RaYa SS:Destined to Marry *THREAD#2 PART-23 ON PAGE -67 13/1/16

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bishop22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#331

Thanks for the update

Waiting for the next update

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rags06

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Posted: 10 years ago

#332

Hayaaa... I am so happy that you cleared the misunderstanding between Raya...

Want Priya to get well soon..

Please continue soon...

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MnSakshifan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#333

Nice update...
Hope to see the villain soon..
Sorry 4 late reply...

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iluvusakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#334

neel di its been a week since u updated this story.
pl jaldi update karo. aur suspense b reavel karo.

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lalmadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#335

Hey Neel,

Started to read this story...

I dont know where I had stopped but remember the accident...lol

So after that,

Part - 16

The whole hospital scenario is well depicted. Priya's state of mind and her confusion is soo beautifully presented. How would it be for a girl who knows somebody wants to kill her, already killed some nearer souls to her...its just soo scary.

Hmm...Priya is missing Ram that too badly...Waiting for his arrival...me too😉😳😳

Hope he is the one at the last part...that u kept in suspense...Going to read that...😛

I know u were constantly sending me pms, but I didnt go there...so much to taken care in my Inbox...

Anyways Thank u for them.

Edited by lalmadhu - 10 years ago

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#336

@ Part - 17

So Ram came back and they both got carried away with the emotions and their advancing is written superbly...just electirfying😉 😳 😆 😆

And alas...Priya begin to feel scared of her hubby's life and stopped him. And then the feelings of Ram...kudos to u girl 👏 👏 👏 The portrayal of how he collected himself...can be sensed by the readers. Amazing work.

FANTASTIC UPDATE. KEEP IT UP.

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#337

@ Part - 18

Awesome update.

Haww...Poor kiddo...loves her hubby a lot...that kiss is soo lovely.

Ram is so much hurt that he talked to Vik about Priya. And he came to know the happenings of the past two days and feeling guilt.

Enough yaar end the MUs.

Its interesting. A lot of new entries...DSP khan and Siddanth...Now what they are upto...😕 Hope one is positive and one is negetive character.

And the flashback is more thrilling...I guess the process is moving fast and we are nearer hopefully.

Going to read the next one.

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#338

@ Part - 19

So ...the Flashback had come to an end. Well portrayed Raya's emotions. And the hide and seek is still going on...

Rishab and Nuts are in KM.

Having a blurred vision of who could it be...lemme see...

Moving on to the next one.

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#339

@ Part - 20

Wooohhh...Amazingly awesommeee...Superbbb...

Dont know how to convey my excitement...lol

Yippee...I guessed that...

Very well executed. Nothing less than a thriller movie.

Hats off to u girl for the narration of the confession till maintaining the suspense.

Muaahhss...

Nooo...only one more to go...haww...I want this to continue till the end. Anyways...

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lalmadhu

@lalmadhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#340

@ Part - 21

Wow...wow...wow...giri. Merely no words to explain how I m feeling right now. U r a superb writer. And I m soo proud of u. Publish this story...its really superb.

And how the investigation is moving on...damn I m loving it...

Just I think the culprit is very much nearer and now the revelation is baaki...

Its lovely that the two are bonding over the hospital bed...lol

Ram is easing her pains...hayee😳 😳 😳

Can imagine priya's answer and Ram's reacion and vik's smile...lage raho baby...

Really Thank u for such a wonderful story and thank u viji too...😛 😆