OS: WishList @Abhishek Panchal PART 2 Pg 3 ( 9 oct) NO PMs - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow. superb.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: mayanandan

Lovely update...
Sorry for late reply...how i missed to reply dis...
Pls continue...


thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LovingRaYa

Ram has unique sense of humor and he surprised Priya in a shocking manner but their love will progress slowly yet they hadn't realsize they are in love.


thank u Anchal di😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

wow. superb.
waiting for next
pl continue


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: contactcharu

very nice

pls continue soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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OS Wishlist part 2!

ram headed down as fast as he could..he saw priya sittting with his dadi...he didnt observered her she was looking so pretty in that shinning saree! it was dark blue..man did she wore the same which i saw her up? or i didnt even paid any attention to her attire!! was i that lost in her! Ram just control man first you have to sort out many things bud! he consoled himself as he walked down to his lady who is quiet upset with him!.

goluuu! his dadi called him
ji dadi? he asked feeling something fishy! tune priya puttar se kya kaha? she yelled uska mood esa kyu hai? dadi fired her questions making ram uncomfortble!

dadi mene kuch nahi kiya hai! ram spoke so as priya backed him ha dadi kuch nahi hua hai..wo me thodi thak gae hu na so isliye lag raha hoga unhone kuch nahi kiya hai! she defended him

tu chup kar! dadi yelled priya instead! mujhse chupa mat aur tu is GOLU se to darna bhi mat mujhe bata jarue isine kuch kiya hoga abhi khabar leti hu iski! the ever energetic dadi pulled ram and squeezed his ears! ouch dadi sacchi mene kuch nahi kiya plzzz!! ouwww! he moaned
priya was feeling miserable for his state! but then she smiled naughtily and took advantage of the situation! (bichara GOLU!)
ha dadi inhone kuch kiya to hai! she acted like a abla naari! wo has faced a lot of problems!

kyaa!!! ram was so shocked! priya mene kya kiya yaar! dadi ye jhoot bol rahi hai! but dadi was not at all convinced as she kept on twisting his ears!! golu abhi k abhi kaan pakad k maafi maang meri priya puttar se! dadi ordered him

ji ji! dadi plzz pehele kaan chodoge tab to maafi mangunga! he said in deafeat

as soon as dadi left his ears he went and stood in front of priya (poor golu thought that she was angry on him but here madam didnt left any stone unturned to pull his legs! and now its his turn ) he was surprised looking at the way priya's behaviour change it didnt even went 10 minutes she was back in her teasing mood already! did she forgave him? or she didnt felt anything wrong at what happened just few minutes back? uff this ladies are just so unpredictable! in this thought he remembered one of his friends advices! - ram this womens are so unpredictable as well as complicated so better you dont try to understand them or else you'll get more and more confused!
as he stood in front of priya she gave him a naughty winning smile! ram rolled his tongue inside his cheeks..oh so madam is not angry with me?? he asked her
why should i be angry Mr.kapoor? did you did something wrong? she asked in a naughty tone
goluuu kya keh khusur phusur kar rahe ho ! dadi yelled from back

dekhiye na dadi mujhe dhamki de rahe hai k maafi nahi mangenge! she continued her acting

goluuU!!!!!! dadi yelled at her highest pitch! which in reaction got every member out of there room to check on the situtation...

mumma kya hua aap ese chilla kyu rahe ho? niharika entered the situation

a chuttki tu chup kar me golu se baat kar rahi hu! a golu tu maafi mangta hai ya lagau ek? dadi threatened him

ha dadi maang raha hu! he sulked sorry ! he whispered
kya kaha ?? priya asked
sorry he leveled his tone a little high
are aapki aavaj ko kya hua? itni kaam kaise ho gae?? priya asked innocently??

oye khottya de puttar dadi yelled and thud a big hand kissed rams back! everyone were shocked as dadi beat ram!

aaahhh!! dadi ram yelled! and moaned in pain

priya was shocked as the outcome was not so same as she thought! she was in a big trouble..kya kar diya priya apne hi pair pe kulhadi maar di! ab kya hoga

ram sighed and looked at priya...priya was scared she know that he will start yelling at her he walked slowly and steadily towards her
her heart skipped beats as he approached her !
he stood infront of her and saw a film of liquid at the base of her eyes and a glimpse of fear in her eyes! is she this afraid of me? he asked himself

he bent down on his knee! as he took her hand she was shocked and surprised at a time

PRIYA! he spoke her name ever so gentle! he held her hand so firmly
I am sorry! he appologized she nodded in negative as her eyes went teary she was feeling guitly because of her he has to do this! but his next statement gave her a chill through her body!
am sorry for what ever i did! the way i behaved..every time i was so harsh on u! and u just thought about me! i never gave our marriage a name else then compromise! but you always saw us as something and gave you hundered percent in making this marriage work! not as husband and wife but just friends! you didnt expected much and i never gave you any expectations! i was so bad am a jerk priya! but what to do am used to all this am used to this lonliness and i didnt liked anyone to interfere you tried and faced my harsh words! i never meant them but i said many things you never backed but just supported your dignity! and am so proud of that and am proud that ma! got such a nice life partner for me who is independent and who take a stand for herself and her family! priya whenever i think about our honeymoon i dont but a smile creep my lips! and thats your effect! yes i accept the fact that you made me smile! i dont need much dear just be my friend always plzz! will you forgive me and have a fresh start? can we start fresh Mrs.Priya Ram Kapoor? he said her name with pride! so as she was happy as for the first time he joined his name with hers!

he was waiting for her answer but she was so lost in her thoughts that she herself didnt realised that her husband was waiting for her answer on his knees!

Mrs.kapoor?? he called
ha! she whised
i asked you something?
my answer is no! she said which made his expression change in horrification!
he got up looking at her in disbelief
Mr.kapoor dont u know once a friend is always a friend so i am you friend now and always will be! she declared
*whistles* were heard which dragged raya out from there loveland! (remember they were in hall :P )
raya looked at the direction only to get embarrased and teased the were so embarrased everyone were witnessing there confession! and neha and vikram were here to!
wah wah kya baat hai fatty !! itna romantic haee i never thought aaj aach lag raha hai ki tum vikram se classes lete ho! vikram am proud of you! neha patted her husbands back!

priya was again shocked at the sudden declaration

Mr.kapoor?? she asked

are nahi ye kuch bhi bol rahi hai! ram defended himself
ha priya neha majak kar rahi hai i never thought him anything virkam supported his friend! wese mujhe ab lag raha hai k ab hum sab mardo ko ram se classes lene padenge what say guys? vikram asked everyone where they all roared in affirmation

raya were so embarassed and they dont even realised that were still holding each others hands!

oye chup karo tum dono aur ye batao tum dono yaha kaise ! plan to humhare ghar ka tha na! ram changed the topic

ha yaar mene wahi puchne ko call kiya lekin rishabh ne kaha yaha usse intersting scene chal raha hai to hum fata fat aagae and thanks rishabh warna hum ye romantic scene miss kardete!! hae ram ek repeat telecast to banta hai i didnt record it! neha was as ever so excited

dont worry neha bhabhi i already did!! rishabh yelled from back!!
what are you serious?? neha yelled as she ran towards him to have a look
OMG ram priya you both are looking so cute!
raya just stood there facing all the teasings!

(ab aur bore nahi karunga lets move to next scene!)

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after a lots of masti raya entered there room

ram sat on the arm chair resting his head back...

me change karke aati hu! priya said he just moaned hmmm
as soon as she came back she saw that ram has already changed and was waiting for her on her couch
betho yaha! he said
she did as he said
ab batao! he asked
kya batao? she asked in a confused manner
are tumhare wishlist tumne kaha na u just complete it! he said
okay! she didnt took much footage
meri peheli wish.. mujhe na taare ginne hai! she told her first wish!

(okay sorry but skipping few wishes as i guess they are best at there place! and i cant do justice so adding few wishes of mine hope you all like it!)

MR.kapoor !! aapne mere itne sare wish pure kiye jo mostly possible nahi the! thanks a lot for that! she confessed her feelings as she was genuinly in a delimma.. as what to say and how to!
priya tumhe thanks bolne ki koi jarurat nahi hai mene jo kuch bhi kiya wo tumhare liye nahi tha wo sab mere liye tha! he said as she looked at him with a surprised look
matlab! she asked
ha priya I did it for me! he said as he looked down in a blushy look! lekin tumhari akhri wish?? wo to puri nahi hui na! he said as he felt as if he lost something
bas hogaya Mr.kapoor bohot hogaya ye bachpana i know mere wishes out of the order the lekin aapne wo sabhi pure kiye! she said as he interrupted lekin last wali to baki hai na?
hogaya Mrkapoor mene ye 7 days puri tarah ji liye! ab bas kal reports ajaenge! aur bas... she stopped as she saw his expression changed from relax to tensed
7 din ho bhi gae ! he whised not able to digest the fact!
he looked at priya who jus gae him a light smile which gave him the strength to stand still! he thought ram what are you doing buddy! you are the man ! but what to do i cant imagine my life without her! but why without her am not gonna let anything happen to her! she is mine! and she deserves to be happy!
i looked at her she was just playing with her fingers and was in a deep thought! i know what she might be thinking
i took her hand in mine come with me! he said as she was quite not sure where he is taking her
she didnt protest as she trusts her man completely!
she got up as he led her to the terrace
he made her sit on the bench and said "ek min"
he went in the dark and came back with something that got priyas attention
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Priya' POV
he came back with a guitar!! does he even know how to play it! or just he came to have a photoshot??
she smiled at her own thoughts
haso mat! he yelled! breaking her thought
i know tum kya soch rahi ho but i know how to play it! he confirmed as he sat besides me
i just gazed at him! how cute he looks while he is been teased! but i didnt even tried! that again made me grin
priya am serious.. he said as our eyes met!
he continued " tum hi kehti ho na agar koi besura gaata ho to use ek sur me gaane wale k sath gaana chahiye isse unka awaj balanced ho jata hai! tum yahi soch rahi hogi k me aur guitar kaise! mujhe music ka shawk bohot pehele se tha..par bhagwan ne wo man chahi awaj di hi nahi ! lekin phir bhi mene guitar sikha...socha kisi k sath ek mehfil sajane ka mauka to mil jaega! wo mauka to nahi mila kabhi aur meri ye hobby bhi chut gae jab babuji... he stopped as he gazed down..unknowingly i put my hand on his shoulder
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Ram's POV
she very well know what makes me feel good..as soon as i mentioned about lalaji she know that i will be a bite emotional so she changed the topic quickly

aapne kabhi bataya nahi k aapko guitar bhi aata hai?? she said quite well shockingly
isme shock hone wali konsi baat hai yaar guitar hai kya me guitar nahi baja sakta? i mocked
nahi! she replied quickly making me sulk...she wont leave a chance to pull my leg! but thats what i like about her she wont hesitate to open up and she looks at RAM not The RAM KAPOOR and his wealth

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ab aap mujhe ese hi dekhte rahenge ya kuch bajaenge bhi? she said breaking his chain of thoughts.
ya aapko bajan nahi aata? she again teased him
tum kabhi nahi sudhrogi na? ram threatened in his own way..aacha baja rha hu lekin tumhe mera sath dena hoga...dogi? he asked
humesha k liye ! she replied without hesitation...
and there EYELOCK!!
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he plucked the strings of the guitar as priya grasped the perfect notes as she started her songs..the old ones as old is gold and nothing can replace whats original!
her song list started from lag ja gale! as she started her song she just looked in his eyes..the lyrics were so pure as if it belongs only for them ram being quite good at the chords made variations adding extra spice to the romantic number!
she changed the song to "mere mehboob" (oh this all are my favorites!!!!!)
her list went on and just ended by bade aache lagte hai!! their favorite song
the whole time they didnt left each others side as there eyes were locked with every song..the list went on and on as they were lost in there mehfil!
and dont even realised that it was past 6! the first ray of new morning touched her face making it glow more.. ram was mesmerized by the beauty sitting in his front..
but again the truth conjured its time for her reports! he immediately broke the lock
priya who was startled by his sudden action was confused then it stuck her..she just placed her palm on his cheeks as he looked up and she gave him an assuring smiled
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PRIYA you are fine! he whispered not even able to digest the fact that doctor was telling him! he was just stood there neutral as he was sooo freezed at the moment
his priya was fine she was not a victim of cancer! she is normal and all his!
ram yelled you are fine oh god thanks a lot he yelled at the highest as he hugged her tight and swirled her around..she was happy not for herself but for him as the spark that she saw in his eyes after this news was something that she is getting attracted and she made a note that this spark will be her responsibilty..as she will do her best to sustain it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb. superb. superb. what a brilliant update. loved it totally.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Priya is so naughty Ram has to suffer Dadi scolding but in a unique way he said Surrey to her. They were embrassed as all this witnessed by Vik Neha who was all the time teasing them. But Ram able to fulfill her wish which made her happy and now he is happy to know Priya is not having cancer.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww so cute Part I really loved it too good... awesome way so gooddd awesome Ram is all about to surprise Priya in his own way... lovely ... now moving for next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1 & 2
awww it was the batter then best update what a story & lovely ending I wish u had ended it wwitj fulfilling Priya's last wish of wishlist to give birth to someone ... but never mind I simply loved this Golu... Sherni... & their teasing floks... like NeVi too good awsome comleatly in love with it... hope to see more soon from u...

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