RaYa FF : Takdeer UPDATE ON PAGE -147,04/9/15 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Kitna achha preview diya h
Ab to update ka intzar h...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Nice preview. Feel bad for priya don't make her more cry yaar. I want to kill ashwin .continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Priya k liye ek taraf kuwa, ek taraf aag hai.
dononk dono sirf chahte usse physically, how bad is Priya's condition, feeling sad 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting preview... priya is in worst condition
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Interesting preview :). . And that bloody ashwin arggg. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting preview,...
Yha bhi ashwin aa gya😡
Kabhi bhi priya ka peecha nhi chodega😆
kya raya ki shadi😲
Continue soon,,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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a www what an Preview di awesome I m just waiting for story to move ahead Aswin is such loser but Ram looks evil here let's wait & watch for more update and we will get more clear picture so waiting for the update do post soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART- 3


Authour : Anonymous 😛


NOTE ": Hi dear readers , in this story priya will suffer alot , just be patience how story unfolds , i do knw you ppl cannot see priya suffering alot but all stories wont come under same genre loving and doving .. so please wait for story unfolds ..
thank you


Priya is crying bitterly holding her father's pick near her heart.

Priya:- aap kahan chale gaye papa priya ko chodkar...mein bahut akeli ho gayi hoon papa. I miss you papa. Her eyes become very heavy because of continuous crying.

Next day Priya gets ready for the college

Shipra:- Priya chup-chap college se seedhe ghar wapas aa jaana...samaj gayi tu.

Priya nodded and left for college...

After she left...

Shiney:- Shipra mein tujse abb bhi keh raha roon iss ladki ko itni chutt matt de..

Shipra:- Aur mein kar bhi kya sakti hoon...iska baap toh marr gaya lekin jeete jee isse hamare sar rakkar chala gaya...Agar Priya ki shaadi ho jaati hai toh Priya apni iccha se saari property kisi ke naam transfer kar sakti hai..aur agar Priya ki shaadi nahi hoti hai toh Priya property transfer nahi kar sakti. Toh aap hi kahiye mein kya karu.

Shiney:- Yeh sab uss Sudhir ka kiya dhara hai

Shipra:- Abb hame koi eisa insaan ko dhundna hoga jo Priya se shaadi bhi kar le aur uske baad Priya apni saari property hame bhi de de...

Shiney:- Lekin eisa milega kaun...aur shaadi ke baad usne Priya ko mana kar diya toh...Shipraa...paisa bahut badi cheeze hoti hai samza kar...aur teri yeh beti hamari nahi uski baat sunegi...

Shipra:- Toh hum kya kare

Shiney:- Kuch nahi isse hum hum eise hi dara dhamkakar rakenge...aur mein kahu toh thodi aur sakti se pesh aayenge...

Here,

Priya reached college. All the way Priya is worried and thinking about and looks here and there. Seeing her worried face her friends ask "kya baat hai priya...kisi ko dhund rahi hai kya

Other friend:- lagta hai lift wale ladke ko dhund rahi hai...kal bhi toh aaya tha na Priya se milne...bol na Priya kahi tuje usse pyar toh nahi ho gaya

Priya:- tum sab chup karoge...and she remembers how he kiss her.

Friends:- arre uska naam kya hai Priya...bol na

Priya:- Mr. Ram kapoor...ok...abb ho gaya toh chale class mein.

Ram is nowhere...Priya becomes relaxed.

Five month passed

lekin uske baad Ram aur Priya kabhi nahi mile. Priya also forget the incident.

College annual day celebration ...Priya is the presenter of the function.

All the big people were invited from the various fields as a guest but Ram's name is not there in the guest list. Function started and it was going very smoothly when Ram entered into the function. He was respectfully welcomed and seated him in the front row.

Principal:- Muje laga aap aayenge nahi

Ram:- aapne itne pyar se invite kiya toh aata kaise nahi...Im sorry flight late thi issliye aane mein late ho gaya.

Principal:- Mein abhi aapka announcement karta hoon

Ram:- Nahi rehne dijiye...mein kisiko surprise dena chahta hoon

Principal:- Kise????

Ram:- Kuch nahi...

Priya came on the stage announcing the next performance. She looks in front when her eyes met with Ram. Ram also evilly looks at her... Priya becomes shaken and forgets to announce the next performance.

P's friend slowly:- Priya kya kar rahi hai...next performance announce kar...she shake Priya little when she came back in her sense. She stammers and announces the next performance and came back from stage.

Priya murmuring:- Ram yahan...itne din nahi dhika toh laga tha ki musibat chali gayi

P'friends:- kya ho gaya hai konsi musibat aur tuje ho kya gaya tha stage mein

Priya:- Please mera ek kaam karegi...Muje lagta hai mein continue nahi kar paaungi...

P's friend:- lekin tuje hua hai...tu itna dari hui kyun lag rahi hai...

Priya:- Please abhi mujse kuch matt puch...please...saying this she handover the paper to her friend and left. Her friend looks puzzled at the retreating figure of Priya.

Seeing another girl on the stage Ram fumes in anger.

Function ended.

Dinner was arranged. Ram is looking for Priya everywhere. He becomes little impatient. After some time he saw Priya is coming with one boy. He encircles her with his arm. Ram boiled in anger and fisted his hand tightly. Priya knows Ram is watching her but she avoids his gaze and went to other side. Ram eyes fixed on Priya and watching her every movements. He wanted to go near her and hit that boy on his face but he controls his anger.

Priya is taking her food when that boy came and took one bite from her plate. Ram is watching all this...he only knows how he is controlling himself.

Boy:- chalo Priya lets have a dance

Priya:- Pagal ho gaye ho Ashwin...yahan sabhi staff hai

Ashwin:- so what Priya...hame dekhkar baaki bhi aa jaayenge

Priya:- No Ashwin...mein nahi aane wali...sorry

At last Ram got a chance..he excuses himself and went near Priya and said "may I have pleasure to dance with you beautiful lady"

Priya becomes shocked and scared too. She cannot say NO to him as all are watching them. Ashwin becomes angry. Before she said anything Ram takes her hand in him and leads her to the stage...all eyes are on Raya. He kept his one hand on her waist. As she is wearing sari his hand touches her bare waist. Priya is electrified with the touch and made her very uncomfortable.

He slowly gripped her on her waist and squeezed her lightly. She tries to control herself and closed her eyes. Priya looks down and gently moves with the tune...slowly others also joined with them...Ram slowly pulled her towards him and she falls on his chest. His then moves his hand all her back. He came close to her and whisper in her ears "Aaj ke baad agar meine uss ladke ko tumhare paas bhi dekha toh mujse bura aur koi nahi hoga". She said nothing and Ram left her.

Ashwin watch them and gritted his teeth in anger. When Priya came back Ashwin held her hand and drag her outside...Ashwin shouted..."Priya uski himmat kaise hui tumhe chune ki aur tumne bhi usse mana nahi kiya. How dare he touch you"

Priya:- Ashwin...kya tum muje ghar chod sakte ho please...

Ashwin:- mein uss insaan ko maar daalunga...uski himmat kaisi hui tumhe chune ki

Priya:- Please...Ashwin...I beg of you...yahan se chalo Ashwin please.

Priya sits in car. She is very frustrated and closed her eyes.

Ashwin:- Priya...ek baat tum achhe se sunn lo...u r mine...tum sirf meri ho priya.

Priya open her eyes and looks at him shockingly...

Priya:- Ashwin tum...

Ashwin:- Sach keh raha hoon priya...tum agar meri nahi ho sakti toh aur kisi ka bhi hone nahi dunga

Priya:- Ashwin stop it...mujse bhi toh puch lo ki mein kya chahti hoon

Ashwin:- matlab yeh ki tum uss Ram se shaadi karna chahti ho

Priya:- meine eise kab kaha...sab kuch tum log hi decide karoge toh muje bata hi kyun rahe ho.

Ashwin:- Sorry Priya...pata nahi tumhe aur Ram ko ek saat dekh liya toh muje kya ho gaya tha...Priya said nothing. He drops Priya home.

Priya:- Thanks Ashwin...Ashwin nodded. Priya turns to go when again he called her.

Ashwin:- Priyaaa...mein tumhara jawab ka intezaar karunga...Priya said nothing. She smiles and walks.

On the other side Ram fumes in anger.

Ram:- yeh tumne achha nahi kiya Priya...meine tumhe mana kiya tha uss ladke se milne ke liye ...now u will pay for this.

Next day in college...

Priya fear that she will meet Ram.

Ashwin came and asked "Priya kya socha hai tumne"

Priya:- kiss baare mein

Ashwin:- mujse shaadi ke baare mein

Priya took a deep breath and looks in his eyes and said "Ashwinnn... "Im sorry but I don't love you. U r my good friend...aur meine hamesha tumhe ek dosth ki nazariye se hi dekha hai"

Ashwin becomes mad and said "U don't love me matlab ...Dekho Priya mere saat mazak matt karo ... ...he controls himself and continued Priya I love you... ...u r mine...tum sirf meri ho... is that clear...agar tumne muje dhoka dene ki koshish ki toh sach keh raha hoon mujse bura aur koi nahi hoga Priya. Aur uss Ram ko toh mein dekh lunga.

Priya(helplessly):- meri baat samajne ki koshish karo Ashwin...agar mein tumse pyar bhi karti toh bhi mein tumse shaadi nahi kar sakti...mere parents muje yahan padne ke liye bhej rahe hai bahut hai...woh meri shaadi na tumse karayenge aur na uss Ram se...in fact meri shaadi woh kisi se bhi nahi karayenge...Aur ek baat kahu...ek tarike se achha hi hai kyunki pyar ke naam par har ladko ko sirf ek hi cheeze chahiye hoti hai...aaj dosti kar li aur kal apne bedroom mein bula liya...Muje shaadi nahi karni Ashwin...na tumse aur na Ram se...she left with a tear in her eyes.

Ashwin becomes mad...his friend came and asked "kya ho gaya tuje...itna gussa kyun ho raha hai"

Ashwin:- teen saal se iske peeche pada hoon aur aaj kehti hai ki woh mujse pyar nahi karti aur shaadi nahi karegi

A's friend:- Ashwin..tu uske bhai ko janta nahi hai...Priya se chotta hai lekin ek no. ka gunda hai...agar usse pata chalega ki tu priya ke peeche pada hai toh woh tuje zinda nahi chodega.

Ashwin:- Muje bhi usse shaadi nahi karni...But I want her...bass ek baar ke liye

A's friend:- toh kal kya kar raha tha... ...kal tere saat woh akeli thi... itna achha mauka tha aur tune...

Ashwin:- nahi yaar...kal ki situation hi alag thi...Priya uss Ram ke wajah se disturb thi eise mein woh manti nahi

A'sfriend:- aur maanegi bhi nahi...tuje mauke ka faida uthana bhi nahi aata Ashwin...aur aaj toh woh tere mooh par bolkar chali gayi ki woh tujse pyar nahi karti.

Ashwin fisted his hand in anger.

Scene fade...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
wondetful update neel di. ye ashwin kitna kamina hai. priya se shadi nahi karna chahta to isse priya kisliye chahiye? ek no.ka halkat.
ram is jealous seeing ashwin and priya getting close. but i hope wo priya ko hurt na kare.
pl continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
nice update...
ashwin is kamina kahi ka,,😡 i just hate him...
ram is jealous of ashwin... it may leads to a big problm to priya...😭😭

continue soon

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