RaYa FF : Takdeer UPDATE ON PAGE -147,04/9/15 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Heeelllooo anonymus... 😉

Donee...readnggg... all the 5 parts... :p :p :p
Verryyy weell written... 👏
But raaammm... ufff... 😡 😡
Priyaaa...!!! 😭 😭

Contn soon...!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
superbly written. ye ram ko koi batao yaar k pyaar jabardasti se nahi hota. feeling very very bad for priya. pl continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice... Feeling bad for priya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Priya suffereing will continue till Ram don't take his revenge by marrying her but glad his family are good people. Ram is jerk spoiling her life and torturing her like hell. Why can't she oppose him for his behaviour do continue soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update...
feeling bad for priya..
how can ram behave with her like this..😡😭
very well written...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Preview
its really awesome to see preview of story seems very interesting twists r abt to come RaYa kissing... yet Priya Id not happy hold all goes well with Priya in future Ram seems evil in story hope all get well soon .. moving for update...
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Posted: 10 years ago

OMG RSM is just so evil if Priya reacts she gets scold by Shipra if not RSM make her life hell so sad & unhappy with it hope Ram turns into gud soon right now he Id in gray shade can't guess anything abt him too reserved nature anyway waiting for next do post so on waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago

OMG Ram is just so evil if Priya reacts she gets scold by Shipra if not RSM make her life hell so sad & unhappy with it hope Ram turns into gud soon right now he Id in gray shade can't guess anything abt him too reserved nature anyway waiting for next do post so on waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
neel awesome part...yaar...soo amazing...so ram ist trying to get closer to her... hmmm...and priya is in dilemma...:-( aww... poor soul... let's see what happens next... next soon please
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Posted: 10 years ago
PREVIEW

Ashwin:- Lekin muje karni hai... Priya...tum sirf meri ho...Mein tumhe uss Ram Kapoor se shaadi karne nahi dunga. Tum sirf meri ho.

Priya had enough of his bakwaas and she shouted "Enough Ashwin...Tumhe ek baar mein koi baat samaj mein kyun nahi aati hai. Meri sagai ho chuki hai...Please go Ashwin...mein waise hi disturb hoon muje kisi se koi baat nahi karni...just go from here."

Ashwin becomes so angry but many pairs of eyes are staring at them so without saying anything he left from there. Priya's friends came and asked "Kya baat hai Priya...Ashwin tumse kya keh raha tha...woh itne gusse mein kyun tha.

Priya:- kuch nahi bass chalo yahan se


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shwin:- Priya sach kahu...abb muje tumse koi baat nahi karni. Muje jaana hai kal se final exams start ho rahe hai aur tumhare chakkar mein meine koi bhi taiyaari nahi ki hai. Mein tumhare saat abb aur time waste nahi karna chahta.

Priya:- Stop it Ashwin...tum abhi kahi nahi jaaoge. Muje jo kehna woh mein bolkar hi jaaungi aur tum sunoge.

Ashwin:- Kya sunana hai Priya...tumhari aur Ram ki prem kahani

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P's friend:- abb kya karenge...Ram kapoor toh yahi aa rahe hai aur Priya Ashwin ke saat baat kar rahi hai...agar unhe saat mein dekh liya aur kuch galat samaj liye toh.

Ram saw them and goes near them:- Hii...Priya nahi aayi...aaj uska last exam tha na ...mein usse lene aaya tha.

P's friends look into each other...one said "woh...apne class mein hai...mera matlab hai ki library gayi hai...usse kuch information chahiye thi.

Ram remembers his first kiss with Priya. He thinks"aaj Priya mein pure haq ke saat tumhe kiss karunga". He came out from his thinking and said ok...mein usse wahi mill lunga saying this he smiles and left.

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Ashwin:- nahi priya...aaj mein tumhe nahi chodne wala...saying this he hugs her possessively. Ashwin directed his friends to close the door so that nobody can see them.


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