RaYa FF : Takdeer UPDATE ON PAGE -147,04/9/15 - Page 62

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey di how r u
after long time I am reading ur ff
its too good mnti hu story thodi thodi high level hai but I can go with
keep writing diii
apke dusre ff bhi complete karna time mile toh
and hows ur health
bye
keep up the good work
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Posted: 10 years ago
Muze bhi laga tha ki ram priya ko dekh ke usse nazare churayega usese sharmina hoga use pastawa hoga or wo puri trah se tutega
TB jake priya usse shayd dekhegi


BT leats see what will come next part. ...
Please update till waiting yrrr
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bunny_honey




writer dont hav any prob with your opinion . Its just that she is trying to put all eliments in it .
your all answers will clarify once the story progress . you may feel Ram character cheap but story needs it to continue furthur and their upcoming future ..


just wait and read ... when the realisation of Ram part will come .. hope every body agrees with me
until than have to wait ,

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: patrickdones88

hey di how r u
after long time I am reading ur ff
its too good mnti hu story thodi thodi high level hai but I can go with
keep writing diii
apke dusre ff bhi complete karna time mile toh
and hows ur health
bye
keep up the good work



Hey thank you
im fine , h r u

haha high level hai šŸ˜‰ but you will love it when the tsory coming to the end

Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

NOTE:Hey dear readers ,I know all are not liking the Ram's character .But we wanted to show one of the social eliment and how its enrouting so please co-operate with us and for that you have to just wait and read the story ..
what all you ppl expecting will come in futureupdates . so just wait for the correct time
until than your suggestions welcome





PART-20


In lawn,

Kush is playing alone when he hit the ball and it fell in front of Pihu. Pihu picked up the ball but then Kush came and snatches the ball from her.

Ram came near them and bends on his knees and said to Kush ...Kush very bad manners...dekho woh tumhare saat khelne aayi hai aur tum eise kar rahe ho...say sorry. He then turns towards Pihu and said "Pihu he is Kush and Kush she is Pihu. Abb aap dono friendship kar lo.

Kush:- Im sorry Pihu...friends and he forward his hand for a handshake.

Pihu first looks at Rajat and he nodded lightly. Pihu also gave her hand. Kush then gave his ball and said "come Pihu we will play" and he held her hand and took her away for playing.

Ram stoop up and smiled at Rajat and said "My son Kush". Actually Im getting late...please excuse me...saying this Ram left.

Rajat thinks "KUSH Ram ka beta. Iska matlab Ram ne shaadi kar li aur usse ek beta bhi hai. Amar uncle ne toh kuch nahi bataya aur kya Priya janti hai Ram ke baare mein".

After meeting Priya came back to her cabin for some paper work when Rajat enter with Pihu. Pihu ran and hugs her mumma..Priya also becomes so happy and took her in an embrace.

After breaking the hug "Mumma pata hai aaj yahan muje ek naya dosth mila aur hum dono ne bahut khela bhi".

Priya:- Achha toh kon hai who dosth. Muje bhi batao

Pihu:- Uska naam Kush hai.

Priya:- KUSH!!!...she remembers the small little boy playing in the lawn...achha woh boy...good.

Rajat:- Tum Kush ko janti ho

Priya:- Haan aaj mili thi...woh lawn mein khel raha tha usse baate bhi hui.

Pihu:- Pata hai mumma usne muje apne ghar par bhi invite kiya.

Priya:- Woh sab toh teek hai Pihu lekin yeh batao tumne aaj uncle ko jyada tang toh nahi kiya na.

Pihu(excitedly):- Nahi...pata hai Mumma aaj uncle ne na muje kisi se milane lekar gaye the

Priya(confusedly):- Achha kon hai

Pihu:- Mumma wahi jo aaj subah aaye the humse milne. Aur pata hai mumma unka ghar bahut bada hai. Wahan ek aur dadi bhi hai.

Priya stops her work and looks shockingly at Rajat.

Priya:- Sir..Aap pihu ko lekar Kapoor Mansion gaye the???. She becomes worried and with a stammering voice she asked "Aapne muje bataya kyun nahi ki aap Pihu ko lekar wahan jaane wale ho???. Agar pata hota toh aap KM jaane wale ho toh mein Pihu ko aapke saat bhejti hi nahi. Issliye aapne jaanbhujkar Pihu ko apne saat rakka taaki muje office bhejkar aap Pihu ko KM le jaa sake. Priya becomes hyper.

Rajat:- Relax Priya...relax...wahan mansion mein sirf Pihu ko dadi se milane lekar gaya tha...Please u relax.

Priya:- No I can't sir. Kya zaroorat thi Pihu ko wahan lekar jaane ki. Aapko ek baar mujse puchna toh chahiye tha.

Rajat:- Priya y u r overreacting. Mein janta tha ki Ram KI mein hai issliye mein Pihu ko saat lekar gaya tha aur sahi maano wahan kisi ne bhi Ram ke baare mein baat nahi ki.

Priya:- Jo bhi ho Sir aapne yeh achha nahi kiya. Aapko Pihu ko wahan lekar nahi jaana cahiye tha. She had tears in her eyes.

Pihu:- Aap ro kyun rahi ho mumma. Pihu abb kabhi mumma ko chodkar kahi nahi jaayegi.

Priya started crying and hugs her tightly. Rajat felt bad and he came out from the cabin.

After some time Priya wipes her tears and asked "aapse dadi aur badi dadi ne kya kaha"

Pihu:- Sabne muje bahut pyar kiya aur pata hai sabne muje bahut saare gifts bhi diye...dresses, chocolates, toys aur bahut saare...lekin Pihu ko kuch nahi chahiye.

Priya:- kyun???

Pihu:- aapko achha nahi laga na ki Pihu wahan gayi.

Priya:- Nahi baby mumma bass thoda pareshaan ho gayi thi...aapko jitne bhi gifts mile hai na woh saare gifts aapke hai aap le sakti ho...ok.

Pihu(happily):- sachhi mumma

Priya nodded her head and smiles and said Sachhi.

Priya:- Achha Pihu aap yahan baitho mein Rajat uncle se milkar abhi aayi...ok

Pihu:- ok mumma

Priya:- Pihu room ke bahar kahi nahi jana baby

Priya came out from cabin and looks for Rajat but he is nowhere. She checked him everywhere in the conference hall, other cabin, and lawn everywhere but there is no glimpse of Rajat. She also tries his number but he is not picking up his phone.

Priya becomes irritated and said "Sir please picks up the phone...pata nahi Jyothi kaise aapko sambhalti hogi". She asked few employees about Rajat but nobody know anything about him.

Priya:- Sir kahi guest house toh nahi chale gaye. She is searching him in the upstairs when she saw him walking in the corridor. She hurriedly goes near him

Rajat:- Priya tum yahan

Priya:- Pehle aap batayiye aap yahan kya kar rahe hai. Pata hai mein aapko pure office mein dhund rahi thi

Rajat:- Priya mein yahan ka canteen dekhne aaya tha lekin tum itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi ho.

Priya:- Ghumne nikle the toh phone toh attend kar sakte na...aap dekiye kitne call kiye hai meine

Rajat checks the mobile and said "sorry..Priya..mera dhyan hi nahi gaya. Shayad yahan ki awaz ki wajah se sunayi nahi diya hoga"

Priya:- Sorry sir muje aapse iss tarah se baat nahi karni chahiye thi

Rajat:- Hey common tumne kuch nahi kiya Priya galti meri hi thi muje tumse ek baar puch lena chahiye tha.

Priya:- Sir mein janti hoon aap jo kuch bhi karenge uske peeche meri kushi hi hogi. Bass mein thoda darr gayi thi. Muje kushi hai ki aapne pihu ko dadi se milane lekar gaye...mein rehti toh nahi karti...thank you Sir...thank you so much.

Rajat smiles. Priya side hugged Rajat.

Rajat:- Common Priya abb yeh thanks sab chodo abb yahan tak aa gayi ho toh ek coffee peekar jaate hai.

Priya:- Nahi Sir Pihu cabin mein akeli hai.

Rajat:- OK...

Ram is watching them from the distance. He could not hear the conversation due to the distance but he saw Priya hugged Rajat. He then saw Rajat kept his hand over her shoulder. He felt jealous seeing them together. Somewhere in heart it hurt him. He cannot see anybody can touch her. Moreover today she is looking very beautiful in that yellow color . He could not digest the fact that Priya is comfortable with Rajat.

Rajat:- Abb chale

Priya nodded and both left.

Next two hour everybody is fully engrossed in the work. Where Priya and Amarnath are talking on some matter Ram is concentrating in Priya only. He cannot see Rajat and Priya sitting together. Amarnath notice the changes in the Ram's expression. He knew how Ram reacted without understanding the situation. Amarnath wanted to call off this meeting as soon as possible.

Finally the deal was signed and everybody becomes happy.

Amarnath:- Congratulations everybody from now we work with SS enterprises for the next six-seven months. Amarnath formally shakes hands with Priya and fatherly hugs her. Ram and Rajat also shake hands. Rajat side hugged Priya and said "congratulation". Priya smiles. Then Ram also forward his hand for handshake. Priya looks at him but she has no option. Everybody is staring at them. She forwards her hand; Ram held her hand. First time he feels something for Priya. He felt as if current passes through his body.

Ram:- Congratulation. Priya slowly nodded and removed her hand from him.

Deal was signed and Amarnath Kapoor is so happy and thus he wanted to throw a small party on this. Party was fixed after two days on Sunday and from Monday they will start working on this project. Already it's too late and Pihu is getting bored; Priya decided to take leave and Both Priya and Rajat left KI.

Kapoor Industries staffs were busy in working for the project. They are preparing some documents so that it gets sanctioned from the municipal for the work and for that they need Priya signature in some documents.

Manager:- Sir, documents are ready but we need Priya ma'am signature in some places.

Amarnath:- Ohhk lekin abhi toh ma'am office mein nahi hai and tomorrow is Friday. Then weekend off. Phir hame Monday tak wait karna hoga kyunki ma'am kal nahi aane wali hai and we cannot delay this work at any cost. Hame aaj hi kaisi bhi karke ma'am ke signature lene hone.

Ram(angrily) to the manger:- Toh abb tak kya kar rahe the. First day se keh raha hoon get ready with ur documents. Tum jante bhi ho yeh deal hamare liye kitna important hai.

Manager:- Sorry sir...and looks down.

Amarnath:- Ek kaam karo tum abhi ke abhi guest house jao aur Priya maam se signature le lo.

Manager:- yes sir...but then Ram stops him

Ram:- Ek minute nahi tum rehne do. Mein khud hi personally unke paas jaakar sign kara leta hoon. Amarnath looks at him surprisingly but Ram without looking at him took the document and left.

Ram in car and thinking about Priya..."yeh kya ho raha hai mein kyun Priya ke baare mein itna soch raha hoon. She is my past aur muje koi farak nahi padna chahiye ki woh kiske saat hai, kya kar rahi hai...lekin mein eisa kyun nahi soch paa raha hoon. Jabse pata chala hai ki Pihu Rajat ke beti nahi hai muje kyun itni bechaini ho rahi hai yeh pata lagane ki Pihu kiski beti hai. Priya kabhi bhi mere ansh ko iss zindagi mein nahi laayegi phir bhi mein kyun umeed kar raha hoon ki Pihu meri beti hai. Muje gussa bhi kyun aa raha hai jab bhi mein Priya aur Rajat ko ek saat dekhta hoon. Jo kuch meine kiya uske baad Priya kabhi bhi mere saat rehna nahi chahegi lekin fir bhi mein kyun chahta hoon ki Priya ko mere saat hona chahiye. Yeh muje kya ho raha hai. I want my Priya back. Jo pyar jo izzat meine Priya ko kabhi nahi diya woh sab mein Priya ko dena chahta hoon. Lekin mein janta hoon Priya ko meri zaroorat nahi hai aur muje yeh sab sochna nahi chahiye. Priya meri kabhi nahi ho sakti aur muje apne aap ko inn sab se bahar nikalna hoga. Priya yahan sirf apne kaam se aayi hai aur muje bhi Isse jyada kuch nahi sochna chahiye.

He sighs and took out his phone. First he decided to call Priya and inform her about his coming to her house but then he changes his decision and called Rajat. Rajat attended the call.

Rajat:- Hello

Ram:- Actually Rajat kuch documents mein Priya ke signature chahiye the jo bahut important hai aur muje pata chala hai ki Priya kal Mumbai mein nahi hogi aur hum Monday tak wait nahi kar sakte toh issliye mein abhi guest house hi aa raha hoon. Signature ke liye. Koi problem toh nahi hai na

Rajat:- No problem. Hum pahuchne hi wale hai.

Ram:- Ohh toh aap log abhi tak guest house nahi pahuche kya. Mera matlab hai ki aap log toh kaafi pehle nikal chuke the na

Rajat:- Haan hum thoda shopping karne gaye the toh der ho gayi.

Ram:- Ohh ok then...see u in guest house. Ram cut the call.

Priya:- Kiska call tha

Rajat:- Woh office se call tha...yahi jaanne ke liye ki hum guest house pahuche ki nahi.

Priya and Rajat reached guest house.

Priya:- Godd...Im so tired. Ek achha se ek bath lekar thoda aaram karti hoon. Dinner par milte hai.

Rajat:- No Priya u carry on. Muje thoda kaam hai company ka aur ek delegates se meeting bhi hai so pata nahi kitna waqt lagega.

Priya:- Im sorry sir...meri wajah se aapko itni takleef ho rahi hai.

Rajat:- Common aaj ke baad no sorry...Ok...Itna toh mein kar hi sakta hoon. Ok see you bye.

Rajat left and Priya enter into her house.

Priya:- Pihu chalo mumma pehle aapko bath kara deti hai uske baad mumma ko bhi lena hai.

Pihu:- mumma uske baad mein khelne jaau

Priya:- Haan

Priya gave her bath and dress her up.

Priya:- Pihu aap pehle apna food finish karo...uske baad khelne jana.

Pihu:- Ok mumma

Priya kept her dress on the bed. Took the towel and went inside for taking bath.

Priya:- Pihu aap bahar jaayenge toh darwaza bandh kar dena

Pihu:- Yes mumma.

Door is having automatic door lock system. Once it is locked without keys it cannot be open from outside the person inside the room can only open the door.

Priya put the towel on the hanger; open the tap of the bath tub when Pihu said "mumma mera finish ho gaya mein khelne jaa rahi hoon". Priya heard the sound of door locked. Actually Pihu closed the door but it was not locked. Priya waited to get bath tub filled with water. In the meantime she applied oil in her hair.

Here Ram reached the guest house. He saw pihu is playing outside. He was not sure whether Priya and Rajat staying in the same house or different house. He entered into the house. He knocked the main door first but there was no response. He knocks the door one more time but again when he gets no response he came inside and settled himself in the couch. He looks everywhere but there is no glimpse of anybody.

Here Rajat saw Ram and he called Pihu to his house. He wants Priya tackle Ram alone but he dont know the fact Priya is in the washroom.

After waited for some more time when there was no response from Priya; Ram calld Priya and gets up from his place and look for Priya inside. First he checked her in the kitchen but she was not in the kitchen then he saw lights are on in one room. When he reached near the room he saw door is not locked but simply closed. He becomes confused whether to go inside or not. At last he gave up the idea of going back and slowly opens the door and peep inside but the room was empty.

Ram enters into the room and murmurs Priya yahan bhi nahi hai!!!! He turned to go when he heard the sound of water flow from the bathroom. He saw Priya's cloth on the bed. He knows Priya is inside the washroom. First he thought of going back and waited for Priya but then he gave up the idea and slowly goes near the washroom. He noticed door was simply closed. He very well knew what he is doing is wrong but his inner soul is not under his control. He wanted to see her. He slowly opens the door and what he saw it electrified his body.

He saw Priya unpin her pallu and removes the pleats from her waist and takes off the sari from her. Seeing her silky smooth waist he felt Goosebumps all over his body. Priya then open the hook of her blouse. Ram moves back and closed his eyes. He tries to control his breathe but his hormones gave up. He wanted to see her fully. He opens his eyes and again peeks inside. Priya take off her blouse. His eyes are fixed on her perfectly shaped curves. It's as soft as feather and it looks perfectly on her petite slim body. It's an open invitation to him. He never notices and never thinks for her like this before. He wanted to go inside and pressed her body into his big broad chest, wanted to touch her soft curves, pressed her, taste her, suck her play with her curves but he controls himself as he knows he cannot do that. Priya then removes her petticoat and inners and goes inside the tub. Seeing her nude skin Ram gave up. He has no controls in his hormones. He felt himself aroused. He wanted to go inside and enjoy the moment with her, crushed her body, wanted to massage her body, wanted to touch her, wanted to feel her curves on his chest, wanted to make love to her, wanted to enter her. He wanted to enjoy with her but he knew he cannot satisfy his hormones. He was fully sweat. He can hear his own heartbeat. He realizes he needs her badly.


After taking lavish bath she came out from the bath tub. She applies shampoo on the hair and runs the shower tap and washes her hair. After head bath she closed the tap and dry herself with the towel. Ram is watching her from outside with a mouth wide open. She looks very hot and sexy. Somehow he controls his feeling. After shower she dries herself and draped towel. Ram was in his own thought when Priya came out. Priya is shocked and shouted but Ram held her and pinned her to the wall and with other hand he closed her mouth.

Priys is terrified and tries to come out from his grip but he held her very tightly.

Ram:- Shh...shhh...Priya...Priya...it's me ...mein hoon Ram...But Priya is strugglling hard to came out from his grip.

Ram:- Im sorry Priya...Im really very very sorry...mein yahan tumhare saat kuch karne nahi aaya tha...please don't make noise...just calm down...Im sorry..sorry..Please don't misunderstood me..sorry...very sorry.

Slowly Priya becomes calmed down.

Priya(angrily):- What the hell are you doing here...tumhari himmat kaise hui muje chune ki...just go away Ram...warna mein chilla dungi...just go...please.

But Ram totally lost in her beauty. He stared at her adoringly and slowly moves towards her face. Priya understood his intention and moves her face aside. He bends towards her and slowly pressed his body into her.

Priya:- Move away Ram. Priya can felt his arousal near her thigh. She becomes very scared. Ram closes the gap and goes very near to her face and whisper "agli baar darwaza teek se bandh karna warna iss baar ki tarah agli baar mein apne aap ko control nahi kar paaunga"...saying this he left her hand and moves back. He smiles evilly at her lick his lower lips and left.

The Movement he left she closed the door and sat on the bed. She tries to figure out what happen just before. She's in big trauma.

Edited by luvsakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. Ram has changed .wow.
Please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
ram has not changed at all. pehli b wo priya ko ek cheej ki tarah treat karta tha to satisfy his sex needs. aur ab bhi wo yehi kar raha hai. so cheap of him. i just hate him.

neel di plzz ...priya ne kabhi b ram ko maaf nahi karna chahiye. let him feel jealous by seeing rajat n priya together.

this is the first time k i dont want raya to be united at all.

hey bhagwaan..priya ko bachao iss ram se. he is only one track minded. he wants priya not to love her whole heratedly but just to satisfy his sexual needs
I HATE THIS RAM.
Edited by iluvusakshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't know what to say.
My hatred for ram has also died.
Lifeless just an animal ram and he doesn't deserve humans to be in his life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update! šŸ‘ can't wait 4 next update.plz update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ram is not changed man he is still animal yar...continue soon

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