OS : Paas Aaye Hum Tum Part 10(last) on pg 40 ( on 29 Jan 16)

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Dhristi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Amazing end n loved ur story alot now waiting for next story written by u but this time aIbig ff

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MnSakshifan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Superb story...and a lovely ending...
Pls do write more...
Thanks for the pm...

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abhishekpanchal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#283

superb end of an amazing thought!! really...awesome...loved how priyas feelings were peened down...so as rams past...his life changing event...they wer destinedly...planned to be together... sirf planning se kuch nai hota...the feelings shld be frm inside...raya were drenched in there love!! mar jaiya...!! perfect song for their situation ...haee...nice...and good end...hope to see u back soon!...and u should come back...feeling emotional!! :-P :-) ...nicee...next os/ss/ff soon!!!!!!!

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prabina subedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Superrbb end!!
Thank u for d lovely story!!
Waiting 4 another rocking story by u!!
Thank u for pm :-)

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Sakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Superb ending to a fabulous story.
Keep writing more...
Thanks for pm.

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kiruthika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Yar so fabulous written story this is I just can't say becoz so nicely u have described the story but please u again come up with a new story please

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rags06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#287

Hai.. thanks for the update...

very nice romantic ending for a superb OS..

please do write more

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reshak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#288

Beautiful update...
hayyee barish me dance n all kitna romantic h
Finally RaYa became one soul...
superb ending...do ryt more...

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Mitwaa

@Mitwaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#289

fab update yaar love raya romance an story also but bahot jaldi khatam hogyi plzzz continue na u wrote awesome story so dil mange more an more thanks for pm an also 4 awesome story do write more keep posting an rocking