New FF 'Grumpy Golu'; Chap 2(b) updt Pg 16 (30 Apr 2016)

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Awesome part but one thing i want plsss post recap of stories plsss as after long time u update plsss just a request

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Mitwaa

@Mitwaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

awesome update
next time plzzz long update Karna
eagerly waiting for next part
thanks for pm
continue soon

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Part 2 (B)
OMG what an update too good... why Priya is avoiding Ram???? n what is in latter is is AK sanding RaYa away for trip? or what hahhaah just imagination hope to see next soon to know... but really sad it was so short I m demanding to u to b next is big one eve u write it will compalset with it... so hoping for big one next time... do updat next soon ... waiting...

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Priya behaved so strange with Ram. She was too enjoying having quality time with her and their small encounters but suddenly she has changed which is unknown to him too.

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abhishekpanchal

@abhishekpanchal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

OH MY GOD! u did continued... although small part...part atleast u did! :-D...raya <3 and theri quite smoking nok jhoks!... she was all over the moment yday and now a contended lady...but secretly enjoying the moment... hehe...she hit him making him limp! :-P lol...well this is really interesting...after i came to know its an adaptation from some novel i thought to read it but didnt as i thought u are doing such a nice job and raya are not replaceable... :-) plzz do post next soon and plzzz ad me in ur pm list... :-D

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iluvusakshi

@iluvusakshi

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

kitna short update hai. pl next time bada wala update Dena. continue jaldi.

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reshak

@reshak

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

nice update...
long update chayiye its short..
dont take too much tym pls update soon...

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Tinni Kazi

@.tiNNi.

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

nice updt...
thank u soo much fr 4

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DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Thanks for the pm and the update! You have done a good job restating the story somewhat in your own way..It takes a lot of effort and we appreciate your efforts👏