New FF 'Grumpy Golu'; Chap 2(b) updt Pg 16 (30 Apr 2016) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes continue soon n i love ur tanhayee ss
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Posted: 9 years ago
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of course. we r very much interested. pl continue. jaldi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh freak..this was so hawt!! wwhy u stopped? u can do continue this to...well ram and priya have lust for each othr..but wil love to rea how thethey fell for eeach other..is this remains only for lust oor something else?...plzz do continue this!! plzz pretty plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey frnds,
Extremely sorry for such as long delay... but here is another update...

hope you all will like it...

please do post your comments here...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wish you all a very Happy Diwali and prosperous New Year

Here goes another update...

Chapter 2 (a) - Beautiful but...

Holy shit. I am so f**king screwed. I'd been staring at my ceiling since I woke up thirty minutes ago.

Hard. Again. And this time was even worse than the 296 other times I had woken up this way. This
time, I knew what I was missing.

Nine months. Nine f**king months of morning wood, and endless fantasies about someone I didn't even want. Well that wasn't completely true. I wanted her.

I wanted her more than any women I'd ever seen. The big problem was I hated her. Well maybe not...

no, I hated her. She was one of the biggest b****** I've ever met but not to forgot most beautiful as well and here we go another smile forming on my face... damn

And she hated me too. I mean, she really hated me. In all my 28 years, I had never met someone who pushed my buttons like my assistant. Priya. Well, Ms. Sharma.

Continue reading this part at

I can't access my earlier blog, I dont know Y😭... but if anyone wants to read earlier 3 updates (chap 1 - a, b,c)... they can read them at

Do post your comments and hit 'Like'...
Edited by fan_forever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Happy diwali dear
A diwali treat in form of new chapter.
It was just fab

Ram is having wild fantasies regarding Priya and remembering his earlier encounter with her where both want to dominate each other.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow wow wow!!!!! <3 u just nailed it..just nailed it..was so waiting..and to be honest..it was freaking... f****ing hawttt...super hawt...really am looking forward to it...yaar..raya are so into each other...! but they just deny...it..they have lust..but so loveable desire! really..plzz I beg u next soon plzzz can't wait real amazing next soon plzz
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I have read "The Beautiful bas***d" ...and imagined RAYa all the way through. The concept and the sensuality in that story is so apt for the kind of chemistry they shared so love reading it again with Ram and Priya as actual main leads. My two cents give the story a twist by writing a little bit from your own imagination...trust me you will have fun doing that 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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well Intro seems quite simple & cute lets see wheree the story goes on... will comment brifly aftr reading first part ...

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