RaYa SS:Destined to Marry *THREAD#2 PART-23 ON PAGE -67 13/1/16 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi




Thank you so much

Hmm guesses are going good😉
will see

about the poem i asked her only to transalte for me😡😡😡


its getting more intrested with next part😉


😆 you asked her to translate 😆 itni bhi hindi nhi aati 😆 thank god u didn't take Jubine's help this time 🤣
yup she writes so well
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Posted: 10 years ago
@ MaluI waited for your comment . obviously with your guess tooo .. winks

Doc I know u waited for my comment I m so sorry re, couldn't read and comment in time.
will comment now
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 20

Amazing writing one can visualize the scene, priya n her fear, tremble, and mind blowing is the description , where in the one who is makibg priya's life hell by every possible trick trap? I m not understanding why he want her to beg for her dear one's safety, why he want to torture her , why can't he just kill her at once? It's not just the revenge , something more, I feel it's hatred.
Well the silence between ram n priya still continues, the way she was staring him awww 😉 😛 she is just mad abt him 😆
Niharika and Sameer are they too involved in this? How is the security so loose, howcan it be at this critical situation? I am just feeling is niharika ram's own sis? Does sameer has any link with siddhant rey? Is any one who belongs to KM, closrly observing everyone? How is everyone's moves or schedule known to the revenge taker? Omg what a technologyusage by him, priya rushing to the place, the trap, the voice, but ram used to call her kiddo na, how did he address her priya, till reaching the place her mind stopped working , but hearing ram calling her priya , some chord of her mind started acting, thinking she stopped.
so many questions here , when priya's phone is not reachable how did they found ,I mean vik n ram found the place? I understand video clip helped them find the surroundings, by the time thse ppl reach he should have kidnapped her know? Or else he should have used the same technology to change the place location and it's surroundings view na?
stupid guyz he is lolz, criminal will alwayz leave some clue, however intelligent he is.

Omg poor priya n her state, pressurised fully from every end, poor gal landed in hospital.
Superb part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb part. the final scene...priya blushing while explaning vikram k ram never calls her by name. so sweeet yaar. ohhh priya is so innocent. muuhhhaaa.
pl continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
writer is brilliant.
Meine toh socha hi nahi ki yeh reason ho sakta hai😆
happy Priya is fine. I ilke her blushing when she reveal the thing😆
thanks for the update...waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
happy tat priya s alright nw... Very nice update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
as usual the update was beautiful and amazing
continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting!!!!
Love the update!!
Plz continue sooon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am really liking the way story is progressing
Ram feeling so low and helpless by seeing Priya condition but glad she is not very much injured and has been cured and on other hand case is also progressing as they are yet get another clue. Continue soon will be waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
Beautifully written
Waiting for next.

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