succeed. Haahahahahaaha really something hawt is waiting for u guys in this chilling cold weather. Just wait and watch. Next will be updated soon maybe by Sunday or Monday. Yesss u succeed in giving that of a big one instead I wasn't expecting so much appreciation. Thanks a ton:)

Hello Guys!!!
I know it has been almost a week since I have updated this OS.
I want to first of all say sorry for it and I m promising you guys that it will be updated by Sunday or Monday. There is an event coming up in my school tomorrow. Please guys pray it goes on well.
The update will there by Sunday or Monday. Thank u guys !!!

Best of luck n waiting for update

Ok. All the best for your event.

all the best for ur event.. and u in school!! hmm..so i can call u by ur name :-P...

best of luck for ur event
an waiting for ur update dear
hope we get early update

It's OK dear

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Best of luck n waiting for update

Thank u.
Will be updated tomorrow pakka promise :)