New FF 'Grumpy Golu'; Chap 2(b) updt Pg 16 (30 Apr 2016)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hmmm intesrting cocept completly diffrent from other story I really actually enjoyed the way story goes Priya thinks Ram is rude & arrogant still Ram's part is yet untold so will surly wait till it gets opn up so now moving for next part...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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OMG part 2 was complete hot & temptating... it was so burning in fire od Lust never seen RaYa in such bold & hot avtaar eever... it was all new expriance to see them likee that way... too good awesome moving for next...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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OMG Part 3 another hot Part but why so short but it was worth of reading... good foing keep it up... moving for next to read...

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OMG I never had thought RaYa could be such wild in my wildest dream but u made it thorew cant get enough of this anyhow... wanted more n more to read... yaar plz try to continue it so could get batter things to read further plz plz plz continue... waiting for next...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: LovingRaYa
Happy diwali dear
A diwali treat in form of new chapter.
It was just fab

Ram is having wild fantasies regarding Priya and remembering his earlier encounter with her where both want to dominate each other.

Thanks... dear... as Ram is having one... hope u will like next part as well

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal
wow wow wow!!!!! <3 u just nailed it..just nailed it..was so waiting..and to be honest..it was freaking... f****ing hawttt...super hawt...really am looking forward to it...yaar..raya are so into each other...! but they just deny...it..they have lust..but so loveable desire! really..plzz I beg u next soon plzzz can't wait real amazing next soon plzz

hehe... yeah that was hot... i know 😉 yes Raya are into each other... as much as they deny... but they cant control one when they are close...

next update coming soonn...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rayaland
Very nice part

Thanks dear... hope u will like next part as well

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan
I have read "The Beautiful bas***d" ...and imagined RAYa all the way through. The concept and the sensuality in that story is so apt for the kind of chemistry they shared so love reading it again with Ram and Priya as actual main leads. My two cents give the story a twist by writing a little bit from your own imagination...trust me you will have fun doing that 😉

i know.. dear... tht was my intent was to use the initial hott😉 part from their... as I am too bad in that aspect... the story will take a turn now... hope u will like it

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Posted: 9 years ago

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